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Reviews for Torn Between Two Brothers

By : inuyashasgirl
  • From ANON - LaTisha on December 16, 2013
    What a great story! Finally one that is completely complete. I loved the you were able to wrap up everyone's parts to a mostly happy ending (Inuyasha is still alone). Keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2006
    It was good, but WHOA! Sensory overload much?! You use waaaaaaay too many adjectives! Yes, it is nice to be able to picture what is going on, but not to that extent!

    Other than that, it was lovely.
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  • From ANON - bitch on December 21, 2005
    ru retarded thats not a kag/sess fic thats a kag/koga and sess/kik fic u dame idot
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  • From ANON - Dark Era on December 20, 2004
    I just red Only Me and saw your name on the Reviw list I noticed that the athors name is missing to I red your some of your storys to an I like this one. I don't rilly like 3somes but this one I liked so If I liked this one and it is a 3some I would say you did a great job. Ignor the name Im not all that Dark or am I?

    Hope you continyou on your storys

    ~___^
    Dark Era
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  • From ANON - DarkAngel on October 30, 2004
    Well hey there long time no write. Sorry it took me so long i was in the middle of some stuff.But now i reveiw.I really l the the story. Lovely writen might i add.I do enjoy reading you stuff.Don't stop writing. I hope that everything is alright. E-mail me some itme ok.
    Ja nee,
    DarkAngel
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  • From ANON - LcT on July 23, 2004
    i thought this story was.....okay? ...the lemon was nice hehe..perverted me. but then storywise, kagome did sound like a slut lol...no offense or anything. just saying..but i enjoyed readin. ^^. ^^
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  • From ANON - sessaru on June 18, 2004
    i hate the end !
    infact i hate kikio!
    and know i ask u why?
    1st why is why sessy so wierd in the ending chs?
    2nd why is why of all people kikio ?
    wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?
    but a greate story none the less:)
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on June 13, 2004
    noenseense or anything, but that was the crapiest ending i have ever read. i thought this was a sess/kag fic, not a sess/kikyo fic! no offense but it sucked!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on June 13, 2004
    no offense or anything, but that was the crapiest ending i have ever read. i thought this was a sess/kag fic, not a sess/kikyo fic! no offense but it sucked!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on June 13, 2004
    no offense or anything, but that was the crapiest ending i have ever read. i thoughis his was a sess/kag fic, not a sess/kikyo fic! no offense but it sucked!
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  • From ANON - DarkWillow. on June 11, 2004
    ...

    Actually I'm just happy it ended. *makes mental note never to read anything with your name attached again*

    This wasn't a Sess/Kag story.. this was a lets warp Sesshoumaru's character, bebase Kagome so that she may find "love" with some random man story.

    All in all their wardrobes were more developed than the characters.

    Why did Sesshoumaru turn from a "nice" guy to a serial rapist. Why did Inuyasha turn from a nice guy to a letch. Kouga and Kikyou? IT's not not final pairings that are the problem.. but that their romances weren't developed. Bah
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  • From ANON - akume on June 11, 2004
    Okay. Let's just say that I'm slightly peeved by how this fic turned out. In don don't get me wrong. I loved that Kagome finally took the initiative and ended this rollar coaster of a relationship with Sesshoumaru, but with Kouga.e one on. You could have at least made her out to be more independant and self-reliant. There plenty of women out there who make excellant single mothers/parents. Though I think from the get go she wasn't one of them, but hey you could have at least waited more than a few days for her tet uet up with a guy. Anyway, the fact of the matter is that I hope your other stories are not as misleading as this one was. Also, if you haven't already done so please change your summary in which you state that this was a Kagome and Sesshoumaru pairing when in fact it wasn't. Thanks once again for storstory. It was entertaining to read at first, but the constant victimization and demoralization of one of my favorite female characters has kinda dampen my mood. On a side note, you should worry more about what is happening around the character(s) rather than what they wear. Who wants to know if they're wearing designer clothes or driving the top of the model cars? I don't.
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  • From ANON - ThatsMsDiva2U on June 10, 2004
    WHAT?! I thought you said this was a Sesshomaru/Kagome story! Not a Sesshomaru/Kikyo and Kagome/Koga story. I honestly didn't care for these past few chapters. I wanted Kagome and Sesshomaru to be together. Without him forcing himself upon her. I hope your other story doesn't turn out like this one had.
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  • From ANON - Kaggurl on June 10, 2004
    ummmm......the story was ok..i loved it until chapter 23 where she met kouga.....i was hoping that kagome would end up with sesshomaru or inuyasha...and im sry but i hated how kikyo got sesshomaru it just seemed a little unreal because sesshomaru claimed that they were though and it didnt make sense that he would go bak on his very word...but ne ways it was ok...i like how u kept us in suspense for soo long...u r a great writer and i hope to b able to read some more of your stories soon..also just wondering would u consider doing a alternate ending where sess or inu get kag....thanks again for writting this wonderful story...-Kaggurl
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  • From ANON - feminafures on June 10, 2004
    phew....what a soap opera you had going there...lol. I'm glad everyone is happy and healthy though...great ending.

    I'm loving your new fic about Kagome astudetudent and Sess as her teacher.

    Good luck with all your fics, if this site doesn't knock me off again, I'll review your other stories as well.

    Ja ne,
    Gia
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