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Reviews for Moonlight's Shadow

By : northstar
  • From ANON - Bee on February 14, 2007
    I'm so happy you updated!! Poor Kagome, she is so kind and sweet, I hope Naruko never breaks her!! It will be interesting to see how their relationship develops. Oh I am so excited!! I can't wait until your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - akasha on February 11, 2007
    i don't mind the tentacle thing... it is after all fiction. sure it maybe squicky to some, but it's not as if that kind of shit really happens. it would be allot more offensive if it happened in real life... but it doesn't! at the very least it mixes up the (sometimes) routine sex scene. the story so far is good, i will be looking forward to another update. : )
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  • From ANON - sweetest on February 04, 2007
    O wow! An update! Thank u! Im so happy u got around to update the story! ^.^ I'm glad you didn't let it go to waste...it had been such a long time since u had updated--for a new chapter. I'm not fond of tentacles, but I suppose I can deal with it.
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  • From ANON - anon on February 03, 2007
    yeah. tentacles are fine. actually, they're really kinky
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  • From ANON - tomoe on February 02, 2007
    Ah, interesting twist! I'm glad to see this updated, I went back and read the rest to remind me how blistering hot and great it is and now I'm left wanting so much more.

    And for the tentacle vote? fjglkfd jgkjgkld YES.
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  • From Qiana on February 02, 2007
    I love it tent are fine with me update soon
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  • From JayFiclover on February 02, 2007
    Yay! Chpater seven at last! I love you so much! You're really a source of inspiration for other authors. My Sailor Moon/Inuyasha crossover story, "Breathless", a Naraku x sERENA X Sesshoumaru love traingle, was partly inspired by this awesome story.
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  • From ANON - momenti on February 01, 2007
    wow. great stroy you have going here. I love it because it's so dark and yet believable in the contxt of canon. When will you update? I hope you do it soon. I can't wait for the next chapter. Your characterizations of every single chracter are spot on. All of their reactions and actions are in character to canon! and Kagome and Naraku are amazingly complex and intrincate. Then there's your overall writing style, which is almost poetic in a sense. I'm struck by your vast expanse of vocabulary, lol.

    This story has seriously gotten me hooked, and I'm not usually one for these types of fics. Thanks for writing this and I hope you update soon. I think the best thing about your story is that it's original and immensely creative. You've portrayed the depth of Naraku's character perfectly- Onigumo's possessive lust, Naraku's own mixed personalities-and made the pairing plausible through that careful depiction.

    As to future chapters, you've gotten a lot of requests about future plot, so I guess I'll make one as well. Please don't make Kagome pregnant. That would just kill everything. Many authors for naraku/kagome pairings or even rape! situations in general love to make the girl pregnant b/c it ties them to the father. That's just taking the easy way out of further characterization. Also, I think it would be fun for naraku to dangle kagome in front of inuyasha...just to show him what he's ignored all this time. lol. anyways, great story. I eagerly anticipate more! update soon!
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  • From ANON - Bee on January 27, 2007
    You are brillant! I love the Kagome/Naraku pairing. I mean technically he is not fully evil now because their essences have intertwined with each other. So this could have a happy ending, if Kagome is able to bring Naraku fully into the light? Please don't change it to Kagome falling for Inuyasha. I think Inuyasha should know what it feels like to lose Kagome. He still chose Kikyo for Kagome, even though, Kagome took her place. Yes Inuyasha needs to feel the lose of Kagome and realise what a beautiful person she was. I love how expressive your writing is. I wonder how Naraku is going to win her over? I mean she will not let him have her again but yet she is marked by him so it will be interesting to see where you take this. Maybe she will get pregnant which will bring out Naraku's vulnerability and protectiveness over her?
    I love your story. It's very unique so please continue to write and I can't wait to see where you take this story!
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  • From WalterKraken101 on January 22, 2007
    I loved your story, a lot.

    I would love to see an ending where a subverted, black Kagome tries to kill Kikyo, but is struck down by Inuyasha, to see her pure soul ascending into the sky. That would be a fitting ending, methinks.
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  • From ANON - Passing_Breeze on January 11, 2007
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  • From ANON - silver kitune on December 31, 2006
    i looove your story but i,ve been waiting for a long time for you to update and so is my friend that i introduced your story to sooo pleaseeee update its really good and its hard sometimes to find naraku and kagome fanfic that i like usually im a sesshy kind of person but you opened a new door for me so pretty please update soon.
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  • From Lasthani on December 30, 2006
    If you could see me ---and if I could do so without sending my laptop tumbling to its doom--- I would give you a standing ovation you brilliant person, you! This chapter displayed some exquisite writing and linguistic skills. Your ability to illustrate the most primal and visceral emotions is moving, and gives the reader the illusion that they are just beneath the skin of the characters you portray, feeling as they feel.

    Also, as a rabid fan girl of the series, I was very pleased with your ability to keep everyone in character and still make things happen.

    Bravo!!!
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  • From ANON - CiraArana on December 28, 2006
    Chapter 6

    Moremoremoremoremoremoremore! And soon!! Please? I'm so curious to see what will happen when Naraku and Kagome meet again! How will her mark affect her? And that blending of souls during sex, what will that do to them? Oh, please, please write more soon. I really enjoyed this story so far (and there I thought I didn't like dark stories ...).
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  • From ANON - CiraArana on December 28, 2006
    Chapter 5

    Poor Kagome. She's so torn and in so much emotional turmoil. You wrote this amazingly well; even though the poor girl changes every other second, the reader (at least this one) is never at a loss and always feels with her.

    I was cheering for her when she told Kikyo off. It was just like Kikyo, to be so righteous and so oh-I'm-so-pure-I-would-never-let-something-like-that-happen-to-me-because-I'm-a-stronger-miko-than-you. Yay for Kagome! She is - or was - stronger than Kikyo. I don't think Kikyo would ever have changed place with Kagome had the situation been different. Self-righteous bitch.

    And Inu Yasha ... well, that reaction was to be expected, wasn't it? First be repulsed, and then be affronted when she doesn't want him to touch her. So like him.

    I'm glad that at least the others aren't too shocked to be supportive. It was kind of cute, the way Sango carried Kagome away (behold! A plot bunny was born in Cira's mind! *argh! not another one*). So, Kagome goes home? Can she? I mean, when she goes home she has to face her family, and at least her mother will know what happened to her. Can Kagome bear that? Well, I will see.
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