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Reviews for Ardent Trust

By : Zeryna
  • From TwistedJester on December 29, 2007
    I love this story and would like to read more. Please update soon!
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  • From OdietAmo on August 08, 2007
    Wow, I love Sesshomaru's explanation for her feelings. Hope you update soon, this sounds like it could be good.
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  • From Qiana on March 02, 2007
    Please add ch 4 soon
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  • From Qiana on March 02, 2007
    This is very good
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  • From silverwing on February 12, 2007
    I read this story over, and I must say I am impressed. I don't usually like to read fanfiction. I am more of a writer than a reader. But your story structure, ability to keep them in character, and use of simple literature and vocabularly to paint a vivid scene is staggering. Though I hate to admit it, in some aspects of writing, you are better than I. You should know, it takes a great deal of effort for me to admit that.

    This story, I actually look foreward to seeing how it ends. Good work. And the humor from this phrase at the end of chapter 3:

    ‘I was being sarcastic, that was complete bullshit.’

    ...had me laughing for a good few minutes. The ability to tie in humor into such a serious moment as a young girl asking about the ways of the world, is quite ingenious, yet it didn't spoil the moment. Something I am curious to know. Do you have to work hard for your results, or are you gifted with natural talent?
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  • From adeaneri on February 09, 2007
    i like sesshy rin paring, so i can read this as long as you update often.
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  • From fetishYoukai on February 08, 2007
    Your writing is quite good, I'm enjoying this story.
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