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for Dirty Life

by Strawberries

schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O.... wow this is rather intense. I think your doing a good job in portraying how the buisness of prostitution is. Er... I cant wait to see if Naraku will keep up his end of the bargain, and whether or not inu/miroku/rin are going to be able to do that. Please please update soon. i want to see what's going to happen!!!
person kinky lurker
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! you're not dead! yay! you updated! i'm so happy and i love this story! i'm so glad you updated adn got this story progressing. i love this story, it's so well done and you've done a wonderful job writing it! (tackle glomps) it's greatness! keep it up and update soon!
person Brenna
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's been too long woman!!I was wondering when you were going to update!!
person Julie.O
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was hopeing this chapter would be longer...but oh well it was good ^^ update soon
person Kiki Ortega
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great as always. Kikyo is so insatiable(sp?), but I like her. Um... The lemon was quite amazingly described. Overall, I love this story.... w/ or w/o lemons... and stuff... it's well written and I'm glad you updated.
person binab86
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man i love this story and i cant wait for the next chapter i hope you update soon
person Moon & Stars
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so good. But I really think that you should update sooner. I want to know what happens next. This is one of the best stories that I ever read. So PLEASE update.
person *broken_hope*
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait until the next chapter. Hopefully you won' t take as long lol. UPDATE !
person Omega Night
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work and update soon...
person hanyou-elf
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(sniffle) i don't know what to say to this chapter. except to tell you that it was beautifully written and wonderfully presented. i never give you any constructive criticisim. i always give you flowery, flowing, lgowing reviews, ne? does that irritate you or do you like it? (shrugs) anyways, i love this chapter, i love this story. i don't know what else to say to you except that i love it! and kami! what are inuyasha and sesshoumaru going to do to get together and what else are miroku/rin/inuyasha going to have to endure!? update soon! looking forward to it!

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