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Reviews for The Great Trial

By : WinterDovane
  • From ANON - js on November 30, 2011
    Very cool chapter. I like that Inuyasha's own power freed him rather than the elders' spell.
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  • From ANON - addiena saffir on November 24, 2011
    aw come on! lol all those lovely chapters i read for the first time today i kinda of forgot it wasn't a finished tale and was a little miffed at were it stopped. oh well guess i will have to impatiently wait for the next installment. Love the story so far
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  • From Vyper on November 24, 2011
    I loved that long last chapter but I want more damnit! You left this on another cliffhanger and I need to know how Inuyasha is going to react to the fact Sesshoumaru was forced to go out of his way to be a total ass to him. It will be interesting to see the results and I think Sesshoumaru's Mom is a total bitch and not in a good way.
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  • From EvilAnge1 on November 17, 2011
    This is a really awesome story please update soon! I can't wait to read Inuyasha's reaction! ^.^
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  • From ANON - mcdgoddess on August 31, 2011
    I have re-read this chapter three times now, specifically the part that leads to Inuyasha making his "final" decision. There's something very chilling and emotional about that scene. You have written it so that you really sense that he's at his "end". I really liked that it wasn't all super dramatic, just that sad laugh and Inuyasha's special way of saying goodbye to his brother. Each new chapter just makes me want more of this story! I LOVE it!!!
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  • From Vyper on August 28, 2011
    Sesshoumaru finally kisses Inuyasha. It is so romantic and sad at the same time. I want for Inuyasha to be happy and for Sesshoumaru to be able to tell Inuyasha the truth. Inuyasha deserves to know it.
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  • From ANON - mcdgoddess on August 18, 2011
    I really love how this story has started and I look forward to reading more!!! Its always nice when I find a story that is really focusing on the development of the characters and this plot with the "trail" has me really excited about this story! Can't wait for the next update!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Kitty on August 15, 2011
    This is absolutely perfect. Keep up the good work! The flow of the story is amazing and I can't even begin to describe how great it is.
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  • From Vyper on August 10, 2011
    You put a cliffhanger in there on purpose didn't you? I want more, I love this story so far and I can't wait to read the rest. Please don't wait so long for an update. I gotta know what Inuyasha said!
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  • From LadyLaran on August 01, 2011
    Very nice update! I love the glimpse into Sesshy's thoughts in regards to how painful this has been for him.
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  • From Vyper on July 31, 2011
    I hope Inuyasha is able to forgive Sesshoumaru although that will take time. Poor kid is freezing to death and needs his big brother to help him out.
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  • From ANON - fire on July 24, 2011
    Your paragraphs have a lot of detail. Is there any way to break it up a little to make it a little easier to read?
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  • From Vyper on July 24, 2011
    You know the funny part is I could see Sesshoumaru telling his little brother he was proud of him. Even with all their battles, I think Sesshoumaru had a grudging respect for Inuyasha and had the two of them just been together without everyone else's opinions of them I think their relationship would have been better.
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  • From ANON - js on July 23, 2011
    How depressing for Inuyasha. :( I hope things get better for him soon.
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  • From Vyper on July 23, 2011
    I don't get it. Did everyone die on Inuyasha or something? That seems to be the theme, but I am not sure. Your fic, it seems kind of dark, but good so far. It is just confusing. I will wait for your next chapter.
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