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Reviews for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

By : FaTaLfURy

From ANON - XxSangoxX Not signed in on December 18, 2006
I was touched by Kagome and Inuyasha's goodbyes.

Made me cry.

thank you you bitch!! lol Please don't make this a dark fic! I honestly hope that everything gets resolved and fixed to a happier ending... and NOT a bitterly happy. I understand the writing issue... I have the same problems, I get off track from some of my chapter stories and write little one shots that end up being ... Chapter stories it's insanity. lol

goodluck
Heather.
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From ANON - Danny Girl on December 17, 2006
I LOVE IT,I LOVE IT!!!!!!! I found this story and it took me 2 days to finish,
Damn those interuption, ie. going xmas shopping with family, could not say no
to the family. Anyways finish today I can't wait till the next update. Poor Kagome
I love her she, if anyone need a happy ending she does, her and Inuyasha. Will he
find out about the pup? Why was Midoriko return? Will she expose Kikyo for what
she really is? I see the smile on your face right now saying "Keep reading, Keep reading"
Till next update have a safe and happy holiday ;D
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From ANON - xxx_lady_kagome on December 17, 2006
WOW! I AM ABSOLUTELY HOOKED ON THIS STORY NOW! I LOVE IT!
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From ANON - Rachie on December 09, 2005
As our lips parted, I cradled her against me and spoke softly in her ear.

