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Reviews for One Trick Too Many

By : demonoffire
  • From adeaneri on June 04, 2007
    wow i like this the fact that kagome can see foir her self that shippou is a brat and only does thingd to get inuyasha sat. if you so choose to, continue to write.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From TheRealHotaru on November 30, 2006
    This was really cute! I got a little confused with the whole licking the boob part though, Is there going to be another part to the story where Kagome wants more then a motherly relasionship with Shippo? I guess I'll just have to keep an eye out.

    Once again, good job!
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  • From ANON - Rin-chan on November 20, 2006
    OUCH that was hard on shippo.

    He deserves it though.

    I'm writing a similar story actualy.

    looks like the "Fairness" challenge woke a lot of people up.

    My only real complaints are

    The breast licking seemed a LITTLE silly.

    The spelling has room for improvement.
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  • From ANON - kitsunechan on November 17, 2006
    Hmm... interesting. But is this going to be the only chapter?
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  • From ANON - fire on November 15, 2006
    as a mother I can only say hurrah. Very well written a few mistakes in spelling but very comprehensive
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