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By : inufan625
  • From ANON - paula jean on September 27, 2006
    pleases up date i want to know what happen's
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  • From ANON - Celest on September 16, 2006
    Continue please. I love this story. Please, please continue quickly. Good job!
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  • From XxSangoxX on September 16, 2006
    you have no idea how much you pissed me off by not adding more!! lol

    I do that to my readers too

    congrats on your new boy!
    life always takes front seat to silly hobbies.

    sadly sometimes.. but i hope you are doing well

    nice cliffy.
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  • From XxSangoxX on August 04, 2006
    Again, I must say that I am fully enjoying this story as well as the others you have written, you create that state of ambiance that draws the reader back and I fully apreciate this.
    The characters are a tad OOC but It is wonderfully pulled off, I hope that you will continue this as soon as you are able!!!

    You and doggieearlover as well as like two others are like my favorite writers on this site... thank you for uplifting my spirit in the fan fiction writer... there are some that just don't get it.

    FINISH SOOOOON lmao

    I'm enthralled!

    Heathe.
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  • From ANON - bettychan on July 22, 2006
    Please update as soon as you can. This story is wonderful. I knew Kikyo was up to no good. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From FarAwayEyes on July 22, 2006
    Poor Inuyasha. He has never taken his mortal night all that well. It's a good thing he made it up to Taro, though. The poor kid probably remembered a little bit from that other guy, the mean one, for just a little bit. At least he knew he shouldn't have been so mean in the end. And going fishing with his papa probably helped! Wow. They actually CLEANED them without being told they had to do it? That's amazing. Kikyo has now entered the realm of super creepy. Regardless of the latest manga arcs, you've given us the Kikyo we used to see buzzing around in the past, shortly after her ressurection. The one who actually tried to kill Kagome, the one who was vindictive. BEFORE Kagome had ever saved her. And on top of it, you've gone and made her a dark miko to boot. She's also actually alive, which adds a flavor to what she's doing. I just have to wonder. Has Kikyo EVER heard of gratitude? For Christ's sake, it was Kagome and Inuyasha's SON who gave her actual life back. What is the matter with her? Sure, she can't have Inuyasha, but move on already. I wonder how she'll be able to hide from Kaede the fact that she has become a dark miko. I can't imagine she'd leave the village and go off. She likes the close proxmity between the village and Inuyasha and Kagome's home. It would seem she's also some how managed to penetrate the seals that Kagome placed on the home to make her feel dirty, or was that because Kikyo still possesses a portion of her soul and Kagome could feel it become tainted? It makes me wonder if Kikyo did that to Kagome, or if it's just a side effect of her going dark. The seals themselves, poor Inuyasha and Kagome had to be freaked out when their son came in and demanded they be put up, not to mention the way he sliced his palm open to help. I wonder if Kikyo will ever realize that Kagome is actually powerful, and that if she should go after Taro that she will not only face another miko, but a mother's wrath. I can't wait to see what you have happen next. This chapter was well done. You gave us Kikyo's transformation while leaving us hanging enough to wait eagerly for the next chapter. I hope she doesn't hurt Taro! And good luck with the baby! We'll be patient about the next chapter...a little.
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  • From XxSangoxX on July 21, 2006
    I STILL LOVE IT! and cannot WAIT until you update it again!

    congrats on baby! is it a boy or girl?
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  • From ANON - Lynn on July 09, 2006
    Oh my god, oh my god! Your wstory is sooo fantastic!!! Kagome's son returning the life to Kikyou... that's... won't InuYasha be tempted? Wouldn't Kikyou try to steel him back? You have to update soon!

    There is only one little thing and it's about Kagome. I think she is stronger exspeially imotionaly. And she haven't used her powers at all. Are they lost or does she still have them?

    Anyways, update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2006
    umm... MORE this is one of my favorite stories...
    OOC or not... I LOVE IT
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  • From FarAwayEyes on July 02, 2006
    I'm liking what you've written so far. I like the way you've had both Inuyasha and Kagome come back together, yet still hold some of the old insecurities of the past. It has been five years without the other, and for them to suddenly profess complete and utter trust without harboring old habits and insecurities, it just would have come off as out of character. The fact that Kikyo still can drive a slight wedge between them, even if Inuyasha is committed, shows how well you portray Kagome. I would think that, even with a child and having Inuyasha take her as his mate, she would still feel somewhat threatened by her mate's past love. I found the abusive husband to be just as digusting as possible. I know some people might say Kagome wouldn't marry him, and in most instances, she wouldn't. You have provided us with a believeable reason. Kagome felt that she could not live at the shrine if her grandfather felt anger towards her and her son, so when a man showed up and was willing to be a father and husband, she took it. She also wanted that father figure for her son, showing how she places her son's needs before her own. The way you portrayed her standing up to him was brilliant. Even though she had realized her mistake and felt shame, she still had some of that strength that she shows all the time. She stood up to him for her son's sake, something that a strong Kagome would do. I love how you've also made InuTaro's character. He's very unique in the fact that he is the Jewel. It's interesting to see how you also took Sesshomaru's logic for hating his brother away. He believed that his father had cheated on his mother, albeit if she were dead at the time, with Inuyasha's mother. To discover that they were in fact, the same, just different incarnations of the same person, that had to be severely disarming. I found that to be unique. Also, how you gave his arm back to him. Most have Kagome or someone who KNOWS Sesshomaru well do this. To have InuTaro do this shows that in the future Sesshomaru might have to rethink several things, including his views of and his relationship with his brother. I will be interested to see how you handle this now alive Kikyo and just what mischief she will cause. The fact that she's actually ALIVE and not dead will certainly change a few things. I do hope, however, that what ever shit she tries to stir up will only make Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship stronger. She should thank both of them for being mates, after all, because if they hadn't, she wouldn't have this second(or is it third. . .or how ever many times she's had her "life" saved) chance at life. Anyways, I'm looking forward to reading the next installment! I hope I haven't babbled on too long!
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  • From ANON - chanda on July 01, 2006
    Yeah, you updated... oh my I see what you mean about the plot thickens... Until next time,
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Nariko on June 26, 2006
    This was such a cute chapter. I really liked it.
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  • From ANON - Heathe (not signed in ^_^) on June 25, 2006
    AWWWE I just adore this story... it is so different from what i have read in the fan fiction string of inuyasha stories before and i truly enjoyed this. I like how OOC Inuyasha gets but then that there are streaks of the INU we all know and love.... this is wonderful...

    i hope you are still updating....
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 25, 2006
    ABSOULUTLY LOVES IT!! write more wench
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  • From ANON - lil_merc_girl on June 23, 2006
    i really liked this chapter. not too much happened, and don't take that the worng way. basically, it was a typical family day. and i think it was necessary to the story.

    i enjoyed when taro helped the little girl, and the talk that kag and inu had.

    for not being beta'ed it didn't hae too many mistakes, a few here or there, but nothing major.

    another good chapter, and i can't wait for the next!
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