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for One Trick Too Many

by demonoffire

person adeaneri
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i like this the fact that kagome can see foir her self that shippou is a brat and only does thingd to get inuyasha sat. if you so choose to, continue to write.
person Anon
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really cute! I got a little confused with the whole licking the boob part though, Is there going to be another part to the story where Kagome wants more then a motherly relasionship with Shippo? I guess I'll just have to keep an eye out.

Once again, good job!
person Rin-chan
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OUCH that was hard on shippo.

He deserves it though.

I'm writing a similar story actualy.

looks like the "Fairness" challenge woke a lot of people up.

My only real complaints are

The breast licking seemed a LITTLE silly.

The spelling has room for improvement.
person kitsunechan
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... interesting. But is this going to be the only chapter?
person fire
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
as a mother I can only say hurrah. Very well written a few mistakes in spelling but very comprehensive

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