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By : ajj77sunhawk
  • From ANON - T'Amara on July 05, 2011
    It's 8PM on 5 July, and I'm sitting in my living room, CRYING! Inu, his pain and bravery, the way he shoulders any possible BLAME, just hurts, so hurt. Sess is right, that damn temple got EVERYTHING wrong... And oh, I LOVE Sess in this, he's using a wonderful combo of tough/tender here, so very gentle touching the scared, scarred, hurt human Inu, and so strong talking to him. Inu can not be a Taint to Inuyasha, since every aspect belongs to Sess, and Sess is perfect... which would be hilarious except that in this version, Sess IS fairly perfect (DON'T tell him...). And I love the short tour of the human places in his city, and LOVE Sess's happy pat on his own back. Very nice work indeed!

    And a quick healing for YOU, missed you and hope you get way better soon!



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  • From jdbbrz27 on July 02, 2011
    I loved this one except I was bawling by the end of the chapter. It was so sweet and emotional and loving. I love how your making sure that Sesshomaru treats each aspect of Inuyasha the same and yet differently according to that aspects needs and desires and you are doing a beautiful job at it. All of his aspects have been through so much pain and well horror and Sesshomaru is teaching each one that they are needed and loved and wanted by him no matter what. I can't wait till Sesshomaru teaches and claims him on the next moonless night I'm looking forward to that. I am thrilled that he didn't do that at this time he just wanted to help Inu to relax and start to show him some love and compassion I also loved how you put in that Miroku and Jinenji joined them that would also help to make Inu feel better I can just imagine the three of them trying to make Inu feel more at ease and comfortable at least now hopefully he'll be in much better health mentally and physically from now on.
    Off the story I am relieved to hear that your feeling better and I sincerely hope you continue to feel better.
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  • From ANON - CoastalRose on July 02, 2011
    I am sorry to hear that you're having rl issues. Hope everything is on the mend.

    I enjoy most everything that you write, and always check on your stories when I come to the site. I'm especially intrigued by this one, though, because of the multiple personality aspects of Inuyasha and watching Sesshoumaru figuring them out and trying to help. I love angst (literary angst, anyways) but I'm a sucker for the happily ever after.

    This chapter was pretty brutal...not sure I realized quite how hard the human aspect was on himself. His total sacrifice for the rest of them (and utter lack of hope for himself) had me teary-eyed. So glad that Sess caught on pretty quick & showed him the humans...and that it wasn't neatly resolved that evening...and no sex. Thank goodness. They have a long road to recovery (hopefully) before there's too much of that...this fic is definitely skirting my comfort zones as far as mental health & healthy relationships go...I have faith in you, though, so I'm sticking with you. It's been awesome so far, if a little hard to read occasionally, because of Inuyasha's past...and the awful dungeon scenes. T_T The supporting characters are great, though, and I totally love that Kagome & Kikyo are utter bastards from the temple because, really, that's spot-on IC (at least to me).

    Keep up the great work. I'll be waiting for updates...and I'll try to be a better commenter, too. :D
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  • From uniqueindividual on July 01, 2011
    That was a really cute chapter. Poor Inu, I'm glad Sesshomaru doesn't hate humans in this story. That way, he can accept all of Inuyasha. I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - midnightsweet on June 30, 2011
    i'm glad that you are getting better. we so missed you and your story. take your time we are just glad to have you back.
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  • From Vyper on June 30, 2011
    I love Sesshoumaru in this story. He is still so perfectly in character and yet so gentle with Inuyasha even when he is human. Sesshoumaru seems to love all aspects of Inuyasha and Miroku as his Grandfather is just funny as hell.
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on June 30, 2011
    I like how you can with such subtility describe the action of conforting a hurt Inuyasha !
    Welcome to good health again and thank you for your stories !!!

    A french reader,
    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on April 19, 2011
    Pup is a delight, even if he is a seraph! :D For some reason the line: Cold ice go bye-bye" completely cracked me up. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From midnightsweet on April 16, 2011
    happy b-day.
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  • From ANON - river girl on April 15, 2011
    Gah! I LOVE Pup. Loved this chapter. And that's all I have time to say right now. Thanks!
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  • From jdbbrz27 on April 15, 2011
    yea yea yea ajj7 it's your birthday and I want to thank you for the wonderful gift you gave us all I for one am very grateful. happy happy birthday and many more. I loved pup that was so cute that I giggled right along with pup it was so cute and cuddly and pups true form sounds beautiful as is all of Inuyasha. I hope Sesshomaru can make the human form as happy and content as the rest of them are. And the closeness and possessiveness Sesshomaru has for Inuyasha is well beautiful as well usually possessiveness can be really creepy but in this case it's something that Inuyasha desperately needs someone who will make sure that he is happy and safe and content and who will try very hard to keep anyone who would upset him in anyway away from him I love it. And Miroku is doing as any parent should knowing when to step in and when not to and always keeping young ones on their toes nice work with that so far by the way. Keep writing and with your permission I would like to nominate this one next time they have nominations in Inuyasha's guild oh and you forgot the 'h' in writhing that's the only one I noticed. Poor Kagome I'm wondering if they can save her or not but not really caring to much maybe Kaede will be able to save her but I think Kikyo is to far gone. Love this story again thank you for writing such amazing stories. Oh yeah don't forget to let me know if I can nominate you or not my email is brzachman@yahoo.com
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  • From uniqueindividual on April 15, 2011
    Happy Birthday!!!! Ok, so now I'm feeling a tad bit bad for Kagome...just a bit. BUt I'm still rooting for Inuyasha in the end.
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  • From ladykaa28 on April 15, 2011
    Happy Birthday. All I can say is drama.
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  • From kougaslover on April 15, 2011
    Very well done. I love the relationship developing between the two, how delightfully powerful Sesshomaru is while still being so caring and loving towards Inuyasha. And Inu's clothing sounds excellent, I can only imagine the poor hanyou walking around being subtly teased by the leather crotch gripping him seems so deviously ingenious of Sesshomaru! Great work, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From uniqueindividual on April 06, 2011
    AHHHH I love this story! I hope to read more. What will happen with the evil thing targeting Inuyasha? Will all personalities of Inuyasha gradually form into one? Will Inuyasha and Sesshomaru ever have sex?! Also, this fic REALLY hates on Kagome and Kikyo. But I suppose that is the easiest solution-Inuyasha will have an easier time accepting Sesshomaru if he doesn't love them. I look forward to more!
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