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Reviews for Artificial Love

By : TLia
  • From wyntermist70 on May 01, 2009
    what in hades fire coooooooome on finish the story its great plllllllease pretty pleeeease
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  • From lifesabitch25 on April 30, 2009
    I love you! You are so funny and right there is no reason you for to have the explain why your character got pregnant,however I do like your explanation. "He was stolen by the fairies, sold on the black market to the aliens, who used him in their interstellar breeding kennel where he was promptly paired with Inuyasha who just happened to be there......."
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  • From ANON - rina on September 26, 2006
    Hey there stranger! Lovely chapter. You've done well, girl. Tied it all up nicely in a pink bow. You've put a lot of work into this story and it shows. Don't listen to morons who say it sucks. I know sucky and this is not it. Along with a genuine grasp of literary skills, you have a gift for wringing emotions out of your readers and yet making them laugh at the same time. Wonderful talent to have. Don't ever lose it.

    By the way, your friend, the one who you recommended Unscripted to, has left me a fabulous review and since I don't know who the hell she is, can you tell her something for me? Tell her THANK YOU for the comments and that I have left her a reply just under her own review. Also tell her there is a HAPPY ENDING to Unscripted and I dearly want her to read it. Could you do that for me? Thanks, hun. You're the best! :) Keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 20, 2006
    *applauds* Damn nice work. It's a shame that it was posted in this time of reconstruction. If I were you, I'd repost when all the dust has settled and this site is back to having its usual full traffic. That way, you'd get more reviews. Anyhoo, I really liked the son Miroku. So so so cute :D. I really feel sorry for the mother, but, I think I see where this is going. *InuYasha takes care of kid and they live happily ever after...hopefully*

    It would be cool if you continued this with Inuyasha taking care of the kid and make it like a comedy and even have Inuyasha dating or something. I dunno...just a dumb idea by me =/
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  • From ANON - taptai on March 15, 2006
    *SOB* ok- so i got that out of my system. Actually I think that was your best chapter so far- awesome writing style and good plot. I really like the kitsune and hope you'll expand on her some more. Keep up the good writing- and try not to blow Inuyasha up- I still need him to finish my story.
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  • From ANON - Jassy on February 17, 2006
    This is the weirdest story I've ever read....Throughout it all I was like, "i'm not gonna cry...you're not gonna cry" I didn't cry for the longest time. It's quite funny. But then, in the last two chapters I was bawling my eyes out!! The little comic you had at the end really helped!!!! xP I looove you!!!!!
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  • From jokhazen on February 03, 2006
    eee... I'm so addicted to this fic i swear!... mu haha... Love your work! Keep up the great job! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hope_Poe26 on February 03, 2006
    I'm sorry to say this... but your story sucks.
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  • From ANON - Sianeka on February 03, 2006
    Still interesting reading. I don't want Miroku to stay dead - post another chapter soon, I don't know where you are going with this yet and I can't wait to find out. (I guess I didn't see the movie you stole your idea from. *grin*)

    Also, your pre- and post- story banter is GREAT! I enjoy that almost as much as I'm enjoying the story.
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  • From ANON - liana on January 30, 2006
    I've read this . . . and I have a problem with it.

    It's a good story, don't get me wrong, and there were parts that were very sad (like Miroku's death) but the problem I have is Miroku getting pregnant.

    You didn't sufficiently explain how he was able to get pregnant. No one asked how he, a HUMAN male with no female productive equipment, was able to become pregnant. Was it because of the potion? Was it because of Inuyasha's demon blood? What? Why was this able to happen when it shouldn't have even happened at all? (In my mind, Inuyasha is more likely to bear a child than Miroku BECAUSE of Inuyasha's demon nature, but that's in my mind. Or if Miroku does end up being the pregnant one, some other change needs to occur . . . like him becoming a half-demon or something. Something that explains why he can conceive.)

    The story does have some potential but I can't get beyond Miroku being pregnant without some sort of questioning taking place or some change happening to the monk.
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 29, 2006
    I feel terribly sorry for Inuyasha, and Miroku, and Sesshoumaru, and Rin, who is stuck with Jaken, and... How could you kill definitely Miroku??? Not even Tenseiga can bring him back now! You're and evil, evil person

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  • From miyu557 on January 27, 2006
    Ah, I love this fic! Sorry abot not reveiwing earlier but i was really really busy. I didn't even have the time to sit with my own fic. However i must say you've done a good job with this one. I loved the inu and miro came togather though a bit saddend my miro's miscarriage. will he be able to become pregnant again? I hope so!

    Anyway I have read till Chapter 9 and found it really interesting. I am about to start the 10th chapter and keeping my fingers crossed in the hopes the miro will not die. Oh the Naraku, I simply wanna strangle him. It was good to know that Kagome and perhaps Sango (?) found their own love interest. So no loose ends eh?

    I am loving the way the story is progressing. so don't stop and don't mind about the lack of reveiws. It's simply because this pairing is not the popluar. but it'll catch up soon. Don't worry so keep wrting.

    Regards
    Miyuki
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  • From ANON - Rina on January 26, 2006
    Aw, very sad. *sniffs* You're good at this angsty stuff alright. Too good I think... But you will put things right eventually, yes? Those cute little creatures need to have some kind of a happier ending. They're just made for each other.

    And thank you once again for your latest reviews! I'm glad you're liking it, even if you do stay up wayyy too late for your own good! I TOLD you it was long...

    Yeah, I wanted to make the actors totally different from the characters they play but still have elements of both in each, if you know what I mean. Haha, glad you can identify with Mike. He's a snappy dresser, all right! ;) I love the fact that he's a hobo punk. He's one of a kind, man.

    Oh yeah, I feel kinda bad for making Ryan have a wet dream but oh well. Guys DO have them. And plus, Mike's been frustrating the hell out of him by being a nasty little tease so it's little wonder he'd have a dream like that. Gotta release the pressure somehow! lol

    As for the lemons, man, you have NO idea how hard it was to keep coming up with new and interesting ways for two guys to get off without actually having sex! Lotta hard work and brain strain there. I'm just lucky that I have a good imagination! So thank you for all your nice comments! Appreciate it.
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  • From ANON - Taptai on January 12, 2006
    Ok- I'm reviewing already. YOU KILLED OFF MIROKU- oh evil. That was just so evil, even though I really liked the act of sacrifice that Inuyasha went through for his mate, what an act of truelly unselfish love- *sigh*
    there, so now that I reviewed can you please let me out of the celler, kagome smells funny.
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  • From ANON - VenusOfHeaven on January 11, 2006
    Miroku... dead... I still don't grasp the concept... Too stunning for my poor (and extremely stressed by the final exams) mind...
    Because you are going to continue, aren't you? If you're not, prepare yourself for the tons of rewiews you'll receive (and not only mine, I must say that this fic sure has a lot of readers)
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