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Reviews for Evil rising, Litch Queen of the western continent

By : dragondeedee3
  • From ANON - Naomi Flemings on September 21, 2014
    This is an amazing story and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Shelly_Webster on June 26, 2013
    Heh, entire story is simply delicious. As for the latest chapter and the whole word cutting play it's kind of poetic, considering that (among others) the kanji for pet, pet dog actually are signs "ai"- love and obviously "inu"-dog. Not that bad for a permanent scar, Gaara manages just fine ;)
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  • From LordYouko on July 26, 2012
    Good job, neko. My favourite line was " Maybe he was a sl** after all but he was Sesshomaru's sl**, and kami he couldn't think of anything else he wanted to be." Your grammar's improved considerably. I found the lemons boring; there was very little dialogue and it seemed like something you just put together in a hurry.

    Felix with a bow and arrow was a surprise. Somehow, I always pictured him with a weapon like Kohaku's sickle and ball and chain or something like that.

    The part with Sesshoumaru telling him to concentrate on the blood rising to his cheeks was very well done. It's a great idea for a demon who does not feel pain.

    The ideas in the chapter were good but next time, put it together better. This one doesn't quite flow.

    -LordYouko
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  • From 6phoenix6flame6 on October 07, 2011
    Omg! Such a good story! I cannot wait for more. I so totally love Felix, all cute and submissive.
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  • From kougaslover on October 02, 2011
    Damn, that was a hell of a chapter. Poor Inu nearly died, I love how Sesshomaru took care of him by the way, there was orgasm denial, and three different sex scenes. I loved Sesshomaru putting the ice into Inuyasha's rear, and binding him by his wrists was just awesome. And Sesshomaru teasing Inu, and not letting him cum, was so excellent. I loved the thought of him begging on hands and knees only to be denied, though I would love the thought of Sesshomaru making Inu service him without allowing Inu his own release. Still, awesome, awesome job, this chapter rocked, and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From Vyper on October 02, 2011
    I loved the last chapter. I only hope that you will have a new one up soon.
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  • From Vyper on July 30, 2011
    Thank you for the Sess/Inu lemon with Sess being a uke. I really think he would enjoy being taken, but I understand. I look forward to the next chapter and I am kind of glad that the two switched bodies. It gave Sesshoumaru a chance to see how fragile Inuyasha can be so that perhaps he will be a little more gentle with his mate once in a while. I also feel bad for Felix. Losing his sister like that has to be hard on the poor neko. I just hope that the sex scenes will be more of just Sess and Inu since although I like Felix I want the brothers to be closer. I also hope at some point Sesshoumaru finds himself falling in love with Inuyasha. Perhaps if Inuyasha were kidnapped or something Sesshoumaru's feelings would show a bit more. Just a thought.
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  • From kitmistress on July 30, 2011
    Love love loved it! poor little fliex i just wanted to hug him! but im super happy that Sesshy let
    Inu bring the little kitty. i have a feeling adorable hot times lay ahead? cant wait to read more
    Kit and oh I'll have to try mixing your drink...sounds good lol

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  • From LordYouko on July 30, 2011
    Awesome!! Felix goes with them so I guess we can expect more delicious Sessshoumaru-Inuyasha-Felix sandwices in the future. I can't bear to read Sess-uke lemons either so I skipped that last part so I'm a little disappointed there was no lemon in this chappie :( But you have us spoiled with a lemon in nearly every chapter so I suppose we can wait patiently for the next one :)Thanks for the review-reply in the beginning! Take care and update soon, please ^.^
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  • From ANON - midnightsweet on July 12, 2011
    very hot
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  • From ANON - hot4u on July 12, 2011
    mmmm i gotta couple of questions..... r u a gurl or a guy? cuz if ur a guy then sweetie u NEED 2 GIVE ME UR ADDRESS AND SOOONNNN!!!and if ur a gurl.......i think i could swing the other way 4 a night or 2. that is if ur willing 2, and r u freaky like this in real life or only when ur writing. oh how i hope u answer both 2 that question cuz whomever is dating u is super lucky. oh...love this chapter btw. i think ima read it again in the future
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  • From LordYouko on July 12, 2011
    AWESOME story!! I think it's one of the best SessInu stories out there. I love how you write Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha....and the lemons, oh my god the lemons! ^-^ H-O-T! And I loved the neko. I was hoping our Inu-chan was kinda going to bundle him up and take him along with them as a pet. It would be so fucking hot to have Inuyasha as seme and uke (I hate Sess-uke stories. Can't stand 'em) Anyway, maybe they'll run into each other later on *wink wink* =^.^= Do keep writing...can't wait for an update. Take care!
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  • From kitmistress on July 11, 2011
    *gigles happily* you are the most amazing sex scene writer ever! I was almost hoping that Inuyasha was allowed to take little Fliex with him ;) Thank you for the update (by the way I love the length of your chapters they are perfect!) Please update again soon
    Kitmistress
    Ps what was the frozen drink Inuyasha had it sounded yummy!
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  • From Vyper on July 11, 2011
    I loved this last chapter. Sesshoumaru is so wickedly wonderful and adding Felix was even hotter. I also liked the fact Miroku got some even if it wasn't in the exact way he wanted. Thank you for the drawings in the e mail by the way. They really brought this chapter to life. I don't think Sango will be drinking that much again.
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  • From ANON - midnightsweet on June 26, 2011
    another great one. next one is going to be sooo much fun
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