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Reviews for Winter's Chill

By : Dante1444

From ANON - Starshima on November 09, 2013
KICK ASS STORY !!!!! INU&KOGA 4EEVVEERR!!!!
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From kitmistress on January 23, 2011
please write another story about after Yasha joined Kouga!!!! PLEASE!?!?!? I can only imagian how cute and full of lemon goodness you could make it! especally if they had pups *puppy eyes*
Please write another story they are just to good!
but thank you for this story. its wonderful and the ending perfect.
Kit
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From ANON - Midnightsscream on December 20, 2010
woah. that ended sooner than I expected, but you ended it in a great way! I'm REALLY happy with it. great job!
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From ANON - river girl on December 20, 2010
Nearly broke my heart when I thought Inuyasha would leave Kouga because of Kagome. Kouga's solution, and his patience though, was an ending I did not expect, and showed a true understanding and love of Inuyasha. So ya, I'm sad the story is over, but also, I find the end warm and suitable. This has to be my favorite story for Kouga I've ever read. I reallly ached for him, out on his post and when Inuyasha showed up, I could have hugged both of them, or you in relief! I was half terrified that Kagome had followed him up the mountain, very glad she didn't!
Looking forward to reading more of your work.
~river girl
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From ANON - Peya Luna on December 20, 2010
ok, i�ve got to admit that its a nice ending, even though i�m sad that its over....and that you left out the part with kagome freaking out. for somehow i can�t see her being perfectly ok with her husband leaving her alone for a couple of months each year, especially once they�ll have kids - which he would probably take with them as soon as they�re old enough so they can learn youkai-behavior and become part of the pack as well. thats why, as far as i�m concerned, the well is still open and inu convinced kagome it would be better/healthier for her to spend the cold season with her family in a house with central heating while he goes roughing it youkai-style with kouga because he couldn�t stand being cooped up in a human house/staying in kagomes time for so long.
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From ardentes on December 20, 2010
I think you balanced it alright. I was not expecting this story to end in this chapter. I really liked how you did this and I also enjoyed the delicious yaoi lemons. I hope you will write more stories. I want to read more of your stuff if you ever get a chance.
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From kougaslover on December 19, 2010
Ahh, that was such a bittersweet ending, sweet in the way they wound up together, yet bitter in that this awesome, awesome fic is over. I really hope inspiration hits you for another fic as yours are just pure brilliance. I don't know if you're looking for ideas, but I think an awesome fic idea would be to have some sort of condition befall Inuyasha in which he finds himself changed into a beta role. Kouga, at Kagome's appeal, could take him into his pack and give him the domination he finds himself needing, and ultimately what was a temporary thing could become a permanent place for Inuyasha. Just a thought. Still, this story was seriously incredible, and I'm so sad it's over, yet glad you ended it in such a beautiful way. Excellent, excellent job as always!
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From jdbbrz27 on December 19, 2010
It was nicely written and cleverly thought out cheers to you. I liked the way you ended it myself I thought it was clever and well sweet and the fact that Kouga loves Inuyasha so much that he was able to let him go says alot I mean we all know that line if you love someone let them go if they come back they love you to if they don't it was never meant to be in the first place or something of that nature and you wrote it perfectly for that and not everyone can do that thank you so much for letting me share in your wonderful story and imagination. There's not to many Inuyasha and Kouga stories I go in for but yours is surely one of them have a super holiday season.
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From ANON - Peya Luna on December 19, 2010
he didn�t even recognise her at first? man, those wolves truly did a number on him - i�m jealous LOL i like how close kouga and inu are getting to each other, heck if not for the whole 'i�m a guy i don�t talk about my feelings'-nonsense there�d already been love-declarations. i like that inu was kouga�s first and agree with the logic of 'an alpha can�t let anyone top him' (at least officially ;-) btw, am i correct that inu too was a virgin(with men) until he ended up trapped with these horn dogs/wolves? i�m still wary of kagome, even if she agrees moving in with the wolves and to share inu(and herself) with kouga i think she would draw the line at ginta+hakkaku....and what would the elders think of her being the 'breeding bitch' of both their alpha AND inu? i mean, it would be impossible to hide if half of her kids are wolf-hanyous and the other half have inu�s puppy ears...
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From kougaslover on December 18, 2010
Awesome, awesome two chapters! I loved Inu getting to take Kouga, and the four of them, stuck together in a small hut all night...just pure brilliance! And yes, Inu staying "plugged" by Kouga all day is just so beautifully sexy, gorgeous job writing these two. I tried to update for chapter five, but it went to a loading screen and apparently didn't post. But, great job, I can't wait for the next chapter of this gorgeous story. Interesting to see what will develop with Kagome, maybe she'll wind up convienently between the two canines?
