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Reviews for The Great Trial

By : WinterDovane
  • From ANON - Hannah on December 11, 2011
    yay! I hope that you up-date soon!!!
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  • From ANON - mcdgoddess on December 09, 2011
    Now that was just cruel to end it like that! And of course he leaves without telling anyone right as his heat is kicking back in! I guess all of the great thoughts were spent on the battle! Lol! Finally caught up on the last two chapters and I'm still loving where this story is going!
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  • From calenloke on December 08, 2011
    lol! oh you are cruel cruel! :) you left us hanging. come on you have to update now. cause that was so good and I have to read more soon. and that mer person rescuing Inuyasha and flirting with him in the middle of battle that was hilarious. lol. please please give us more. it'll be a christmas present to us? :)
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  • From midnightsweet on December 08, 2011
    i realy enjoy the little changes. up date soon.
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  • From Vyper on December 08, 2011
    Poor Inuyasha. He needs his big brother to help him get through his heat. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ajj77sunhawk on December 07, 2011
    after all that awesomesause he Lost the potion? *facepalm... shakes head, Inuyasha!!! hehehe loves the doggie ride and the speech. poor Xin, looking forward to hot stuff in next chappie. The action was utterly amazing as were the developments. However You had an angst warning.... hmmmm.. perhaps that needs a bit of work. Or my angst meter is stuck again. GREAT story update soon.
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  • From ANON - kale on December 07, 2011
    Wow long chapter. I have to say nothing about it was filler though. You moved Inuyasha from partial acceptance to battle to a cliffhanger. (evil cliffie)
    I can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out.
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  • From Kuragari75 on December 02, 2011
    lovely work! i was late for class today because I couldn't stop reading this! lol wasn't important anyway, but I love your story! the way you write Sesshomaru makes me laugh and breaks my heart at the same time. It's absolutely fantastic! i'll be checking back for more! love this!
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  • From TamaRose75 on December 02, 2011
    Great story. I can't wait to read more and boy it would be nice to see Inuyasha kill Sesshomaru's mother! lol Although that is just the saditic part of me that wants her to pay for everything.
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  • From ANON - insignificant on December 01, 2011
    Oh hot damn, damn, damn!!! Egads, lookit! Sesshoumaru sealed his vow with a kiss!! (sigh) That's almost... romantic.^^

    I just love this story, oh god, I cannot remember the last time a story sent my heart racing so fast - the sheer emotion it evoked - damn, it was not only Inuyasha that suffered from a nearly constant rush of adrenaline. Although no one could blame him, huh, I was irritated with Sesshoumaru's lame-ass stalling, even when armed with the knowledge of the trial. Inuyasha should really learn how to milk the situation to his full advantage - just look at how desperate Sesshoumaru was and play hard to get at his best.

    And perhaps a hard smack with a rolled-up newspaper to his lordy nose wouldn't go amiss. ^^

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  • From calenloke on December 01, 2011
    oh yay! Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are so cute together! Sesshoumaru seems to be already showing protective tendency toward Inuyasha. Sesshoumaru's mother would totally flip if Sesshoumaru took Inuyasha as his mate. lol more more more please. I love it!
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  • From Vyper on December 01, 2011
    Thanks for another amazing chapter. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will gain his brother's trust and perhaps court Inuyasha to become his mate rather then scaring the crap out of Inuyasha by kissing him. I can just hear Inuyasha freaking out. "What the fuck Sess? We are brothers you ass not suposed to be lovers so quit trying to scar me for life ya bastard."
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  • From midnightsweet on December 01, 2011
    i thought it was going to be the same story as the other site, but i see you made changes. so i will have to start over on both just to keep up. lol lol lol
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  • From Kobanya on November 30, 2011
    -cue RD fangirl squeal- I love this story! I really meant to leave a review sooner, but with college finals coming up, I've been so busy. @.@ I love the characterization in this story, especially for Sesshomaru. I'm also pleasantly surprised by how you handle Inuyasha's (so far minor) dealings in the Western lands. He's still that same gruff guy we all know and love, but I especially enjoy how you also make sure to show that there's some intelligence in that thick head of his. Definitely can't wait to read more, especially since I wanna know how Sesshomaru is gonna deal with Inuyasha's little 'problem'. :D
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  • From ajj77sunhawk on November 30, 2011
    yes yes, finally finally... loved it sooo... sweet. Thanks for writing. That was an utterly amazing chapter. The first part is like grrrr, then its like huh! Then its "Go Inuyasha!" then Noooo... so much [ain, and finally all ahhhhhhh... sweet! thanks again. Am sick so gonna blame that if the review seems somewhat insane. :D
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