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Reviews for Hime no Aisu

By : GrimLyght
  • From ANON - Saito-Hizuki on June 16, 2015
    I really do like bits and pieces of this fanfic but there are many glaring problems I can't get passed. For one thing I don't mind Sesshoumaru being the victim but he really seems like a giant baby in the way he acts. And further more your portrayal of Kagome is atrocious. You make her seem like a judgmental sheep, its like she can't make her own mind. And everyone rags on her for defending Inuyasha when they all should know that neither one of them knows the truth about Shessoumaru's abuse. The lack of common sense and reasoning makes everything seem sloppy. I don't like being rude but Kag/Sess is my favorite pairing and while this fanfic has some good points the bad one just makes it lackluster. I hope I didn't insult you too much but I also hope you learn from this and take better care in holding up a characters expectations.
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  • From Jay_B on June 16, 2015
    I love your story my favorite character is kags, satomi, and seshy.
    Naraku is so bad and cool love his character, oh and amazing story
    Can't get enough of it, so great!!!
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  • From ANON - lex on March 15, 2015
    Omg i love this story... it really is one of the best animes on here... i hope u update sooN... if zo shoot me over an email and let me know lol!!! But i really cant wait for the next update!!!
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  • From ANON - Allana on December 12, 2014
    I love it the Inu/Jak pairing is awesome I want hear more about them.
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  • From nightshade41230 on November 09, 2014
    I love this story and would love to see more , I cant waitg to see what the other chapters hold
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  • From ANON - candace peaches on October 26, 2014
    i read your story and i find it to be really good. i hope you can finish it because it's a story that touches the heart and i get to imagine a different side to Sesshomaru. i loved his character best from the anime. i liked inuyasha, but sessy spoke to me more. if you could do more writing for this story i would love to see how each couple ends. please finish the story. i beginning to become one of your fans. thanks. goodbye.
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  • From ANON - Lola on September 08, 2014
    OMG, I am in love with the story. It's such a twist from the other's that I've read. I can't believe how small their worlds are that they're parents knew each other but now I'm wondering what their plan is because it sounds like it'll do more harm than good. I'm glad for the couples and that they are able to fight for their love. I really want to kill Miyo because she seriously irks me. I can't wait for something to happen to her. Please come back and update this story I need to know what happens between my favorite love birds, the miko and ice price.
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  • From MindlessMina on August 18, 2014
    I just finished reading all of this story in one day cause it was that addicting!!! I am soooo dying for the rest of it to come to frutition! I don't know if it will ever happen, but I sorely hope that it does!
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  • From ANON - neice1176 on August 04, 2014
    I was so excited to see this updated :) I love what you have done with all of the characters in this story! Please keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Kazekizu on June 28, 2014
    I've been reading fanfiction for quite some time now, and I'm always looking for a good story to get my hands on. This story is by far one of the best that I have ever read. I love the plot twists, the romance, the danger and sadness that is written so eloquently. I just finished the most recent chapter written and I'm already craving the next. You are doing a fantastic job of keeping your audience intrigued. Love love love this story! Keep writing and even when this story is over, I will follow your next one. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Colouredblossom on June 27, 2014
    It was good to finally be able to read the rest of your updates for this fanfiction.
    I enjoy the character development and the direction your story seems to be going in. I look forward to future chapters, keep up the good work C:
    Blossom ~
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  • From MikoSayuri on June 09, 2014
    I loved it! I like how Hojo is there for her during these times, when she needed someone who knew what happened to her. Its a cute little scene. Natsu and Sado, I'm not surprise that Natsu caught wind of Naraku and Sango's relationship. If everything was simple, but in their line of work it never is. There will always be someone who is against you or try to manipulate you. Natsu uses underhand tactics to get want he wants. Thank god Kouga isn't like him, or pretends to be. Kirai scene was sad to read, but I'm glad she had remorse for the sins she committed. Sometimes people have to die in order to see the bad tht they have done. May she rest in peace at last. Miyo I'm not surprised to find out later if she orchestrated the whole thing. Ryuu, Izayoi, and Akira were innocent people taking to early in their life. Naraku and Miroku's scene was well written, I don't understand why Miroku thinks Sango will get hurt or tainted. Naraku loves her very much from what I can tell. He would never let anything harm her, even if it meant his life, which he proved that night when those men were going to rape her. Sango is in good hands Miroku fails to see it, hopefully he will truly open his eyes later, that there is no better man for her. Inuyasha getting knocked around by Sesshomaru was cute brotherly love, I like that. Then Jak comments was too hilarious! Kagome and Sesshomaru's scene was even better than what I would have pictured. I'm glad he didn't go a wall on her. She finally confessed to living him and wanting to save him. It was executed so well, I'm glad there's a step towards the right direction. But I know its still a bumpy road ahead for all of them. Naraku and Kirai scene was sad, it understandable that Naraku would be speechless. You described the emotions beautifully, and well done. You can't help but feel bad for the both of them. They never got to that mother and son relationship, it was bitter sweet. At least he knows his mother loved him and is proud of him. In the end sometimes you only wish you had more time, then again life is cruel, its never easy. Thank you for the update as always its pleasure reading your fanfictions. Keep up the amazing writing! I can't wait for what you have in store in the future! :-)
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  • From MikoSayuri on June 09, 2014
    Sorry for the late review, my friend! I've been writing and typing like crazy, but here I am, lol! I love this chapter!! So many thing were revealed and cleared up! Miyo and Sakura's conversation was interesting, who knew Sakura had a thing for Kagome's dad. You can tell they were all friends by how they are, not caring and down right evil in some sense. I hope Take finds out about Miyo's twisted pleasures. I hope Rin gets to see her father, that would hopefully be a happy reunion. The whole scene when Kagome was in her underwear and bra was cute, hello kitty lol! It was sad to see Sesshomaru break like that, but thank god Kagome can take the pain away. He let her kiss him, which was a big step. Even though it was a short scene, the emotions were written out beautifully. I feel bad for Satomi, she truly never had a mother or a father, but at least she has her friends and Bank to love her. I like how you portrayed everyone having fun, it was a good light hearted scene. The last scene with Kagome and Hojo was emotional and heart felt. Only in death do we truly say good bye. For her to mourn and go in the ocean was beautiful showing the transition of being cleansed from her burdens, it was executed well. Then she made sand angels it was a good scene. I'm glad she changing into young lady of understanding and learning from her trails. Thank you! That was really good chapter! Keep up the great writing! :-)
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  • From ANON - Neko410 on May 29, 2014
    I love this story so much, and I check every other day for updates. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Nikki on May 21, 2014
    Please update soon! I can't wait for more!
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