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Reviews for The Demon's Promise

By : gumdropz
  • From asherwolves on May 09, 2008
    hi
    i just read the story and thought it was interesting, though there is one problem..lol, i kinda got sick of dragging the bars to the left and right side just so i could read the other sentences...
    could you possibly write them in an A4 size document? This would make it easier not only for all readers but also for yourself that way you know what you're going to write before forgetting them...not implying that you do forget it.

    can't wait for the next one :D maybe you should add like a little audience for the little Kagome and the sex crazed Naraku :D
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  • From on May 22, 2007
    *touches self*

    T3T Ive never reacted in such a way to a fic.

    Good job, please continue!
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  • From beliefinkakashi on March 25, 2007
    WOW. That was amazing! i never thought something involving Naraku and Kagome could be so stimulating. It would be interesting to read about their interactions towards eachother when Kagome has to go back to school, and if there are any boys interested in her and what Naraku would do about that.

    She is only fifteen and is probably getting better sex than other people either her age or older. (that is kind of sad, but for Kagome its a good thing)

    Great fic. I do hope that you update soon, that i do!

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  • From ANON - Lady Kio-tye on December 21, 2006
    WOW!! O.o
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  • From ANON - eva on December 10, 2006
    omg this is amazing. please update agian soon
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 08, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Yashie on December 06, 2006
    hey, i had to copy and past the story to Microsoft word in order to read it. but so far it rocks!



    Signed, Yashie!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2006
    so damn good.please....UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Youkerie on November 23, 2006
    nice fic- nah just the sex is fine- :3 but i dont think anyone would mind some other stuffs for a lil- please update!
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  • From ANON - Trouble on November 06, 2006
    That was Awsome
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  • From ANON - chopping broccoli on October 03, 2006
    This isn't really taboo, incest-wise, considering that they're not really blood siblings. It's taboo only because Kagome is underage... and may I just point out that your lemons are SUPER UBER HOT! FUCK! These are the hottest lemons on the entire site... no, on the entire internet! Srsly, no joke! O_O
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2006
    no!!! keep the hardcore porn!! its the best part, u may just want to add a bit more of the plot to it, u know the whole since theyre bro and sis, wat will happen? blah blah blah...etc.

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  • From ANON - O________O on September 13, 2006
    P.S.

    Who cares about a stupid plot when you can write hardcore lemons like this? Screw the plot! Just have them fuck like bunnies for several more chapters, give them babies (because I think Kagome'd be pregnant with the way Naraku's been fucking her) by now and then marry them off and live happily ever after. You don't need any plot when you have lemon skills like this.
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  • From ANON - O________O on September 13, 2006
    FUCKING SHIT! THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE HOTTEST PIECE OF FICTION IN THE HISTORY OF FANFICTION. ARE YOU GOING TO ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS? I'D FUCKING LOVE TO READ MORE. PLEASE!!!!!!!

    Even if they're step-siblings, they can get married once Kagome becomes legal. *hint* *hint* But please keep the sexorz coming! *grin*
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  • From ANON - angel on September 10, 2006
    wow that was great i love it .. please please please please please update soo i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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