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From ANON - Elaine on December 18, 2010
Hey! I am loving your story! Do you have an update list? If so, would you add me to it? Thanks!
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From jdbbrz27 on December 18, 2010
That was so well extremely warm okay I'll admit hot hot hot hot in respect to all 4 partners. I have to admit I was never into the threesome/foursome bit much but you wrote this very well and didn't turn it into anything well super gross and what a way for a human to stay warm although I do have one question how come they never build fires for the night which kind of would make more sense than what they're all doing now not that I'm complaining just curious. You should still make an mpreg I would love to see how you would write it everyone writes mpreg just a bit different just enough to make each one completely unique besides can't help it you could write it I'm sure much better than my imagination could which would explain why I read and don't write. I would love to read Inuyasha mpreggers in this story and both their reactions I can just see the surprised reactions on both their faces in my mind. Gotta admit I kind of well didn't read Inuyasha taking Kouga all that close just sorta skimmed over it I mean I just perfer Inuyasha as the uke period and being plowed not Inuyasha doing the plowing just don't see that one so I just kind of skim over sections like that although I will skim just in case something catches my eye, interest or amusement thank you for this one though loved the interation expecially when Inuyasha was asleep and being molested and screwed royally loved it.
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From myperversities on December 18, 2010
OMG I really want you to have them mate!! Maybe make it a mpreg so once inu is a verified uke he can give his alpha some little pups to follow in their daddy's footsteps. Man I just love this. You really need Hakkaku and Ginta to get together too....I mean they're practically an item.
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From jdbbrz27 on December 17, 2010
This chapter helped keep me warm that's for sure. I loved Kouga and Inuyasha doing it right in front of everyone what a turn on especially with well hardly anyone being the wiser for it and the thought of Kouga deep inside of Inuyasha for the rest of the day wonder how many times he came inside of little Inuyasha boy Inuyasha must have been so full by the end of the day huh or at least a part of him anyway. Between the cum and well a huge spear inside of him. He must of been as red as his outfit between the exertion, the fear of being caught and the pleasure he was feeling. Kouga must have been in heaven getting to spend a whole day deep inside such a delicacy nice and warm and tight with his arms full of such a gorgeous human male and putting one over on the whole pack by doing it in public with the famous Inuyasha and being Inuyasha's seme. Would have been hilarious if Inuyasha got preggers without realizing he could get preggers what a joke on the two of them what in the world would they do then with little Inuyasha married to a human girl and Kouga alpha of a pack and suppose to lead by example. I also loved the story about Kouga's shards and Inuyasha saving him and all of that and the little Ginta recalling what he wanted to recall with only a little bit of the truth coming in on it and both the boys reactions and denials to it all that made me laugh so hard I almost fell off my chair it was just so funny the two are so silly when it comes to posturing and trying to appear so tough and unapproachable I loved it can't wait for the next installment gotta do whatever I can to stay warm and these kinds of stories help alot thank you I'll be staying tune.
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From ANON - river girl on December 17, 2010
Dante,

The country is China. I plugged my email in if you want to talk more. I actually teach English in a the equivalent of a public high school here. While some parts of China and some economic upper layers of society do have heat, the large majority of people here simply wear a lot of clothes. The coat market here is crazy, wild, diverse and definitely a fashion statement among any woman who can afford to indulge.

Curled up in my bed reading, this chapter did make me warm. The sex was great, warm, humorous, and a little surprising for the participants. But I especially loved how Inuyasha is getting along with the pack. As far as getting along with a new social group, being able to play and have stress relief within that group is one of the hardest and most stabilizing activities. Travelers and immigrants often fail in their journeys/sojourns, when they can't find this kind of outlet. Being in a new environment is incredibly stressful, especially when trying to learn the unspoken rules. That brings me to the next thing I'm enjoying, the fact that you've given Inuyasha a way to ask about the unspoken rules, and that Kouga is answering. That is an invaluable tool! Sometimes I wish I had a Kouga! Well, not in all the ways Kouga helps Inuyasha, already have one of those. My handsome wolf is currently dying to drag me around his own adoptive country more, namely Japan.

Well, I'm probably breaking some sort of unspoken rule about real life facts. I'm always happy to talk about traveling. My email is in the box above. I love meeting new people.
Thanks for writing!
~river girl
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