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Yo!! Maven!!...
LoL...Fantasical story once again...I always find that your ONE-SHOT's are really good...I love it!!...I could see the difference in the two stories...In the original I felt it was a bit rushed (not trying to be mean!! ) But in the Remake, I guess you could call it, I sort of felt something there...Am I makinf sense?...Prolly not...Oh well ^_^ Great job as always Maven...You once again had my eyes glued to the comuter screen...LoL

XD Nire

Great use of dialogue during the lemony part.

this was cute... very nice :D

it was good! truthfully, i was surprised to see you doing a i/k but it was nice.

I remember reading this a while back, but I don't remember if it was on ff.net, I thought I read it here on AFF. Anyway, thanks for posting it again. I liked it.

Hey! Just thought I'd give you some wonderful feed back! (That's why write, right?) n e ways, I really liked this story. I'm surprised that this story didn't get any reviews at ff.net. I can't imagine that you changed it that much, but I would really like to read the original version. Still, people are crazy for not giving you and feed back for this story. I thought it was really awesome. It wasn't a PWP, which was a breathe of fresh air, and is was very romantic. I liked how Kagome just took action. That-a Girl Kagome, you tell him what you want!!.... Uh he-he-he. Excuse my out burst. n e ways Great Story and I'm looking forward to the original version.