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Reviews for Dominance

By : BlackMaiden
  • From BlackMaiden on July 29, 2017

    KagomeLove2: Heat was never written. I wrote this story many years ago and fell off from writing. Keep in touch and hopefully i will write a follow up or finally write Heat. Thank you for the kind words, its good to see that this story still grasps the reader after all these years.


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  • From KagomeLove1 on July 29, 2017

    Very interesting story. I really felt sorry for Seara. The punishment she received did not fit her crime. I guess from Sesshoumaru pint of view she did bring the death of a lot of demons and human male with her sexualisation attitude. And he did not want her to in the way spoil his Rin I have to say Sesshoumaru was ruthless in his punishment ( I have never read something like that so Chapeau to you). No wonder she run away. It was very foolish of her after what he did and especially told her but she was too scared.To think that she followed him because of his strength and protection and he ended up abusing her in the most horrible ways and killing her. I would love to know is she will be able to forget that her mate did kill. Will she be able to forgive him because he brough her back to life?  I hope you will do a sequel of this fantastic story I would like to know how the relationship between the 3 develop and the dominance. Wil Seara not feel jealous of Rin in a way?  Thanks for this story. I truly enjoyed reading it.    Where is Heat? I have been looking for it but cannot find it at all. I really wish to read it.


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  • From SesshysTrueMate1 on August 05, 2011
    I miss you too! We should email again! :-) I havne't posted much here, but I'm working on it!

    Love
    SesshysTrueMate1
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  • From ANON - the witch on December 23, 2009
    I love it all don't see to many Sesshomaru with two women,its usually the other way around. Thanks for writing this awesome story.
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  • From SesshysTrueMate1 on November 14, 2009
    ALright! I hope you get better soon,
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  • From ANON - sarah on November 05, 2009
    hey i liked the ending of this story it was well worth the wait for it. i think you did an awesome job finishing the story and thanxs fot that hope you contenuie writing awesome stories.
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  • From ANON - Fairqueen on November 04, 2009
    ok i promised a review for the last chapter of this story so here we go. i am going to say again that the Sess/Rin is not one of my favourite pairing, but i did enjoy this story. Back in the bad one days women were just what was shown owned by men(or demon in this case) and their treatment was solely up to the head male in their lifes (harsh but true). but what truly impressed me is your ending of this story, i never even thought of that part u need to have someone to show dominance too. Good character development of Sess ,but i wouldn't mind seeing a modern day story from u with the same characters, could be interesting. Looking forward to your next work and remember i tend to review on the last chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - fallennagel on November 03, 2009
    awww I´m sad it has finally ended but it was great!
    poor seara se really did sufer, tough I didn´t expect the end about the porpouse of dominace and the key to supreme conquest very original...

    good work!!

    see ya at "heat"

    bye
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  • From ANON - niako-san on November 02, 2009
    Hi,

    I think you could write a second story about Seara, Rin, and Sesshoumaura. The story could be about the relationship they have together after being mated. Sesshoumaura killed Seara I can not see their relationship developing into anything health or anything beside master and slave. Seara is complete fearful of Sesshoumaura to the point that he is displease with it. He wants Seara to want him like Rin, but she does not and only obeys him. The main theme could be Sesshoumaura trying to health the torn relationship they have or about how Seara finally kills herself because she does not want to be a slave or treated like a slave for the rest of her very long life.

    Niako
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  • From SesshysTrueMate1 on November 02, 2009
    *Smiles* On which sight...?

    SesshysTrueMate1
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  • From Tricia1224 on November 02, 2009
    Let me see, where to start. I do wnt to read World Trade Center, I am not sure
    other people will not flame you for it, but it was a good story. I think Heat should come first, then the Jewel of four Souls.
    I will evenually get on my computer and email you. My phone is where I do
    most of my reading.
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  • From ANON - Fairqueen on November 01, 2009
    ty for deciding to continue the story. and my vote is Heat i prefer Sess. stories. and for those who complain that Sess may be to brutal, them should keep in mind that in that era and time men ruled (yes i know he's a demon) and killing there mates (partners) was a favourite past time. we women have it easier , it's wrong to kill us now
    oh and for me the Sess/Rin couple not one of my favourites but again understandable for that time period.
    ty and keep writing :)
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  • From ANON - fallennagel on November 01, 2009
    thank you so much!! I'm so happy you will be posting dominance finale here!

    and I would like it to be Heat because I love sessh...

    bye
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  • From ANON - SesshoumaruPrincess on October 31, 2009
    Yep, please repost.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on October 30, 2009
    what HAPPENED TO THE LAST CHAPTER?






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