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By : ajj77sunhawk
  • From InoueKurosaki on April 18, 2020

    You are a brilliant author! I read ALL the posted chapters in 2 days. I've neglected all of my studies (currently doing finals) because I was captivated by your words and imagination. Some aspects of this story spoke to me on another level! The pace you set, the character development....I cried, I laughed, I was even jealous too. I will be searching for ALL your work!


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  • From Zoha-Lixue on March 09, 2020

    And I have reached the end of this amazing story. You did such a good job!. I am a happy camper right now and am so glad that I found this. 


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  • From Zoha-Lixue on March 09, 2020

    Ok so we get to the chapter with the kiddos and the oldest defending SesshŨmaru, which is great, but he is saying words he couldn't before. I get this series was written awhile back but this is like the only thing I dislike. The child go from acting their age to acting like adults when it comes to their speech. Which I guess is normal for 8 years old but there isn't much in terms of consistency. 


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  • From Zoha-Lixue on March 09, 2020

    Did you just recon Egyptian mythology? It is at that point I officially fell in love with this story and your writing. 


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  • From sorina- on February 21, 2014
    ohhh my god !i just finish story ..it was wondful..thankssssss .i want read more story from you.^____^. ....
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  • From jdbbrz27 on December 20, 2013
    Well I did it again I've been suggesting your stories to some up and coming writers on ff and they of course love this story almost as much as I do. Why can't I ever stop reading this story it's just so amazingly written have a great holiday thanks again
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  • From whitetiger on August 24, 2013
    A Beautifully written story. I LOVED IT!!!!!!!
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  • From JaguarsGirl85 on June 18, 2012
    Would LOVE to see this a few years FORWARD with Yuucha being a teenager and challenging Sess going thru REBEL STAGES and not listening to anything Sess has to say....we all went thu it in our own way....love to see How they all Deal....Mee-chan always emotional Kishi angry as hell all ways wanting to fight....and of course Yuusha not listening to a thing Sessy says!Seems like fun they could get into alot!
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  • From ANON - NobodysAingyl on May 11, 2012
    I do want to leave a proper review, though.

    This story is far more realistic in the development of emotions, especially with those of Sesshomaru (gotta consider the effects of instinct vs. already established emotional boundaries and psyche!), and InuYasha's journey from essentially being forced to do something that betrays everything he was by people that didn't understand and wouldn't take the time to listen, through events that changed how he see his world so drastically and triggered a self-preservation mechanism that was destroying him from inside out, to slowly realizing that maybe, just possibly, he's not worthless and deserving of all the terrible things that have happened to him.

    I'm not even close to being done with what chapters that are out, but I still wanted to say what an amazing job you've done :) ...re-reading my review makes me think that I've been awake too long, since I don't normally talk like that. I jut didn't want to say too much about the contents of the story, yet still say how much I'm enjoying the story progression. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - NobodysAingyl on May 11, 2012
    How's this for a review xD my post on FB, not even a minute ago -

    “Ya that was where the pathetic Hanyou killing stupid ass chicken Gods of suck-your-momma’s-thumb lived.”

    Ah, ajj7sunhawk, you crack me up xD I love fanfic lol
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  • From ANON - kat on March 06, 2012
    Hope to see how it all will end.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2012
    I loved this chapter!!!! Seeing Inuyasha get the recognition he deserves...it put a smile on my face.

    I usually save reviews for the very end (when I find a story super late like this) and leave a big review once I catch up. But I was saying to myself how much I liked this chapter and I magically ended up here at the review page lol. So here goes ...

    First off, I feel so bad for Inuyasha. All the things he went through: the betrayal, the pain, the sacrifices, the loneliness. I just wanted to pull him out if the story and hold him to my bosom. Lol.

    And Kagome! I wanted to kick her ...hard. I mean really? She was just over the top bratty. I'm glad she went back to her own time. She was getting on my nerves!

    I want to knock Sesshomaru over the head with a chair! He's trying, which makes me happy, but he's trying in the wrong way dang it! But alas, there's nothing I can do but sit here and fume.

    I'm not sure how I feel about Yuusha yet. I think I would definitely like him a whole lot more if he git along with his father, but that's how it is. We'll see what happens in the future.
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  • From ANON - T'Amara on September 10, 2011
    What a delight, getting online and finding this chapter! And it's HOWLING funny (right term, that). Some many details to love: our Inu having an excuse to fight and not stay home and be safe, the adorable children who fight like well-trained warriors, then become cute kids again, astonishing the people around them. Yuusha's smug "And my Papa saved everyone, not Father" attitude (does he KNOW how much of a mini-Sess he is???). Death, that hottie, HELPING his beloved Inuyasha keep his jealous, grumpy, very injured mate alive. And last but NEVER least, the winner of the WORST PATIENT EVER award is Sesshomaru! Utterly no surprise, and I laughed my fat ass off. Only thing I'd like to have seen might have been a good description of all of the children, the triplets at 12 and the little hanyou girls, but heck, I loved the whole chapter.
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  • From ANON - kat on September 06, 2011
    loving it. hope there will be more soon.
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  • From midnightsweet on August 16, 2011
    omg holey shit. go iun... will there be a father and kids talk to clear a lot up.
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