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By : SayuriNakamura
  • From Draconayzia on April 03, 2007
    Whoa. Loving this story so far. I can't wait to see what you do with this. Please do update again soon. ^^
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  • From honZeldaFitz on March 01, 2007
    This is a great fic so far. Kagome's body becoming tainted was an unexpected twist. I love that Kuwabara sensed her and how you've portrayed him as a well rounded character, rather than just the fool. Even Hiei's repressed affection for his friends comes out. Kurama's concern and Youko's mild curiosity (but doesn't really CARE -- I love that) is a nice play between the two personalities. A thousand-year-old demon isn't likely to lose his senses over a human woman, no matter how pretty. I like most pairings, so I won't put in an opinion there. I'd rather see where the story leads you. I can't believe I just discovered this fic, but I'm happy I did. I'll definitely be watching this one. Nicely done!
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  • From kookookitty on February 27, 2007
    wow! exciting chapter!

    i am not one to influence an author as to the romantic direction a story will go because i prefer to find out as i read the story.

    much appreciation for updating so quickly!
    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From madmiko on February 26, 2007
    Brilliant!! That was masterfully done. I love the way Hiei just happened to be there, and the way Kagome saved him. Did he catch the part when Midoriko mentioned that she saved him when she dropped the Spirit Egg? And, I am completely loving the way you had Kurama want to comfort her, while Youko really didn't care at all. I don't think I've ever seen anyone portray them like this. It's fascinating. It's sad about the all the medical personnel being purified -- poor Kagome's going to feel guilty about that, isn't she? I was so surprised when the person Koenma contacted was Midoriko, but it made perfect sense. I loved your explanation for what happened. Again: it was completely logical that without her pure soul, the demonic souls within the Shikon would gain power. I liked the revelation of Inuyasha having altered events by being distracted by Kikyou's undead manifestation. He must still be alive, huh, if he's going to realize what a mistake he made. I can't wait to see what this other way for her to be revived is. I love it that Midoriko recognized hiei and Kurama as future allies and helpers for Kagome. I will continue to hope that Hiei will be the one to heal her poor wounded heart. (Just can't get enough of that pairing.) I really like the way you have already set her up with 3 different experiences/relationships with 3 of the detectives. (Kazuma's companionship, Kurama's sympathy/curiosity, and Hiei's ? -- though she protected him and he felt that strange peace and slight familiarity in her presence -- yes? Yes? Sounds like a great beginning to me. *hint hint*) ;) Now she needs to get to know Yusuke, too, ne? And Koenma will have to fill them all in on her. I like the way he had such a large file on her, and that he gathered information from Sango and Miroku's souls on her. Nice touch!! I can't wait for MORE! I think this is my favorite story I'm following right now. You're terrific!
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  • From Neocrystal on February 26, 2007
    I SAY YOU SHOULD MAKE THIS A KAGOME/KURAMA!!!!!! either that or a hiei/kagome/kurama!!! Update soon!!!
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  • From Demonpreistess16 on February 25, 2007
    I'm hoping to see a Karama/ kagome paring please!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Demonpreistess16 on February 25, 2007
    this is really cool it's a very different point of veiw hope to read more soon!!!
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  • From Shanalir on February 25, 2007
    Great story! Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From swasdiva on February 22, 2007
    AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! HOLY CRRRRAAAP!PP!!!!!!!!! That is a cliffhanger from HADES!!!!!!

    Needless to say, I'm quite enamoured of this fic. As far as pairings go, I'm your standard Kurama/Kagome/Youko shipper, but this story is so well-rounded I don't mind where you take it. Your writing is solid and engaging, and the plot is quick and inventive. This story has insight, emotion and development. It's pure fabulousness so far! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From madmiko on February 22, 2007
    Wicked cliffy! (But SO nicely done!) I am absolutely loving this. I love the easy friendship Kagome and Kuwabara are already establishing. I would like to see him take her in under his wing as a 'little sister.' It would be fun to have him objecting to Hiei's pursuing her (and thinking Hiei isn't good enough for her) the same way Hiei acts about him wanting to be with Yukina. Poetic justice, and also a way for Hiei to come to a better understanding of and respect for Kuwabara. (Obviously, I'm hoping for a Hiei/Kagome romance -- I'm always captivated by that pairing: two lonely souls, one who thinks he doesn't need or want others to love him and one who gives and loves too much. They're just so perfect for each other. *sigh*) I love the way you are writing Shuuichi and Youko. Your perspective on their relationship/situation is SO good and interesting. Shuuichi wants to find out what happened and Youko, while curious, doesn't really CARE. Nice. And, of course, I am dying to find out what happened. Was Kagome's egg reacting to her feelings of insecurity and unworthiness, or to that tiny resentful thought she had? (Of course, she imediately chastised herself for it.) What happened to her body?!!? I was definitely hoping she would get to come back as herself. And what could have happened that had Botan talking about ALL the bodies? I am on the edge of my seat! I will be checking this story every day -- several times -- until the next chapter is up!! This story has it all, and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From babygirl20008 on February 22, 2007
    Great job. I can't wait to see what happen next. I do hope that you update again soon.
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  • From MIAMax on February 22, 2007
    Please update soon, i truly hote to see more soon!
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  • From TenshiYoukai on February 21, 2007
    I am so looking forward to you updating this story!! It is very interesting. I really do hope though that this doesn't end up being a Kagome/Kuwabara. I don't know why, but I just don't like his character that much. However, I do love your writing and can't wait to see where you take us readers with this! Happy writing and update soon!!!
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  • From motacristi on February 19, 2007
    I would love to keep reading this story, can't wait to see what's going to happen
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  • From sendosha on February 17, 2007
    This is really good. About the pairings, if you havenīt decided yet how about pairing her with Kazuma? It would fit after this wonderful chapter and while Iīm a die-hard Kagome/Hiei fan Kazuma is a great guy who is always underestimated or only the "dumb" one. The only woman worth anything in the YuYu-group is his own sister. Yukina is absolutely boring, Botan is annoying, Keiko bitchy and the one I canīt stand at all. Well, itīs your story and Iīm curious to see what you have planned.
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