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By : LordYouko
  • From jdbbrz27 on April 14, 2011
    dum-de-dum-dum and evil Naraku makes an entry gotta admit this story just gets better and better. I loved that Sesshomaru was able to save his old friend. I also loved how he treated Inuyasha with respect and care and total tenderness something that little sweetheart needs and deserves. I also found it adorable that Sesshomaru's momma is getting a little bit of a soft spot for little Inuyasha who is testing her belief in that she perseves a hanyou is useless and should be destroyed but instead perhaps she is wrong in that belief which we all know she is. Also the fact that Sesshomaru has seen it in his momma and has basically called her on it. That whole part was written beautifully. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From keivarawn23 on April 14, 2011
    ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT!!!!!!!! totally amazing it drew me right in and i couldnt stop reading! i hope you post more soon!
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  • From jdbbrz27 on April 14, 2011
    I finally got a chance to read this and it made me cry thank you for such a touching chapter. I was kind of glad that Jaken wasn't killed but the other one sure needed to be. I also loved how Sesshoumaru got Inuyasha to accept his protection and care as his alpha that was really written quite beautifully and you did a super good job on it. Now I can read the next chappie yea.
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  • From uniqueindividual on April 14, 2011
    And Naraku enters the plot!! I've been waiting for the character he will play in this story. Also, Sesshomaru should stop teasing poor little Inuyasha.
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  • From ANON - arya on March 30, 2011
    wow. loved the last few chapters. inu showing a new side of himself was interesting, and i just knew that sess would love it! And as always sess was amazing. I really love how you portrait the character of sess in this story. He's very realistic and not ooc. can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Shelly on March 25, 2011
    That chapter was great! I loved it!!!
    I can't wait for the next one! Your story is so nice! There are so many emotions in your writing, ti's wonderful!
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  • From LosingMyBeautifulMind on March 22, 2011
    I read this in two days. All the chapters. And I loved it. So good.
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  • From SplendentGoddess on March 21, 2011
    Wonderful new chapter! I was expecting Inuyasha to come to and for there to be all the angst and craziness with trying to get him to calm down after realizing what he's done, but I don't mind waiting another chapter to see all that. I think what you did here, with Sesshoumaru taming the wild youkai in him, was brilliant! I love how he said 'you will submit, because you are already mine.' I also like that he spared Jaken's life. It does make sense, that where Jaken came from killing a slave wouldn't really be that big of a deal, and as he himself has now realized, he had vastly underestimated Inuyasha's true importance to Sesshoumaru. The tiger, on the other hand, knew precisely what he was doing and he got precisely what he deserved. Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - Addiena Saffir on March 20, 2011
    I really liked this chapter. I was afraid that you would make their relationship just about inu's love for sesshy and sesshy just enjoying owning him but not truly CARING about him. I think this showed how he would work to help inu be someone whole and well but still do it in his own way :-)
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  • From uniqueindividual on March 20, 2011
    That was beautiful.
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  • From midnightsweet on March 20, 2011
    update soon
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  • From ANON - Angeal on March 13, 2011
    So glad, you updated the story update soon please I love your story. ^^
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  • From ANON - Sarah on March 13, 2011
    I have vigorously read your story, while neglecting my studies, so I WANT MORE!!!!!!! I am a very experienced writer but do not have the free time to write as you do. The only critique I have had, while reading all of your chapters, is that the "nobles" and finer demons should talk with a more sophisticated tone and language. This would emphasize their status, but using super-sophisticated language is not a common occurrence in FF. You use good enough language that it makes your story good, but it doesn't hit that "real" tone in some places. (I've had a few drinks since I've started your story so I cant elaborate on specifics well...lol) However, that being said, I am totally enticed by your style and the wonderful way you portray the Inu/Sesshy Sub/Dom relationship. I guess my ultimate critique is: while there are really minor flaws in dialogue execution (based on character) and understandable grammar mistakes ... YOUR STORY IS AMAZING!!!!! Your story writing/story making skills rival any famous writer. I wont explain why my qualifications make me able to say that :-) but I will say: keep your skill in the back of your head, it might make you famous.
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  • From RhinoaLunar on March 08, 2011
    This is absolutely amazing. I cannot express how much I am loving your storyline here. Full demon Inuyasha is so incredible too. Please update soon.
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  • From RogueMudblood on March 07, 2011

    Hey there,


    Thought you might like to know that chapters 13, 17, and 19 thru 22 were affected by the RTE upgrade.


    Please check out the FAQ on how to fix it:

    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php/topic/20135-how-to-fix-the-glitches-that-are-due-to-the-rte/


    Thanks!


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