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Reviews for Unforeseen Obstacles

By : Xakana
  • From ANON - Angel on July 24, 2005
    WoW...this story was good...i'm glad i read everything...good job on writing this story.. I love Miroku/Sesshomaru.....
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on July 24, 2005
    That was scary. Poor Shippou and Miroku. That had to be so hard on them both. Ah, Sesshoumaru standing guard in the darkness. He's such a sweetie. *snicker* It was very perceptive of Sesshoumaru to know to usher everyone away from Miroku. What a sad mononoke. Great chapter. I am glad that this story has a few adventures in it.

    Snowfall
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on July 24, 2005
    Chap 25- Ohh leave me at the fence at the mercy of Sesshoumaru ...haha don't you dare save me!! Plus this way I don't fall off that cliff *cringes from earlier falling/thrown over and landing on Jaken.. watches as others fall off*

    This really was a powerful chapter! I had goose bumps at times. I felt so bad for Miroku when he questioned his actions with the bear youkai. Then what he went through with the mononoke. Loved how you explained what/who this was, how it came to be ect. Only one chapter left? *wails*

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  • From ANON - kai on July 24, 2005
    i see what you mean, about sesshy and miroku having a talk and it not really helping ^^ anyways, only one update left??? really? really? it can't end, i want it to go on forever!!! update soon!!
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  • From ANON - bob on July 24, 2005
    aww man i just read a chapter about dead little kids after i got back from a baby shower *shudders* but anyway please continue!! and how long is this story i don't want it to end!!!
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  • From ANON - bob on July 24, 2005
    aww man i just read a chapter about dead little kids after i got back from a baby shower *shudders* but anyway please continue!! and how long is this story i don't want it to end!!!
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  • From ANON - bob on July 24, 2005
    aww man i just read a chapter about dead little kids after i got back from a baby shower *shudders* but anyway please continue!! and how long is this story i don't want it to end!!!
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  • From ANON - shanna on July 23, 2005
    wow! ch 25 is intense!! I feel so sorry for all those kids, and Miroku!! how terrible. I also sorry for miroku's crisis... and Sesshomaru cant help now, can he... *seeing the hope of a mini-lemon fading fast* Seems more action focus than relation focus right now, but hey, it's all good. You are a great writer. at least Rin wasn't hurt in this... and only one more chappie left!!! Waaah, I dont want it to end... but all things do... well, I'm all bouncy now, waitin for the last chappie. *hug hug hug*
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  • From ANON - lilly on July 23, 2005
    I am impressed. Lovely, lovely chapter, with excellent plot and an interesting answer to a problem introduced earlier. The mononoke was unexpected, but an enjoyable twist. I do feel sorry for Miroku, however I (along with Sesshomaru) know that he is strong enough to handle the pressure. As much as I am yearning for a few soft, comfortable moments... you seem to be winding up for the big finale. I know it is going to be wonderful. This has been (and continues to be) such a wonderful story, and I am very glad you shared it with us. Thank you.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on July 23, 2005
    Chap 24- Oh, I loved this line. I could see this in my mind (There were pieces of youkai all around him, but none of it was recognizable.) Ohhs the smells and the blood. I loved Miroku’s response to the wet handprint. I am soooo glad Rin slept through all of this. Aww Inuyasha carrying the both of them, He tries so hard to be all angry and uncaring acting, yet deep down he cares for all his friends. Haha on him saying, “If you want to see me naked”... Ohhs I adored how you went into Miroku’s dark thoughts. Showing that we all them at some point or another .Its good to see him strong *sucking the cat youkai in* and not as some helpless human. *Gasp... You didn’t leave a big cliffy on this chapter, you feeling okey?* This is such a good story. I really am enjoying this, ty for giving us readers something so good to read.

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  • From ANON - youkaiobsessed on July 23, 2005
    Chap 23- *Watches as others fall over cliff, reviewer is glad she’s still tied to the fence* You are the queen of cliffies, you know that?Gosh, I would never do that...

    *Gasp* I thought Miroku was dead! Ohhs the hair from him and Rin in the box. OMR, I kept thinking Miroku’s head was in that box.I'm glad it wasn't. (x_x) Then the end with Sesshoumaru calling his name. !! *Whew another chapter to read*
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  • From ANON - youkaiobsessed on July 23, 2005
    Chap 22- Bad enough you toss me over the cliff, but on top of Jaken? ACK!! The thought of it killed me, before the force of the impact did. Oh, you tied me to a fence *How kinky... nice* Now I'm revived again. I'm glad I'm tied to the fence, as this was a big cliffy chapter.

    I loved Miroku's response about how old Sesshoumaru is, about his age being centuries. That was sweet on Miroku's thoughts about protecting 'his child'. I'm so glad he's feeling that way. I love the relationship that’s building between Rin and Miroku. Now both are missing from camp... big cliffy there, glad I still have more to read. *whew*
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  • From crystaladept on July 23, 2005
    Ch 24:

    Here it is! My logged in reveiw. *laughs* Yeah. You were right. The cutting of the hair was needed, though still harsh.

    *grins* I'm beginning to like this story more and more as the time goes by. Does it get better? Most likely. heh heh heh.

    I long to jump into your fic and cuddle Miroku, tell him that it'll all be better, that the best is yet to come.

    The best would probably be a long romantic night beneath the stars and moon. That'd be so cool.

    Oh... I've added this story to my recommended reading.

    Thankyou for writting such a great story.
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  • From ANON - shanna on July 23, 2005
    Yay! Go, Sesshomaru! I'm so happy that Miroku or Rin didnt die in the chapter. Love love love the update, waaah! only two chappies left... *sniff* I'm sooo tired, emergency at family restaurant (all help left at once... I hate washing dishes X_x) *everything blurry* yaaawn... awesome chhapter, you soo totaly rock. *snuggles up to friendly & soft author and goes to sleep* (mmm, comfy....) *dreams of lil drops of citrus sneeking into story*
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on July 23, 2005
    You are doing an awesome job! My chest was about to explode in my chest! Miroku and Rin gone, Sess staying behind to defend his brother, hair and blood in a box, the screaming wail of grief, a little sweetness with Kag and Inu, and Miroku's darker side. Talk about packed. How am I supposed to write my stuff if I'm spending all my time reading and reviewing yours!? You do spoil us, that's for sure. Wish I could keep up with you. Again, awesome job.

    Oh, I had a kitty named Lilly too!

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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