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Reviews for Mending a broken heart

By : twilight313
  • From ANON - Grace on February 15, 2008
    WAH?!?! You write so beautifully that I cannot understand why you would want to stop it there. Great chapter (except for the ending) but I hope you continue.
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  • From ANON - deleteriousmouse on February 14, 2008
    It would be terribly unfair to end your story now. Mostly because it would make the title and summary of your story very misleading. This story is called MENDING a broken heart, not how our favorite fox kills our favorite miko. And the summary does indicate that he will try and make it up to her in the future. As a reader who's been waiting a long time for an update, this was a... dissapointing chapter. You are a good writer, so please continue this story.
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  • From ANON - Tima on February 14, 2008
    I loved your story. I swear i almost cried at the end. Could you make a sequel if you don't continue on the first story? It would be cool if Kagome and Youko met up and she turned him down for hiei or Koenma. That would be awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Neo-Crystal on February 14, 2008
    DON'T YOU DARE END IT THERE!! I'LL HAVE TO BITE YOUR HEAD OFF! you got to have the story go further and into kagome's time! she should have some scares and kurama has to make up with her!!!! and rebuild her soul and heart back up! PLZ PLZ DON'T END IT THERE!! YOU LEFT TO MUCH OPEN!!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on February 14, 2008
    Please continue!
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  • From goldenstar6884 on February 14, 2008
    Okay, firstly, thank god you updated! I've been waiting since forever :) Secondly...YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! There are too many loose ends. It would be so horrible to not have a proper ending. Please consider it.
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  • From ANON - Lillian9 on February 14, 2008
    It wouldn´t be right to end it here. The end was too abrupt.
    This story sounds more like an epitome than an actual story if you really end it here. The reader doesn´t get to know anything.
    While the chapters you already wrote are beautifully written and a really interesting BEGINNING of a story the end seems overhasty to me.
    PLEASE do continue the story/write a sequel. You just can´t leave your readers in the lurch.
    This sounds much too promising to let it end here!
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  • From ANON - lost child on February 14, 2008
    okay, you have to continue this. That is a mean way to leave it, it would make a sad a beautiful ending to a story, but it not right with how good this story is going. you should have Youko think it over for 500yrs and then find Kagome again in time to save her life...make him repair her broken heart...gotta do that, with your writting skills it would be so beautiful to read
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  • From PhoenixWolf on February 13, 2008
    PLEASE please continue with the story! It would be terribly cruel of you to end it here!

    MORE PLEASE!!!

    Until we meet again.
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  • From ANON - mel on January 05, 2008
    I really like this story. I really look forward to finding out why Youko dumped Kagome. Please update soon!
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  • From SammyD on January 04, 2008
    More! More!!! Please I must find out what happens next!!!
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  • From goldenstar6884 on December 09, 2007
    Did Kagome die? I mean you were kind of non-specific about her. It doesn't sound like she was in that great of shape when she fell into the well with Ship. Update ASAP!
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  • From goldenstar6884 on December 09, 2007
    I like the premise.
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  • From ANON - Grace on November 28, 2007
    um...update, update, update!
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  • From akiyome on November 12, 2007
    write another chapter i beg of you(gets down aon hands and knees and grabs thr front of your pants leg while giving you the puppy dog pout)...........................PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER PPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I LOVE THIS FANFIC(suddenly looks around) Oh no i gotta go the evil bunnies have come( army of evil pink bunnies coming down the road) AHHHHHHH HELP ME(runs away)
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