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Reviews for Moonlight's Shadow

By : northstar
  • From ANON - CiraArana on December 28, 2006
    Chapter 4

    Phew. Gosh, that was an exciting lemon. Very well written. Also a very interesting description of what happens when miko and demon mate. I like the idea of souls blending and their powers binding them. The miko's soul gains a bit of demon, and the demon's soul a bit of miko. Huh, fascinating to see how that will turn out.

    So, Inu Yasha has arrived. I'm curious to see how he will react to a Kagome that is bound to Naraku. *jumps on her chair and clicks Next Chapter*
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  • From ANON - CiraArana on December 28, 2006
    Chapter 3

    Evil evil Naraku! That drug is sure the best way to break her without too much physical damage. And I'm sure he will tell he that it was all herself, that the drug merely encouraged her to unciver her deepest feelings. That's the evilest and most brutal form of violence, isn't it, the messing with a fragile mind. *shudders*

    Very well-written. On the surface it seemed such a nice lemon, and then you remember the situation she's in and ... whoa.

    This was indeed a cliffy. Just when the hold of the drug was broken. Oh, I shiver thinking what Naraku will do now. *hurries to click Next Chapter*
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  • From ANON - CiraArana on December 28, 2006
    Chapter 1

    Uh, that was a mean ending. And a very ... well, dark chapter. Sounds ridiculous, since you warned the reader this would be dark. But dark isn't always dark. Sometimes violence is so overdone that the reader gets bored. Nothing boring here. Yeah, slicing Kikyo that way is violence. Reminded me of butchering (or was that only my imagination's doing?). But the real darkness, at least to me, is what goes on behind the actions. The thread of Naraku's simple presence and, of course, even more so of his words. *shivers*

    But I'm hooked. Which is all the more surprising because usually I don't read dark fics. I just felt like Naraku/Kagome today, and reading the first paragraph of your story convinced me that you are able to write. Yes, I have to put it that way, because of the ten stories I read in the last hour yours is the only one that doesn't set my teeth on edge with poor grammar or poor writing. In other words: you write beautifully. ^-^

    And I really really liked what I read. Very beautiful first descriptions of Naraku, emphasising his in-humanity. Throughout the story, the descriptions were of a kind that made it very clear to the reader what he is and what he's not: a demon, a predator, a creature of chaos and destruction. Very well done!

    Kagome is also spot-on! The belief Inu Yasha will save her in time, that things aren't as bad as they look, the indignant anger at Naraku's actions - that's so Kagome!

    And now I will shut up and go read the second chapter. *shivers in anticipation of drakness*
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  • From ANON - kim on December 22, 2006
    very good story ... keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Inuyasha Fan on December 15, 2006
    Brilliantly written!! Update soon... man, you have me hooked.
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  • From ANON - Kags21 on December 12, 2006
    I am so glad that you updated this story I had though you forgot all about it.
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  • From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on December 11, 2006
    W O W!!! omg! this is absolutely amazing. i dont think I've read a fanfic that has held my interest so completely. Amazing job! youre writing is compelling,strong,and heartwrenching. you have the ability to put the real emotions of a rape victim into your story so skillfully and completely. it's amazing. i wait for your next chapter with baited breath. ^^

    -sesshysgirl08-
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on December 10, 2006
    But...but, but we've read this part already! Please you have to update again, please! We wanna see what happens!
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  • From ANON - amhor56 on December 10, 2006
    I love this story. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 17, 2006
    This is a really good story. It has alot of emotional impact. Keep updating, your doing a great job.
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  • From ANON - Kasutaishi on October 12, 2006
    I am a sick, sick person, but I love Naraku and Kagome as a pairing, and this story is one I come back and read again and again simply because it is so good!. Your muse came up with an excellent answer to "how would a lemon between Naraku and Kagome really play out". I personally am slightly in awe of you, seeing as you managed to keep everyone very much in character, and at the same time pull off something as dastardly as this! I love it, and I am SO going to keep on checking up on this story to see if it gets updated.
    Anyway, keep on writing, I think you're a great author and one of my favourites on aff.net
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  • From ANON - emma424 on October 09, 2006
    You are a really good writer and I enjoyed reading this fanfiction.Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kurokajin on September 14, 2006
    I really love your story!! It's very hard to find well written fanfiction, especially of this pairing. I was wondering if you had any intentions of finishing this incredible story. Although your last update was a while ago I still hold out hope that you will continue. Please, please update I would forever be grateful. The world needs good Naraku/Kagome fanfiction. It is your civil duty as a citizen of Earth. (jk) For all that is holy and right in the world please don't leave me hanging.

    Sincerely,
    ;) Kurokajin
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  • From ANON - viper on September 08, 2006
    oohhh..ooohh..oooohhhh...this story is twisted and interesting..evil naraku..but then again that is what makes him so cool...lol...so yeah keep up the good work...i'm hooked
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  • From ANON - Sagura-hime on August 29, 2006
    Awsome story, keep up the excellant work ^-^
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