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Reviews for Moonlight's Shadow

By : northstar
  • From Kenzi6 on March 03, 2023

    I so loved you version I wish there was more. ❤️❤️


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  • From ANON - Rewire on March 04, 2015
    wow, the narkag part was hot. I hope kagome free kagura's heart.
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  • From ANON - Kagome_Inu_3000 on January 22, 2013
    Okay, I read this story years ago, and every time I log onto AFF I keep coming back here to see if you have updated. This is such an amazingly well written story and I am DYING for another chapter! Please come back and update soon, for those of us who absolutely love this story. The emotions and feelings are just so intense... Can't get enough!!!
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  • From Eternalbloodlust on June 10, 2011
    The plot is very unique, and the story is (as always like your other ones) extremely well written.
    Please continue as its a pain not to know beyond...very well written indeed!!
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  • From ANON - Serenity on May 28, 2009
    Hi there,
    So i feel kind of bad for not reviewing each chapter but I just wanted you to know that i think this story is fabulous. It flows so smoothly and your writing is excellent. I can't wait to read more.

    Serenity
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  • From ANON - Anika on November 09, 2008
    I'm so amazed I don't even know how to start. Well i guess a good start is to congratulate you for this piece of art. Because that's what it is to me.
    I have to add that this is my first fan fic story i ever read. Ever..
    I can't finish reading other fan fics because i have the feeling they get "out" of the characters. But yours was different. You made everyone act so naturally that i really thought it happened in the anime lol
    I acutally cried when Kagome was thinking why Sango hadn't been in her place. That bit was so true and happened so often in real life that it made me cry.
    PLEASE update soon. I'm sure you have many fans for this story..don't let them down xD
    I'm count on you
    Anyway you did a GREAT job. You sure your not a writer?:P
    P.S: Kagome/Naraku fics are my favorite ^_^
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  • From ANON - sonsasu on September 13, 2008
    Using my psp to review is rather...annoying, but your story is more than worth it. ^_^
    (no internet on my laptop)
    I enjoy your writing style, grammer and flow. Your character depth for Nar is also something I like.
    I've been trying to find a good Nar/Kag fic that I enjoy for awhile now, seems I finally found my fix, X>
    And I personaIly like the tentacle idea, lol.
    So looks like you have a new fan, ;D
    -Sonsasu The Winter Dragon-
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  • From Jags on August 21, 2008
    ok first of all love it! and i love the idea of tentacle sex! please keep it up
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  • From DarkFrost on July 30, 2008
    This story has the best sex scene I've ever read...wow, I loved it really, everything was so vivd and wonderful, and your description of it was a breath of fresh air...ppl don't usually get so indepth ( the muscles on naraku's ass flexing..etc) I really enjoyed reading this story, every part of it, even chapter 5, which you called 'filler' which I believe was vital to the development and the maintainance of a solid plot structure. what I usually consider filler is when something completely unrealed happens to the sories plot..like, if u saw some of thelater episods of naruto, where they visit villages and complete usless tasks, leave and never see the ppl their again..a bit rambly, aren't I. Any way, the point is this story kicks ass! I'm sorry to see that you haven't updated i over a year, so that means it will probably remain on finished, though I must respect that, as I have lost interest in pieces before....PLEASE UPDATE....lol, n e way, great job!
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  • From shinketsukarasu on December 29, 2007
    Urrrrgh, this is such a great story, but it would be even better if you updated it! I've never read a Nar/Kag story before, and I really liked this one, regardless of the dark themes in it! And the fact that you write so well just makes me want to read moooore!! So please update? Please?
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  • From Minkx on September 24, 2007
    Wow, not sure if I loved it or loathed it, lol. (I have more then a few N/C/reluntance stories posted myself. But they're all more of the type where the woman isn't so much raped, as er...urged...into accepting what she honestly DOES want. And please don't anyone kill me, cringes!) But the writing was definatly of high quality. I read the entire thing in one sitting. You definatly have talent.
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  • From ANON - Desiree on September 06, 2007
    Omg, I love your story. I love the way you capture their true selves. You should update soon, im dying.
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  • From ANON - LynLin on March 24, 2007
    wow I really like this story. If possible, could you email me when you update it? I'd really appreciate it!

    And about the lemons...the tentacles wouldn't bother me. It IS Naraku, as you said. Lots of kinky possibilities.

    I hope you update soon! Everything just seems to...flow very well in this story. Keep up the great work!

    -Lyn
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  • From AnimeladyPIMP on March 14, 2007
    Damn it Kagura u Bitch!!! WTF iz wrong with u!! Please update.
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  • From ANON - Kagome.is.better on February 25, 2007
    I like the idea of using the tenticles!!! No one really uses them even though he has them, i think i have seen one story with them...I would so love you if you would use them!!!! Also i love your story even though i normallly dont read this pairing i like your story!!!
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