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by kimisan

schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Perfectly written and not at all rushed for a one shot. I love the way you built up the mutual respect and trust between Yusuke and Kagome rather than just having them go at it like a couple of sluts, because they're not. Wonderfully detailed lemon. Just the way I like it. Thank you for a great read!
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. First off let me just tell you that I greatly enjoy reading ALL of your stories. This one is, by far the best story that you have written; so far. If you should decide to continue to on with this particular story, I will definately continue to read and review it. Personally I hope you do continue on with the story.
::Crosses fingers:: ^_^
person Ryukotsusei
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful one shot. The night they shared together was beautiful, I'm sure both of them will remember it for a very long time to come. This is perfect as a one shot, or if you ever decide to continue it. I look forward to reading more of your work. Great job!
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn girl! This is just amazing...I know you said it was smut...but I think you portrayed it far too beautifully to be titled as such. I loved it as a one-shot...but now I want to see more. Isn't that always the way?
person Ume
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD!!!!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!!! It has been so long since i have read an actually decent Yusuke and Kagome pairing! Please oh Please make this story longer than a one-shot. It was wonderful potential!!!!!!! And i'm dying to know what will happen between Kagome, Yusuke, and Keiko. I actually don't like Keiko! ...I kinda think she is a bitch! I really want Kagome and Yusuke to end up together and for Keiko to get burned *disturbing and evil grin appears*. But seriously, please update this story!

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