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Reviews for Come Sweet Death

By : shylust
  • From ANON - Starshima on November 15, 2013
    This story had my eyes watering... I felt yashas pain... I want to jump with him... DAMNNN WHAT A STORY!!! BUT MANNN WHEN IS THE NEXT CHHAAAPPPPIIEE.. CURSE. U. NARAKU. BASTARD.. INU&KOGA 4EEVVEERR!!!!!
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  • From ANON - I Love Twins on December 14, 2005
    Oh this is a real cool fic! You should write more!

    ^_^^_^ (I Love Twins!)
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  • From ANON - madwriter on September 26, 2005
    MOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Have I mentioned I want more? ^__^ No? Then let me tell you:
    MOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - kyou on May 02, 2005
    update soon
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  • From ANON - Sesshysfavhuman on May 02, 2005
    I love it dont be nervious about this chapter it was great I was about to cry when Kouga kicked Inu out then i Kept reading and seen that it wasn't his doing You are doing good Keep it up and you know i am always here to support you
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  • From ANON - sessrocks on May 01, 2005
    Ohh! So good! update soon!
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  • From kogaluver on May 01, 2005
    Wow! You really threw my for a loop with Kag being a servert and lover of Naraku's. That she's insane and even has her family under a spell. A bit much, I think. But hey! You made it work. And it's still extremely entertaining. Boy I really thought that Koga had used Inu too. Don't scare me like that again. ^_^ Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - KougasLover on May 01, 2005
    I like it, thought the rape part was a little dry.
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on April 22, 2005
    Wow! This story just keeps getting better! You should update so we can find out what happens! ;) Seriously, this is a really good fic.

    My only problem with this is tense. You keep switching between past and present tense. You should pick one and run with it. It's less confusing to the reader.

    Other than that, I love it! I'll be watching for the next update!

    **Zeph**
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on April 19, 2005
    Awww! That was so wonderful! I'm SO glad you're not going to leave this just a one-shot. I can't wait to see the next chapter! Please update soon! Great work!

    **Zeph**
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  • From ANON - Sesshysfavhuman on April 18, 2005
    i am glad you posted here instead of ffn you know how much i love this story its so romantic and sweet Keep up the good work i like the song you picked too
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  • From kogaluver on April 18, 2005
    Really great story. You had me in tears during the first chapter. I'm glad Koga and Inu got together. Fuck Kag and the others! I wonder who the mysterious person is? The lemon was very hot too. The only suggestion I would give you is to either have someone proof read your text or you give it a really good read through. There were a lot needless mistakes that I think you probably could have caught by giving the story a quick once though. ^_^ But very nicely thought out plot.
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  • From ANON - poppy on April 18, 2005
    nice fic, plz continue
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  • From ANON - liz on April 18, 2005
    GOOD STORY, LOVED IT UPDATE SOON, IS THIS AN M-PREG OR A SIMPLE YAOI?
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  • From ANON - inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in) on April 18, 2005
    Wow! this is great. you poted your story here. i am so happy *does a happy dance*, and the lemon was good. keep writing, you're going great.

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