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By : SayuriNakamura
  • From kagekoorime19 on January 30, 2008
    oh i like please update soon is this on fanfiction?
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  • From madmiko on January 29, 2008
    Oh, YAY!!! I was so happy to see a new chapter for this up!! And it was a great one, too. ^_^ I have to say I'm enjoying Hiei's thoughts and feelings. You're doing such a great job writing him. His thoughts that he will dog her steps for years if he has to in order to find out what she did so she or anyone else will never be able to do it to him again was perfect. AND he feels like he is being tied to her. Veeerrry interesting. I love it! ^_^

    I was intrigued that he chose to follow Kuwabara to see what he could find out from her mother instead of going into the Makai. I love it that her mother still thought of Sesshoumaru as the enemy. They got a very different picture of Inuyasha than the other two did. Her mother doesn't know ... that's rather sad, but it's really going to be more sad if/when she finds out what happened. (Speaking of which, -- as soon as I finish typing this review, I'm going back to read the whole thing over. ^_^)

    I LOVE the bloodstains on the Tetsusaiga! That was such a great touch! Brilliant! And I was stunned by Inuyasha's accusation that Yusuke and Kurama were her new lovers. It sounds like he's been living in a dream world, deluding himself about her and his own feelings all these years. "I am her first love." "She will not cast me aside." Holy smoley, you're setting up an awesome confrontation sometime in the future, aren't you? I can't wait!! *claps hands in glee* But even at his declaration, they could tell he didn't return those feelings. I was so happy to hear Yusuke's assurance to Sesshoumaru that they wouldn't let Inu get near her.

    Loved the brief mention of Kouga! This was just an awesome chapter, and you've got me all hyped up for MORE!! I'm glad Kagome impressed Genkai with her determination to go ahead and work on controlling her powers so she wouldn't hurt anyone. That's the Kagome we all know and love. *sigh* I will be waiting most anxiously for your next update.
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  • From rowenahellena on January 20, 2008
    I love it and you must update soon
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  • From madmiko on October 16, 2007
    This is just such a wonderful story! I had to go back and read it again. I can't wait until you have more of it for us!!
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  • From Methos on July 20, 2007
    Wow this was a great story. Poor Kagome though, all that she's gone through and still more to come!! I can't wait for the next chapter soon.
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  • From Chaosharbinger on June 25, 2007
    This is an awesome fic. I really hope that your muse holds up :-). Keep up the great work and please update soon!
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  • From Vyncent on June 18, 2007
    Please update soon! Great story and very gripping.
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  • From Patty530 on June 15, 2007
    Thank You So Much! This is a wonderful story. Pairings? Kurama and Kagome would be nice. She doesen't need another hot head like Inuyasha. That's what she would get with Hiei. After all she's been through, she needs the charm and the calmness that would come with Kurama. Hiei could use a friend though. Can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From madmiko on June 15, 2007
    Awesomely-awesome! I love the way you're moving the story along. You've already cemented the growing friendships Kagome has with three of the team members, and set up a to-die-for situation with Hiei. Heh heh! I really, really loved Sesshoumaru being brought in to help put her soul back in her body. Your explanation made perfect sense. And Shippou was just great! Hmmm. I'm dying to know what has become of Inuyasha that Sess and Shippou didn't want her to know yet. But, once Inu finds out she's alive, I'm guessing he'll be knocking down her door to see her, huh? That's going to be so good!! I'm really loving Hiei's thoughts and reactions to her. Having him leave as soon as she revived was a nice touch. But he missed out on a lot of info about her that way. And now her thoughts are overwhelming him, huh? I'm rubbing my hands together in glee and anticipation! Hee hee hee! I have a feeling he and Kagome are both going to find what they're searching for in each other, ne? I sure hope so! Thanks so much for the terrific update! I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From Shanalir on June 15, 2007
    Great new chapter! Can't wait to see how it progresses from here.
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  • From madmiko on April 13, 2007
    That was a terrific chapter!!! Of course, as a faithful Hiei/Kag fan, I absolutely loved all of the time you devoted to Hiei and his thoughts and reactions. I think you pegged him really well. He's just as soon kill her as have to deal with her, yet he feels a strong sense of being indebted to her -- how very uncomfortable for him. And the whole part with the dragon was fantastic! I loved the way it was looking her over, and that they recognized a sort of kinship in each other's eyes. And it was great that Hiei got fed up and called it back when it wrapped around her. I love the pull of his youkai towards her -- even though it's more of an obligation-thing right now, but the way it recognized her loneliness was nice, too. Loved the tidbits about Hiei's focus on his goals to escape that himself. I know you could still go many ways with this, but this is a completely perfect set-up for them to get together. There are just so many ways they can help each other and find the love and acceptance they both crave. (And who better than Hiei could face down Inuyasha when the time comes?) It was nice that Kurama has been visitng and being kind, but I noticed Youko wasn't mentioned. I still love the way you have separated their personalites so completely in this story -- it's such an intriguing touch. And Yusuke's compassion for Kag was great. He would certainly know better than anyone her anxiety and anxiousness to get back into her body. I love the way you've written her sorrow and guilt over the deaths caused by the jewel and Midoriko's effort to purify it. For some reason, she just makes such a great angst-ridden heroine, haunted by her perceived weaknesses. And I really, really loved Shippou and Sesshoumaru's appearance!! The tidbit about Rin was so poignant, and the way Sess was grateful for Kag asking him to raise Shippou was just wonderful. Loved Shippou's little bit of info on Inuyasha, too. Oh, this is just SO GOOD!!! You've done such an awesome job with laying the foundation for her new friendships/relationships, -- I am just so excited about it all!! And I can't wait to see how she will react and interact with those from her past, too. It's been so great to read the different things the YYH gang have learned about her, and the things they wonder about. I am on the edge of my seat!
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  • From WhiteKitsuneShiva on April 13, 2007
    this story is so blazin! I hope u continue and update soon. PS-Kurama/Yusuke/Kagome/Hiei, she needs ALOT of love in her life.
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  • From cowgirlkitten2000 on April 13, 2007
    great story so far. i cant wait to read more of this.
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  • From kookookitty on April 12, 2007
    sooo, you have set up the whole reikai rantei and even sesshomaru to have a fondness for kagome...

    this is very captivating, intelligent and interesting.

    can't wait to see the old gang again so i am eagerly anticipating future installments.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From Draconayzia on April 12, 2007
    I am SO glad this story has been updated. I only just started reading in this section but I'm really glad I did. I like how you handled the time switches and everything. And a certainblack-haired midget needs to get his head out of his ass. XD Can't wait for the next part. Keep up the good work!
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