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Reviews for Dirty Life

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Laurell-chan on November 01, 2005
    Wow I just read all 29 chapters in two days to have my face fall when I realized it wasn't complete, heh I should really be more observant.
    Well I am loving this story so far, it’s so dark but so realistic and the emotions in it are some of the most powerful I've ever seen written.
    I do have to commend you for your writing talents as well and how well you've shaped the characters. The pace has been slow but because of that it’s believable, so I like how steady things progressed.
    I would love to hear more inner dialogue now that they have a chance to lead a normal life, no doubt that won’t be easy but I’m glad they at least all have the chance at a happy ending.
    I hope you have the chance to update soon and I’m really looking forward to reading more chapters for this. Great job, wonderful story.

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  • From inuficcrzy on October 12, 2005
    thank god you updated! i've been so worried about all of them. how will things go now? i'll bet inu is feeling guilty. poor guy.

    can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - ladyrinremix on October 03, 2005
    I love your story so much I nominated it for a inuyasha_fanfic_fanart guild Best Yaoi award. Good Luck.
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  • From VampireWitch on October 01, 2005
    Been a while since I've reviewed but this is still as well written as ever.
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  • From ANON - Ladykaa28 on September 22, 2005
    I'm sorry that I have not been reveiwing. I forgot what the name of the fic was for a while, but now I'm happy to see that Inuyasha, Rin and Miroku are with Sesshoumaru now. I hope that everyone has a happy ending.
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on September 13, 2005
    Compelling and deep. I'm just amazed
    at the realism in this story. I think Sess
    would have had a harder time getting
    Rin & miro...but other than that...wow.
    I REALLY hope you update soon. PLEASE
    e-mail me when you do. This is a story
    i'm patiently waiting for.

    InuGrrrl
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on September 13, 2005
    I only read the first chap but I wanted to leave a comment.

    That was one of the most heartbreaking, realistic, no holds
    barred fiction I have ever read. It brought tears to my eyes
    because being in NYC, i can't tell you all the times I've seen
    that VERY sight, particularly during the winter.

    I remember one night inparticular...I was with my friend, we were
    coming from seeing a movie. We crossed 14th st/10th ave & saw
    a young guy with tight blue jeans & a motorcycle jacket. He was
    leaning against a streetlight and he looked so very cold...

    I was a bit naive at the time. I told my friend, "it's freezing, why
    is he out here like this?" and she goes "Because he's selling his
    ass." She didn't mean it in a nasty way, that's just the way she
    talks. I swear it took alot for me not to cry.

    Stuff like that breaks my heart. No one, especially a kid should
    have to survive that way. I know i'm rambling :-D
    But I just wanted you to know that you really got to me with this.
    I will definitely leave more reviews as i continue.
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  • From ANON - P.C. on July 30, 2005
    I', so glad you updated! I feel so bad for rin & miroku, but for some reason I didn't mind the incest. I hope everyone can heal with a little help from their loved ones. And I hope kikyo doesn't pop up during the healing process-_-;;
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  • From ANON - blu_wolf on July 25, 2005
    WOW that was some dark shit....update soon
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  • From ANON - Moon&Stars on July 21, 2005
    I really enjoyed that chapter.... I'm so happy that they have gotten away from Naraku..... Is Kagome and Inuyasha relationship really going start now?!? Hope so....
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on July 16, 2005
    chap 5-well after reading the author notes I would just like to commend you on writing outside your comfort zone, as all good authors should. I think your sex scenes M/M are pretty good for you not to know anything about it.

    And this is a real issue and everything I've read so far is very realistic and probably has happened to someone at sometime. On your writing...very very good. it's clear and draws the reader in.

    Good job
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  • From ANON - Kari on July 13, 2005
    2 very wonderful chapters, i was so happy to see that u have updated. i'm gonna be so sad to see this wonderful story end, but alas all good things must come to an end. but well excited to see what's up your sleve next.
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  • From ANON - luckyducky7too on July 12, 2005
    This is a wonderful story. Ok, well not the whole Rin and Miroku being forced to have sex, but the way this story is written. It does have a few grammatical errors, but who doesn't make those? Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - kiiru on July 11, 2005
    I was skimming through stories when I saw this and I thought to my self 'It's a miracle two updates in the same month' The story still has a long way to go... I mean will Inuyasha get with Kagome? Will Rin ever be able to look at Sesshomaru again? Keep updating!
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  • From ANON - makulu on July 11, 2005
    Hi, I love your story, even if it’s kind of very dark. Normally I wouldn’t read it, but something about it captivated me and I’m glad that I didn’t give up hope that one day you will update. Things seem to get better now and I’m seeing a happy end. You too? But it doesn’t matter now, because I will be keeping an eye on this fic anyway. I wonder what will Rin and Sess do now. And I missed Kagome and Sango in this mess, so I’m curious how their next meeting will look like.
    makulu
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