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Reviews for Mending a broken heart

By : twilight313
  • From ANON - rage on November 07, 2007
    damn this is good, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Deliah on October 30, 2007
    What happened to Inuyasha? Is he even going to be in the story? If Koga heard, he must've heard right? Well, it was well written!
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  • From akume on October 28, 2007
    Yay! Glad you decided to add another chapter. I can't wait for when Kurama meets Kagome in the future. Until then. Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on October 20, 2007
    Yippie! *does happy dance* Another chapter! And it will be interesting to find out why Youko ditched Kagome, though I have a rough idea .... which I will keep to myself for the moment.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Until we meet again.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on October 19, 2007
    He...and then...Yomi....and celebrating...? Oh my gosh! I can't believe we are still left with all of these burning questions! Good second chapter, and I can't wait for the third. Hopefully, it will be up soon...? :)
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  • From ANON - Amanda on October 19, 2007
    Youko was so out of line! I cannot believe he would do such a thing. I am so disappointed in him right now. He better have an awesome reason to totally disregard her feelings or else I am going to be very angry. Good first chapter though! Now on to the second!
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  • From ANON - neo-crystal on October 19, 2007
    took you long enough! Is Youko goona see all the blood left behind by kagome? Will kagome has scars on her body? PLZ UPDATE SOONER THIS TIME!!!
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  • From walnut43 on October 17, 2007
    I think my heart is breaking! Youko was so cruel to Kagome in the first chapter. I am glad Kouga came to her defense though, and you know it's bad when Kuronue doesn't agree with Youko. BTW, where is Inuyasha? Will he be making an appearance later?
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  • From madmiko on October 17, 2007
    I like the idea of Kuronue disagreeing with him over him breaking his vow/relinquishing his claim on Kagome. Hmmm. What could those "matters beyond his control" be? Good for Kouga for sticking up for her, too! So, where IS Inuyasha, btw?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2007
    YAY you updated please keep doing so. Your stories the best
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  • From MySecretsOut on October 16, 2007
    AHHHH!!! I've been waiting since forever for you to update! I'm a little confused about the whole Yomi thing, but I guess I'll just have to wait and see where you take it from here. OMG, when is Kagome going to come back into the picture? I'm still waiting for her to kick Youko's butt!
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  • From akiyome on September 22, 2007
    Are you going to write another chapter, If you are please do I've been wairing for a new chapter for this story so please please(gets on hands and knees) write another chapter
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  • From MysticAngel77 on August 22, 2007
    Very nice! I enjoyed the flashback sequence style since it gets a nice summary of events in without being too "outline"ish. It's also a good idea that you had to put in that a small part of her knew he was wrong, and she had that odd sense of calm (everyone thats ever had their heart broken can vouche for that being true). I hope you haven't lost interest in this story because it has tons of potential! I'm guessing chapter 2 will have some introduction to Kurama and possibly how Kagome does getting to her side of the well, ie hospital trip for her wounds, etc. Would be interesting if he came across her in the hospital or anything besides the typical "koenma sends his team to investigate the time traveler / disturbance / appearance of the skikon jewel" and they end up at her shrine plot. Good luck continuing, I hope to read more soon!
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  • From honZeldaFitz on August 14, 2007
    Hm... I'm sure Youko had his reasons, but still. I wonder if Kuronue's absence means he didn't agree? This promises to be full of angst and hopefully romance, too. Nicely done. Thanks for posting. :)
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  • From MySecretsOut on August 14, 2007
    YOUKO IS SO CRUEL! How could he do that to poor Kagome?!?! After all she's been through. I hope she rips him a new one in the chapters to come. He deserves it! Also, I have a feeling I know where this is going to go since you mentioned that this chapter was based off of a chapter in New Moon. Anyway, great start. Ja!
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