�I love you� Ka�go�me��

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T.T you made me cry. I got that. When they first met she says "I am Kagome Ka-go-me!" and so they are at the place where they first met and he said that! I dont know if you did it intentionally but......I cried! Damn that Kikyo! I am so glad she is dead in the episodes now! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
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From ANON - kokoro no miko on November 04, 2005
I just found this story, and spent the last day and a half reading it. This has to be both one of the most beautiful and saddest things I've ever read. I've been looking for loopholes for the past couple of chapters, but have to admit that I don't have a clue about how this is going to work out to anybody's satisfaction! Please, please, please put me out of my misery soon (lol)! And (although I haven't read any of them yet) if any other reviewers don't like it, too bad--it is, after all, YOUR story! Take care, and try to update soon! (There's a cookie in it for you if you do....)
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From ANON - jodibetz on November 01, 2005
Hi! You mentioned in your other story, Firebrand that you already finished this one. You just have to post the chapters. How many more chapters are there?
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From ANON - flrsblue on July 19, 2005
i know you didnt end it there! you must continue!!! please!!!!
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From ANON - BirdieBlythe on June 29, 2005
AHHH!! kagome can't stay dead...nooo...*crys* stupid walking clay pot. So happy to know you are feeling better.
Your muse has returned, ne? *gives muse some poky* good muse keep up the good work. Can't wait for you to update...
soon i hope!
Ja Ne!
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From ANON - BirdieBlythe on June 29, 2005
rofl OMG kago's mom was hilarious...asking if she's a virgin and then fainting... how classic... I'm waiting for the
'mom i'm pregnant' LOL so totally rightous. Oh...So glad u wrote this story...Ja Ne see u next review *hugs*
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From ANON - BirdieBlythe on June 29, 2005
IIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! sweet!! such with the cool kick ass fight scene. You go lady...
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From ANON - Birdie on June 29, 2005
Okay this is weird, but i'm gonna put a comment for each chapter as i read it As I just finished chapter one @ 5:25 am.
Chap 1. What the hell was Kagome thinking talking like that to INU!! Be happy with what he's offering you and open your eyes!!! *cough cough* Sry..i just can't stand how they can't see that their love is recipricated. I come on are ppl ready the nieve??
Chap 2. OMG...I've never said a mean thing about Kagome but...stupid bitch! Someone needs to get ahold of a back bone! BTW have i said I really love this story!! Heh. Poor koinu, he cryed (in what he thought was privacy), he never cries... I'm glad you added that bit in there. Bring out a little of the sensitive Inu that we all love.
Chap 3. Ahhh...why must you torture your loving fans!?!?! Poor Kagome if only she knew she could blame it on our cute little koinu, *manical laughter* um...yeah nm. I liked this chappie, even though I thought it was a little short. *frowns* If I promise to buy u ALL the 'ninja' food you want will you be my personal Inu fanfic writter??? *gives puppy eyes* PLZ!
Chap 4. Even though you already put the true chap 4 up...i'm gonna put my two cents in. I think you shoulf go for grey even though her eyes are brown in the anime.
Chap 5(4). Umm...would Inu even know what ambrosia was?? I mean, he's Japanise not greek. heh! And WHAT FUCK!! ARGG...another cliffy....GAHHHHH!!! you're an evil evil person! But don't stop writting The story still rocks ass!!!
Chap 6. *jaw hits the floor* Is there a best sex scene award?? Really I mean like ahhh WOW. *stary eyed* On to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
Chap 7. *drools* Mmmm Inu buck naked! What I wouldn't give for the talent to draw...Every chappie I read, the more and more I like this story. You're such an awesome writter. I wish I had a fration of your skill. *sigh* But I don't. *frowns*
Chap 8. *cough cough* Ah...the life of the newly 'wed'. You just amaze me with your talent at writting. I really am astounded with your ability. Keep up the good work Chica!
Chap 9. *sniffles* I've never cryed this many times reading one fic. Poor kags...great little twist. You're not really gonna let that walking clay pot take Inu to hell with her are you?? *whimpers* please let him stay with Gome. Could you clarify something for me? what does 'Watashi mo hoshii, zutto kimi no soba de�' mean? I'm slightly confused and I hate that!
chap 10. Eeepp! Um gotta a little question...if the inu youki mate for life...does that mean the dead bitch ain't gonna take him to hell??
ummm...okay i'll review more like tomorrow! Ja Ne!!
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From ANON - LC on June 28, 2005
This story is amazing, I've read all of it in 2 days and when I found there wasn't a next chapter button I nearly cried just now. Its breathtaking in every way, and so true to the characters likeness, yet such a unique perspective on the story. The diction you use leaves me pressed against the screen practically I'm so frantic to know what happens next. I literally have to keep my eyes from jumping down too quickly I'm so eager to read more. When I find a fanfic this good, especially when you were new at writing when it began, I'm completly left in awe. The story is so sad and gripping its just amazing. That's the only way I can describe it. I'm hanging on every word, and the bonds you've formed between the characters are so natural and so easy to believe. I love the closeness of the group and how that is the only way they can survive is being together. The feelings you describe from Kagome and Inu Yasha's p.o.v.'s are beautiful. They love each other so much despite the somberness of the situation and the desperation that looms ahead of them. You show perfectly how badly they need each other to live. I love Kagome's reaction to being pregnant, and the way Inu Yasha reacts to her being struck with the arrow. The tenderness and love all these characters share holds this story together so strongly that even after all the horribly sad situations I didn't hesitate for a second not to keep reading. Even if the end is just as painful as the stopping point of this chapter, I have to know what happens. I really hope it isn't though. Please update soon! Wow I didn't mean for this review to be so long hehe, oh well. Please please come back with another chapter soon!!!
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From ANON - impatient on June 22, 2005
This story is really great...

when will we get the ending? It's been months now!
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From ANON - Brandy ford on May 23, 2005
That was a very, no beond good story. wright back

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From ANON - Inus_Kagome_Forever on May 18, 2005
If you can PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE e-mail me when you update! Anyway, are you serious? He could swear???
He knows the difference plus he's holding her?? Wahhhhhhhhh! Its just that Kikyo's a lifeless dead bitch dragged
back from hell that now wants revenge and Inuyasha's life!!! How could he not see that it was that bitch???
wahhhhhhhh! I want Kagome! I thought Kikyo was like gonna die in this chap, cuz you said sianoro kikyo bitch,
well maybe not the bitch, BUT STILL! UPDATE SOON! please please please please please, I'll do the honors of killing her.
Gladly too! :: sharpens knife with evil grin on face:: gladly!

update soon

Laterz
Inus_Kagome_Forever

P.S. I'm too lazy to click the few times and type my user name and password to sign in =D
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