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By : LordYouko

From Kitsuna86 on November 08, 2011
First, happy belated birthday. Second NOOOOO INUYASHA HE IS NOT GOOD! I'm happy to see the update and hope for another soon. Puppy must be found and quick!
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From SplendentGoddess on November 08, 2011
Ah! Okay, one, happy birthday. Two, yes I did like this update! Three...did Naraku actually just brainwash him just then, or was it just Inuyasha being a naive, trusting child? He's not going to like be a zombie or anything when Sesshoumaru finds him, will he? Well...*tries to calm down*...I know that even if he is, Sesshoumaru should be able to snap him out of it. Inuyasha is connected to Sesshoumaru. Even supposing Naraku removed his collar, which you didn't mention one way or the other, it wasn't as if that had any sort of magic attached to it. Sesshoumaru doesn't need magic for Inuyasha to be loyal to him. Damn it, you! Now I'm on pins and needles all over again! Wonderful update; super looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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From Sparrowhawk on November 07, 2011
Man, I've missed so many chapters!!! I have been so deprived of this story this last month and a half while I was working two jobs! I love the updates! The introduction of Naraku was fantastic! I like how you're using the characters from the original anime and manga and integrating them like that into your story. Very creative. Inuyasha is as cute as ever, though I wish he would've just done what Sesshomaru told him to and stayed where he was. Now Naraku has him. And he thinks he's nice! How can he think that?!! Sesshomaru had better hurry up and go get him before Naraku brainwashes him into thinking Sesshomaru's the bad guy or some such nonsense. Who knows what that guy's planning. I'm so sorry I kinda dropped of the map for a while. I gotta find another job, though, but hopefully it'll be when I'm in better health and it won't make me so tired so I can keep reading you're epic story (: Thanks so much for the update! It was just what I needed. You can't believe how excited I was to find another chapter. And then, when I started reading it without thinking, I realized I had skipped some chapters!! I hadn't noticed that you had updated more than once since I haven't been on here forever! I nearly had a heart attack from excitement and way too much happiness when I saw I had more chapters to read!! *And* there was a sex scene between Sesshomaru and little Inuyasha. Damn, that's HOT! I love this pairing! Seriously.

Also, happy birthday!! It was probably yesterday since I'm up after midnight, but I hope your birthday is a fun one (was a fun one?)! You are the greatest!!! (: (:
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From dragondeedee3 on September 29, 2011
I miss Sess. having alone time with his puppy. Of course the lemons are very much appreciated but I miss there moments of just being alone together too. The way you have them interact together is enthralling, I very much hope to see more of that in the next chapter. 'Pretty please' (bats eyes and pouts lip)
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From Kitsuna86 on September 28, 2011
Not a bad story, I like the concept. Inuyasha is so cute here *pets* Please update soon.
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From ANON - ohioan0897 on September 08, 2011
Well I haven't read this specific chapter just yet and I have been enjoying the series, but in the begining of this chapter you said that lil Inuyasha is six... but in the start of chapter 1 (I went back and made sure) you said he's about 11... its much easier to accept the shota for 11 than 6. I'm only ignoring that its shota at all because its obviously fiction and plus they're 'demons' so human rules don't always apply. Plus I've worked hard on tryin to picture a preteen Inuyasha who's scrawny, weak, and dependent. If you could clear this up for me I would appreciate it. But in the mean time ill pretend that he's 11. Btw since I'm using my phone to read and review I'm too lazy to make an account I have an account on fanfiction (regular site(which is how I found this)) that I can receive a response thank you for your time, oh and other than the confusion I'm really enjoyin the story ^^

