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Reviews for Want To Be Your Slave

By : LordYouko
  • From DemonsPain on December 02, 2012
    OH MY GAWD!!! SOOOO CUTE!!!
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  • From Angels9191 on November 11, 2012
    Yay!!!! Oh my gosh this story was amazing!!!!!!!! I was super surprised by the ending, I thought it would be a little more shameless smut, but it was so poignant and the writing was so well done. Reading through this whole story again it is easy to see how much your writing has improved and grown. This last chapter was a thing of beauty and had such a charming end.

    I think a sequel would be incredible. I would love to see how Inuyasha's character evolves in your universe, and I could read a well written Sesshomaru all day ^_^ If you're inspired, by all means share more of this great story. Because the one thing I'm disappointed in is that it had to end ;P

    Great job! I am a forever fan
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on November 09, 2012
    Ah that was a good plot, a good battle and such an end for your story as we all like very much, us readers !
    Thank you for your story ! and a sequel is always welcomed !!!
    A french mother,
    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - Snow on November 08, 2012
    This is a great story. It really is, but it's kind of as if the Mona Lisa was made with Paint. If your formatting is fucked up, then fewer people are going to want to read it. If this story had slightly lesser writing quality I would have said "fuck it" four chapters ago. Please fix your formatting!
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  • From SplendentGoddess on November 08, 2012
    I would love to see a sequel to this story! It's your universe and your vision, though personally for me I would love to see Inuyasha morph slightly towards a semblance of the Inuyasha we're more familiar with in such AU settings, although I totally agree with what you just said about how they would become glaringly OOC if all of a sudden Inuyasha wanted Sesshoumaru to treat him kindly and suddenly Sesshoumaru respected him as an equal. No, Inuyasha is definitely the slave boy in this universe and he definitely likes being the slave boy, and Sesshoumaru definitely likes treating Inuyasha like a sexual punching bag and I don't see that changing any time soon. There are some seeds you planted in this first go-round that I would like to see blossom, though, like perhaps exploring Inuyasha's youkai side and powers. He gets himself into another jam somehow or another and has to defend himself, perhaps? And then Sesshoumaru can 'remind' him how he will never be more powerful than his master. Whatever you decide to do I know I'll love it, just do me one small favor and please don't include the concept of Mpreg. That would totally ruin everything.
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  • From ANON - doesnt matter on October 20, 2012
    i think this was very well written i think it would be cool to do another a while down the road of the story when the kingdom is moved to sesshomarus control and inuyasha is grown to see how older every gets along, or even further down the road to where they would be in more present times and see how inuyasha handles being sesshomarus puppy still. anyway loved it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2012
    I must say I throughly enjoyed this story. It was a had-you-on-your-toes-tears-in-yoour-eyes-holding-your-beathe-till-you-almost-pass-out-heartwrenching-twistedly-sadisic- love story. THis is by far the best Sesshomaru fanfic I have ever come across. How you came to know so much about him or ratherit came out of your head I really want to know. I can't wait to read this "big Lemon everyone is waiting for". Keep up the good work. You could teach me a thing or several about Sesshomaru. *wink*
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  • From ANON - jennifer on September 11, 2012
    This was a great story! I am wondering if you would consider wrighting a second part for further along in their relationship because it still seems that their relationship is unresolved. I guess i'm just a romantic but i would love to see Sess admit to his feelings for Inu and stop treating him like property, at least a little. With Inu still a pet and Sess a prince there is nowhere for their relationship to go. Is there any chance of them mateing or something that has to do with Inu's birth parents?? Would't Sess have to marry as heir? ok,can't wate till the last part!
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  • From Angels9191 on July 29, 2012
    I love this story so much. I especially love that it does have an ending, though I am sad to see it end. I will miss puppy Inuyasha ^_^ I eagerly await the delicious lemon of Inuyasha's punishment, and even more I await what you will create next. Thank you so much for this story, and please never stop writing :D
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  • From ANON - uhhhhh on July 19, 2012
    fyi, after i think chapter 17, the formatting for the story gets all screwed up. it throws in the codes for font changes and the spacing gets thrown out of wack.
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  • From ANON - Kierstyn on July 02, 2012
    MORE!!!! I MUST HAVE MORE!!!! IT WAS AMAZING!!!!
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  • From ANON - voldraphone on June 30, 2012
    i love this story!. i wish there more stories like this.
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  • From aryaarsay on June 29, 2012
    i check back everyday, a few times in fact, to see if the next chapter is out. Please please!
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  • From aryaarsay on June 27, 2012
    I want the next chapter so badly.
    BTW, this chapter was awesome. I've read over the story quite a few times in the last couple of days. This one will definately be one of my most favorite ones. Especially since it has Sesshomaru so in character. And I equally love how submissive Inu is to sess.

    Anyway, for this chapter, I loved the instance when sess said that he didn't need anything. That response was pure him. Especially when he said that he didn't need something from a 'jewel'. And the entrance of his sword was expected but also highly anticipated. I loved how you made it so that even inutaisho's strength is not at great at sess's. That was awesome.

    I really hope you'll make a sequel. Perhaps showing another adventure of this cute couple. I love the two together, especially with how you made their personality. Sess is cold and strong, but he's soft with inu at times and their is a deep romance between them which no one else understands fully.

    As you can see i clearly love this story. been following it since you first posted it... which was a long time ago. This was a lovely journey, and i hope that you'll perhaps continue it. I think this story really suited you.
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  • From SplendentGoddess on June 23, 2012
    Love it! I was not expecting the way you actually ended the battle but I thought that was brilliant. Instead of actually wishing the jewel away he just rejected it, but that in and of itself still destroyed it. Inuyasha didn't go full-youkai and join the fight like I was momentarily wondering if he might do, not that the boy could have honestly stood a chance against Naraku if he had, so I think the way you did it instead was perfect, that Sesshoumaru feeling and scenting his grief for him was like a final push that put him over the edge. He allowed Naraku to absorb all of his youki, and it was like it overloaded Naraku because there was actually more power there than what the dark hanyou had been anticipating. It did seem to me for a moment there that Sesshoumaru was honestly accepting his death, but then, at the very last moment, he had the sudden burst of strength that gave him both the will and ability to survive. Beautifully done! I love that Bakusaiga was forged from his youki, and that scene with Totosai at the end there was funny, the Inu no Taisho trying to touch Bakusaiga and it zapping him one, LOL. I also liked that both Kagura and Kanna lived and that Kanna is now a friend for Rin. Did Tsukiko still kill Kaede for her failure? Ah well, I don't really care either way. It would be nice if she decided to let her live after all, but like Tsukiko herself acknowledged she is not a nice person so something tells me Kaede did indeed find death that day. But at least she was able to do one good deed first, restoring Kagura's heart, so that was cool; she got to go out on a high note. Super looking forward to the epilogue! ;-)
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