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for Dirty Life

by Strawberries

person Babsie
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well...Maybe e ise is a light in the end of the tunel...But will Inuyasha have the gut to ask for help to Kagome...or even if she try to help...will et het her?
Yes, you got a point when you said that some great stories start shoking .
So I guess Iīll have to wait to see what will happen.
Update soon :-)
person Babsie
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this first chapter had some impact on me. I donīt like the idea of Inuyasha being a male horn, but looks like he didnīt like this life. Are Inu gay? Will someone apper in the stor hel help them? I donīt see a way to Inuyasha and Miroku being drag out of this life without some therapy...and in the end...they could be sooo messed up that try suicide or drugs.
Donīt get me wrong...Iīm not flaming you. Itīs just that the plot of this story shock me a bit...and because of that I had to review to you...Itīs not everyday that somebody could shock me :-)
Keep writing, I hope you find a good solutions to this situation that I canīt see at now.
If you wanna do something different...you are doing a great work.
person tigeryas X
schedule February 16, 1920 at 12:00 AM
H Inu Inuyasha's back in Kikyo's clutches. (Insert maniacal laughter) Now, what sort of sick, twisted things can she come up with? (Girl after my own heart; starts wringing hands together) She could do somethings that would humiliate IY in front of Kagome, & humiliate Kagome by making her seeke ske she's still a child, a novice when it comes to the carnal pleasures. Wonder if that apartment has a large, picture window? Anyway, looking forward w/ great interest to next chapter. God, I love this story.

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