Ja ne
~Ohioan
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From dragondeedee3 on September 07, 2011
Yeah! Chapter! I liked thins one very much, I love when your Sesshomaru gets to all cocky and bad ass. Hope he really whips those soldiers into shape. It would be quite the funny little scene if Koga gave in to his urges to help little Inuyasha and just as he picked the boy up or something like that Sesshomaru shows up and gives him hell about it. Have I told you how much I like your koga? Koga is definitely not one of my fav characters but I love how well you work him into this story, if only the one from the show was more like yours. Well anyway cu-doze on another wonderful chapter, I look forward to your next update : )
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From SplendentGoddess on September 05, 2011
Ooo, goodie goodie! I wasn't expecting another update so soon! Man, and after that messed up nightmare Inuyasha is still planning on leaving? I thought he had talked himself out of it for a minute there. Will Kouga end up figuring out what the problem is? He was there last month after all and so he should remember Inuyasha's human schedule. Surely Sesshoumaru hasn't forgotten. Hopefully even if Inuyasha does actually make a break for it he won't get very far. It's just horrible timing with all of this Naraku business...though of course that's what makes it such an awesome story! And here I'd thought this was just going to be about underage slave-boys when I'd first started reading it, LOL. Keep up the awesome work!
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From Sparrowhawk on September 03, 2011
Ahahahaha! I couldn't stop laughing! The relationship between Tsukiko and Inu no Taisho is priceless. I have been waiting for this chapter for so long and I was soooooooo excited to be able to finally read it!!!! It did not disappoint. It's interesting the background behind Naraku in your story. It makes sense, though. Sad. Makes the reader feel kind of bad for him. And then there's Rin who's as bright as ever! Always loved her character, especially in conjunction with Sesshomaru. I loved her interaction with Inuyasha and her observation that he wasn't unhappy being "owned" by the prince. Ooooh, the new moon! I can't wait to see how Sesshomaru's going to react to what Inuyasha's going to do. Please, please, please, please, please update soon!! The suspense is KILLING me! Love your story, as always. Keep up the good work!!
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From SplendentGoddess on September 01, 2011
Yay! I'm so glad you updated! You were going along at a fairly good clip and then suddenly nothing; I'd feared either something had happened to you or at the very least that you'd decided to ditch this story. I'm so glad to see I was wrong! I really liked this chapter, too. They don't all need to have sex scenes, after all. Though...I guess technically this chapter actually did have a sex scene, but somehow I just can't find myself feeling sorry for Naraku. After all, look at Inuyasha, who had until very recently been in a very similar situation. Of course we don't know what happened to Naraku during his adolescent years, how much more cruelty he had received when Inuyasha just got spared from that kind of life, and it is true that how you are raised and the environment you live in will shape you, but still that's no excuse for becoming evil. And yay for Rin! That was so cute! I loved all of that interaction. Then bum bum BUM...that cliffhanger of what Inuyasha plans on doing during the moonless night, coupled with the threat of what Naraku plans on doing during the moonless night. Oh the humanity! Oh wait, they're not human...hehehe. Anyway, wonderful job! Try not to take so long before updating again this time, okay? ;-)
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From Vyper on September 01, 2011
Sesshoumaru is going to be so mad when Inuyasha goes out to hide his human form. The boy should be used to Sesshoumaru taking care of him and hopefully Sess will make certain Inuyasha is safely back in his arms.
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From ANON - Miluiel on July 05, 2011
Awww. This story so grate! =^.^= I love the dominant Sesshoumaru! But, why thay not "prepare" them in the sex parts? Inu such a girl?? Eeeh. But he is adorable ^^ But my favourite character is the Castle's Lady! =D Thx, I have a good time, when i read this ^^

Next? ;)
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From ANON - Sandy on July 02, 2011
this is an awesome story! Inuyaha is so cute and seshomaru so hot! I absolutly love the relationship between sesho and his parents XD! Kouga is funny too when his ass is being kiscked by seshomaru-sama! i am a little sad jaken wasn't killed (I hate that imp) But if it means that he'll be torured even better (hint hint). beside that i am lovoing the story and the way you write! I cant wait till next chapter! ^^
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From ANON - eleeland on June 23, 2011
I love your story! It's a wonderful mix of sweetness and action. Please keep writing it!
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From dragondeedee3 on June 20, 2011
This and Beyond friendship be who you are, are two of my favorite stories. Sorry I haven't reviewed before. I love how you have Sesshomaru and kouga interact in this story. I'm usually not a Kouga fan but I really like the way you write him. Also the way you write Inuyasha is just wonderful, I love the shy submissive Inuyasha. I'm sorry to hear you are going through a rough time, I hope everything gets better for you. I look forward to your chapters to come. You are a very talented writer so I thank you for sharing with us in the fan fiction world.
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