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Reviews for Must You Be So Difficult?

By : GizmoTrinket
  • From LycheeQueen on August 27, 2024

    Hello :)

     

    I stumbled over your fic a few days ago and started reading. I already finished this chapter and tbh I really need a break, because... well... I'm kind of exhasuted and am not really sure, if I want to continue or not, so I decided I first want to leave you a review.

    At first, your writing style is... special. I dont mean that in a negative way! But the problem I have is, that your writing is so chaotic, that most of time I didnt really get, what the plot really is about (and I can say, that my English is really good and I have read MUCH English FFs and with no one I had that difficulties like with yours). Most confusing is the bazillions of different kind of communicating, really, I hardly believe that I'm the only one who is completely overwhelmed by this. Why cant the characters speak just normal and use this Link-thingy just now and then? Besides that its really annoying and confusing to read, like I mentioned its really hard to get the plotline and while reading I constantly feel like I'm on an LSD-Trip.
    Especially it also seems like Inu Yashas "Yokai" (besides, the reiki-form for demons is YOKI not Yokai) and he himself are two completely different people, which is also confusing.

    I also dont like the way you portrayed Rin in this fic. For my personal taste, she has way too much presence in the story and in my opinion you have overdrawn her and she makes it hard for me as reader to focus on the Pairing of this fic. Which is bit disappointing. I prefer her as the normal little girl she is and I somehow dont really like her in your fic. To say it without sugarcoating: she is bugging me to death.

    I also dont really get, what happened to Kagome. I read the part more than one time and still dont get it. Ok, WHAT I get is, that she went kind of crazy, but WHY?

    I hope, my review doesnt sound too negative - there is something in your fic, that kept me reading till this chapter, bc you also had very intensive, emotional and deep parts, which really catched me. And thats the reason, why Im a bit torn to continue or not. tbh I hope a bit of Preggo Sessh scenes xD. But especially with my ADHD its very exhausting to follow the storyline with this insane chaos of punctuation marks and I felt really overwhelmed and exhausted and had to make many breaks (usually I swallow a nice fic in mostly one rush)
    I think, I will let settle the whole thing and decide in a few days if I continue or not.

    Greetings
    Lychee


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  • From shikalover_94 on July 28, 2018

    Please write more soon!!! 


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  • From Kit-kit on February 26, 2018

    Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see what Inukimi is going to do now that she is alone with inuyasha 


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  • From naturechild02 on July 13, 2016

    The story is getting so interesting. Please continue!


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  • From Kit-kit on July 06, 2016

    Awesome chapter. I hope sesshomaru mother wouldn't hurt shippo


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  • From ANON - on June 26, 2016

    Very interesting. DIdn't bother to read those codes they were to boring. Story kicks ass. let me know when theres an update. I enjoyed how you manipulated the characters. Hope you don't lose interest or get to busy & forget this story.

     


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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on May 22, 2016
    Do Inuyasha and Sesshomaru mate, were is Shippo is he okay.
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  • From jewl on April 25, 2016
    update soon
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on March 21, 2016
    Awesome chapter. I'm happy that shippo is alive but I'm sad to hear that you are not going to continue the story. I do so hope you change your mind later on.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on March 02, 2016
    Good chapter. Can't wait to find out what happened to shippo
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  • From jewl on February 29, 2016
    Please update soon
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  • From Lady_Demonia on February 09, 2016
    Well... Considering I scourge the internet for any fiction of my otp, I happened to have read this lovely little gym on that other fanfiction site. I Love it so much, I thought I would go ahead and show you the love here to for support! Keep going, I loves it!!
    P.S. I would love to up vote this, but I guess you can't anymore... :(
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  • From naturechild02 on February 01, 2016
    Oh please continue this story!
    It does need an edit but the plot is intriguing. I need more of this delicious story!
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  • From Nescafevh on January 30, 2016
    Very good story so far. However your story will seem to hinge on the next chapter. Keep writing and don't let other people discourage you, I know the feeling. I have a lot of fics I'm doing right now and can feel encouraged or discouraged over the input or lack there off of others. Just keep writing how you want, that's the point. Very good story as I said and I look forwards to your next chapter.
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