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By : LordYouko
  • From ANON - Talltree-san on June 20, 2012
    OMG, I do not have even the slightest clue what Sesshy will wish for! Makes me sick that I can't figure it out...DAMMIT DX!
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  • From ANON - Arya on June 17, 2012
    Loved the chapter. Thx for coming back.
    Naraku is stupid if he thinks that sess won't be able to beat him. Just wait till sess gets his awesome sword....which he IS going to get right?
    ,Anyway I'm thinking that maybe sess will ask for the power to protect inuyasha.
    Oh and please can we also have some lemons?
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  • From ANON - YomiNoTengu on June 17, 2012
    So, I was waiting for Sess to transform and like stomp on Naraku. Other than that it was really good! And I dunno what Sess is gonna wish for.. Maybe it'll involve InuYasha.
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  • From SplendentGoddess on June 17, 2012
    Yay! I'm so happy to see that you're back and updating this story again! You were just on vacation where there was no Internet, huh? Well I hope you had a good time, and thank you for getting back to this story promptly now that you're back. Hopefully you'll start tackling your other projects too, since you said that there's only one more final chapter to go for this story now. I really like your portrayal of Naraku, and how he ultimately decided, with his twisted logic, that it would be better for him to give Sesshoumaru the wish on the jewel, because surely Sesshoumaru will wish for something selfish, like his freedom, and then the curse of the jewel will get him for having made a selfish wish and Naraku will bask in the knowledge that that is the ultimate revenge he could have acquired. Hypothetically if Sesshoumaru did manage to utter a selfless wish then he would therefore not be freed, and so then Naraku would just suck out his youki as he'd originally been planning on doing, his original plan becoming plan b but still very much an option. Hmmmmmmm... I honestly have no idea what Sesshomaru will wish for, though it'd be cool if it had something to do with Inuyasha, like in a split second moment Sesshoumaru realized how much he does care for the boy and he wishes for his freedom, or something. But whatever you have planned, I'm sure it'd be awesome, including if Sesshoumaru actually just wished the jewel away in a spin off of the 'right' wish. It's your story, so I'll just sit back and wait and see how you decided to finish it off. Totally loving it all the way! :-)
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  • From uniqueindividual on April 22, 2012
    Uh Oh, it doesn't look good for Sesshomaru. Him being a little shit doesn't seem to be helping matters. And where did Keade go?
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  • From SplendentGoddess on April 06, 2012
    Oh damn! It IS a good thing they've got Kaede, who has the jewel. Epic beginning to an epic battle! Noticed one little boo-boo, because Inuyasha is supposed to be human right now - as we all know - and you do point out that he's human a couple of times, but near the beginning you also make mention of Sesshoumaru petting his fuzzy ears as he leaves the bed to kneel by Sesshoumaru. No big deal, just a minor oops. Love this update! Can't wait to see what happens next. :-)
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  • From Gwyllion on February 21, 2012
    Oh WOW!!! You've really turned me into a fan! First off, this is my very first Inuyasha fic. Second, I LOVE this pairing! What an amazing read! I adore slave fics and this was the PERFECT story for my week off. Thank you so much for sharing this. I can't wait to read more from you. I'm sure you hear how amazing you are, but do know that you have my sincerest adoration. Sesshoumaru is my most favorite character and seeing his progression in caring for his little puppy is too, too cute!! I adore your version of Inuyasha as a lil' pup in his basket! There were so many times that I had to muffle my squees. Lol. His innocence and his angsty past seriously pulled me in. I'm such a sucker for those. Thanks so much again for everything here! Keep up the amazing work! Looking forward to reading more! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2012
    YES! Update. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up to great work!!!
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  • From uniqueindividual on February 20, 2012
    Whoa, Naraku is one smooth talker. O.O'
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  • From SplendentGoddess on February 19, 2012
    Oh damn, even I almost believed Naraku before I mentally smacked myself upside the head. Wonderful update! Holy shit, that evil bastard, making Inuyasha think he's the good guy! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - js on February 19, 2012
    Wow, that was shocking. I would never have thought that they would stay the night with Naraku.
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  • From ANON - ashley on February 07, 2012
    Moar?! Please! I started reading this at like 5am and I'm liked....devasted there isn't more to read as of yet. I really like how you've incorporated the charaters and how you've allowed their personalites to mesh together over time. So, I can expect more soon, yes? :) please?
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  • From ANON - hanna on January 08, 2012
    OMG. I live this fic!!!!!!!!!!! can"t wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - nina on December 01, 2011
    Hey i love your story it really is good :D

    But just so you know when a royal speaks to someone of the same rank they dont use -sama but -dono so when sesshomaru talks to manten for example he would say manten-dono and not sama becauses it would implies that manten has a higher status.

    *waiting for the next chapter* ^^
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  • From uniqueindividual on November 13, 2011
    happy Belated Birthday! Thanks for updating!
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