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Reviews for Too Much Time On Their Hands

By : Vyper
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  • From Vyper on June 19, 2009
    The reason that there was so much confusion is because Inuyasha stole the original jewel. He killed off the family and created this illusion confusing his brother before Sesshoumaru could act. The jewel can grant any wish and therefore Inuyasha made all this up knowing ahead of time what his brother was going to do and was indeed heartbroken by it. He had already wished everything he wanted to and in the end taught Sesshoumaru a valuable lesson. I guess that part can get confusing but it will make sense I hope for you as you read along.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on June 13, 2009
    I was reading this story when I got to a chapter that made no sense. How in the world did Seshomaru mak Inuyasha a demon with a fake jewel? It made absolutly no sense! Also how could seshomaru not know that he killed humans and not demons? Explain all this please!
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on March 13, 2009
    i can't even begin to tell u how many times i started to read this story and didn't. u almost lost me at chapters 6 and 7. thankfully i've gotten to know ur writing style and kept up with it. (currently at chapter 12. i know. thought i'd be farther along.) u r so d*** random and i love that. it starts to get a little boring being able to predict where a story may be going. u r the most random author i have ever met that can make this work. neways. tnks for inspiring me to finally read this. as always i look forwards to ur latest updates. i read my fair wolfy. i'm curious what a sequel would be like. again completely up to u. are there any fav stories u like or authors. i have several yaoi i like and a few others that fall under different pairings; not always romance. sorry for rambling. bye
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  • From Pumpkinpi on September 01, 2008
    I read chapter one of your story so far and you are very creative. The story is kinky and funny. I like it.

    Take Care, pumpkinpi
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  • From ANON - jujubee on July 09, 2008
    I think InuYasha is a dramatic uke(even when he tops occasionally). He willing to give Sesshomaru complete control to forget about the pain he suffered in the past even though it won't ever fully go away.
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  • From wolfluv on April 15, 2008
    Sounds like Sess is going throug h mid-life crisisi again... I wonder will he disaprear for a while and make it so no one finds him so he can find himself once again??? Or will this push Inu over the edge and cause him to do that instead???
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  • From wolfluv on April 06, 2008
    THANK YOU!!! you make me feel a little vinticated for Inu! yea yea I know sounds weird but you're just so good!!!

    THANK YOU FOR UPDATING
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  • From wolfluv on April 05, 2008
    I cried almost this entire chapter it made me feel like some told me I had only 6 months to live but it's great for plot devlopement though.

    THANK YOU FOR UPDATING...
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  • From 66Hiei08 on April 04, 2008
    I guess too much time can drive even demons insane. This is the feeling that I get sometimes while I'm reading this. Not meant to be an insult if that's not what you're trying to portray in this work. :o/
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  • From wolfluv on February 14, 2008
    THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH! The last two chapters were great as usual but to throw in Michael having Inu's baby that just put a huge SMILE on my face it was unexpected and just just ...... I can't discribe!

    I loved the whole boardroom meeting and the phone call with Inu and Kouga! That made me laugh and still is. Poor Fluffy don't tell him I said that though. You are the BEST!!!

    THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!
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  • From wolfluv on February 12, 2008
    THANK YOU!!!

    I am so loving this story and the beautiful mind that come up with it!!! Also thank you for giving Inu and Michael some much needed quality time together can't wait to read what happens next!!!

    THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!
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  • From Vyper on February 11, 2008
    I didn't stop because of my dear fans giving me advice. I have been busy and needed a break. Temporary writers block also became an issue even with the assistance of others. I must be inspired and now I am. I will add a lemon or lime down the trail of chapters here soon. I know that is what all of you deviants are salivating over and it will happen soon. Patience is a torment that I love to offer you since waiting is so very disturbing, but is worth it if you live all nine lives baiting your own curiosity.

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  • From wolfluv on February 10, 2008
    To be honest I panicked I thought that maybe it was because of me that you might have stopped writing this story. I am happy that you've updated and that you haven't let anyone have Michael yet... I still think Inu should be his first since his time with Sess but I am not you the writer.

    You write wonderfully and I truly enjoy this story and I look every day to see if you've up dated. THANK YOU FOR UPDATING.
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  • From wolfluv on January 22, 2008
    LOVE HOW THAT MIND OF YOURS WORKS!!!! ALTHOUGH I THINK INU SHOULD GET FIRST CRACK AT MICHAEL NOT KOUGA BUT I'M SOOOOOOOO HAPPY THAT JACKIE AND INU ARE STILL GREAT FRIENDS. I AM TOTALLY THRILLED THAT INU GOT JUMPED BY SESS AND VISE VERSA!!!

    I WOULDN'T MIND SEEING MICHAEL TRYING TO SEDUCE INU.... ALTHOUGH I SEE SESS GETTING THAT OPITION FIRST THOUGH MAYBE INU SEEING THAT MAY CAUSE A LITTLE JEALOUSY??? WHICH WILL MAKE MICHEAL HAVE TO WORK TO GET INU???? BECAUSE YOU SAID YOURSELF SESS STILL LOVES MICHAEL AND VISE VERSA BUT MICHAEL WANTS INU BECAUSE HE BARELY HAD A TASTE OF INU AND IT LOOKS LIKE MAYBE MICHAEL MAY WANT THAT INNOCENSE THAT HE ONCE SAW THAT EVEN SESS STILL SEE NOW....

    THANK YOU FOR UPDATING SO QUICKLEY AGAIN!!! I LOOK FORWARD TO SEE WHAT YOUR BEAUTIFUL MIND HAS IN STORE NEXT!!!!
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