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Reviews for Unfettered

By : inufan625
  • From ANON - Diane on December 11, 2005
    I really, really like this & can't wait for more.
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  • From Kaguya on December 11, 2005
    That was beautiful!!! As inu hanyou nikkie said, this story is excellent!!! I'm soo looking forward for the next chapter!!! The meeting father-son was so well written.... GO GO INUYASHA!!! KICK THAT MAN'S @§§!!! GIVE HIM WHAT HE DESERVES!!
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  • From ANON - chanda on December 11, 2005
    Wonderful update, look forward to running into the ex...
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  • From ANON - na on December 11, 2005
    Great Story! -- Looking forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - inu hanyou nikkie on December 11, 2005
    @.@ MY word!!!!!!!! That chapter was very good as well and thanks for answering some of the questions... sweat drops... I can't believed I whimpered for some hints... sighs... LOVE the Story!!! This will be a very good.. no excellent read.... I love how you had Kag and Inu react to meeting and the intro to Taro very nicely done!!! I found that to be very in character given the ages!! I was wondering how little Taro would say after meeting is father for the first time.. I did hope it would be a postive reaction more than if he blamed/questioned Inu for his not being there for everytime Kagome got hurt. Thank you for the postive scene!!!! This is great!!!! LOVE the story... Can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jodibetz on December 11, 2005
    So good, so far. Seems like a nice story. It would help if you add some descriptions such as what clothes they're wearing, How the places look like (some changes were bound to happen after 4 years, ne?). It would help the readers (like me) visualize your story/scenes as you see it.
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  • From ANON - chickadee01 on December 11, 2005
    OMG!!!!! Words fail me! Wonderful with a good plot and you need to update soon. Very, Very soon! What a cliffie! ARGGGG!!! Please hurry.
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  • From ANON - beccapatty on December 11, 2005
    OMG UR STORY IS SOOOOOO GOOD! I really really hope u will continue with it .. and hopefully at a quick pace hehe I like quick updates.. I love what uve got soo far! its jus soo awesome! Please keep up the great work and update again soon!
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  • From ANON - lithium88 on December 10, 2005
    aww, That was sad. Anyway, very well written, I loved it, as I love all your works. ... gosh I'm starting to sound like a broken record. ^_^ Well, I just wanted to say great work. The whole plot of the story seems very intriguing and I'm anticipating for what's next to come! So, once again... till your next update. Take care!
    lith*
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  • From ANON - chanda on December 10, 2005
    Wow great first chapter so sad... Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - inu hanyou nikkie on December 10, 2005
    WOW!! that was a great start!! And the strength Kagome shows in protecting her child!! WOW!! I am Awestruck by this!! I was wondering why Kagome insisted on marrying "him" (.. spits, hisses, snarls ) And Houjou.. snickers... FINALLY gets a clue only after Kagome is pregnant that she never wanted him in that way.. Can one say dense? Yep. I am really enjoy this story.. So little Taro is about 4 years and few months old, right? I have questions : about if Taro has doggie ears.. How is it that no one can see them? Are they too small or like real puppy ears floppy to be seen? Was it a home birth? How did doctors react? Does Taro have Silver hair or Black hair or a mixture of both? I wonder will you be going into more detail as to why Kagome left? Was it that Kikyou showed up and was staying near by? Was it her fear that the well would seal up? Questions, I shrug my shoulders, that probably get answered later on... But doesn't hurt to whimper for a hint.. giggles!!! I like the way you are taking this story... It is a definite change from the usual. WOW again!!!!!!!!! YOU rock on!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!
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  • From ANON - Kaguya on December 10, 2005
    My god.... This story has such a good plot!! If it made cry just in the first chapter, I definatly want to see the other chapters!!! INUYASHA!!! WHERE DA HELL ARE YOU???? KAGOME'S NEEDING YOU!!!
    Please update!!

    PS:I think it was just a bit OOC Kagome marrying that euh... "other man". But everything else is great.
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  • From ANON - azurephoenix on December 10, 2005
    Please update soon...You have a very compelling writing style and imagination
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