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for In too deep

by Pallas

person Feminafures
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story! The angst is killing me, but I love the dark nature that you create.

As soon as I sign in, I'm putting your story on my recommended list!

JA ne and keep up the good work,

Gia
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dark, dreary, a little depressing, I LOVE IT!!! Please write more, this is a really great fic, the way that you're potraying Sesshomaru gives me tingles! The story line is great so don't change a thing, k?
person anon.
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*shaking fist at author* update damnit!
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooo, this is getting good!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! STALKER DOG!!!! hehehehe
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sits like a dog and beggs "More Please!!!!"
person Shak8spere
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a very good story. I would be happy to offer my services as a beta reader. I am an English teacher who happens to like this anime. :) Email me if you want to take me up on my offer.
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! For someone who has learned English as a second language, you're doing a very good job. Yes there were a few grammar, spelling, and syntax errors throughout, but not much. Just work with your beta-reader and those things should be cleared up right away. ^_^ Update soon!

Ciao!
person Kim
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going. I'll be looking forward to new chapters. And don't worry, I don't think your english is bad at all.
person Yle_chan
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tourrourrrrrrrrrr Kagomeeeeeeeeeee sesshoumaru is a jkkkkkkkkkkkkkk arggggggggggg how can he do that to kagome snsnifsniff T-T it's not right sob sob ..... but he is a sexy jerk ehehehheh #_# love sesshoumaru and i love the pairing sesshoumaru/kagome ^_^ to think I was a fan of inuyasha/kagome eheheh but now things have changed my sesshyyyyy I love youuuuuu ^_- please keep writing I really love your fic you have a great mind ^_^ your fic is one of the most interesting that I have read in the last 3 month ^_^ ehehehhehe

Ciaooooooooo

Yle_chan
person CarmMeldoll
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sitting on the edge of my seat, with excitement trying to figure if he will Kill her or Kiss her! Poor Kagome! Keep up the great work

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