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By : Ilana
  • From ANON - romana on June 19, 2006
    hi i was wondering when will u finish this story? i like it so far:)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2006
    Have you actually even seen or read Inuyasha? Sesshoumaru is by far the more powerful of the two. It's what makes his defeats at Inuyasha's hands so ironic. Inuyasha has luck, grit, and above all he's fighting for something. That's how he wins.
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  • From ANON - FYI on May 31, 2006
    actually, inuyasha is almost as powerful as sesshomaru because of their father's fang, and even with that great added bonus he cannot kill his brother, so sesshomaru is more powerful and were inuyasha to become a demon he would no longer be able to use his advantage and sesshomaru would be more powerful
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  • From ANON - mary on May 28, 2006
    peale keep writing to be the alpha i love it
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  • From ANON - wicked hentai on March 11, 2006
    so kagome is the alpha of sesshomaru and inuyasha and now inuyasha is a full youkai wich wasn't a bad idea,now inuyasha is more powerful and is dominating sesshomaru and now sesshomaru and inu are being dominated by kagome and sesshomaru hates. even thought sess like it and submits and he craves kagome but his rational side demands that kagome submit to him.

    so he gets kagome to undress and submit to him and he's been planning it for a while now and sesshomaru is angry at kagome because she gets special attention from inuyasha and because his inu submits to her causing him to submit as well. so now sesshomaru wants to get back at kagome for all of that and make her submit to him on her ningen nights when inuyasha isn't there but goes back to the other way when kagome isn't a ningen and when inuyasha is there.

    so what will happen next?

    will there be more time for another new moon night? during the time in between the nights of the new moon will sesshomaru be more submissive and pleasure kagome when she asks instead of ignoring her or refusing? what if kagome and sesshomaru are going at on the night of the new moon and don't her inu come home and he goes to there bed chamber and sees them fucking? will he be angry at them or will he want to join in and what about that mark on kagome's neck and will things be different now between kagome and sesshomaru?

    that would be good if inu came in on the night of the new moon and saw them rutting and so into it that they don't notice him. not to hurt inuyasha but what would be his reaction?

    update soon

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - wynter89 on February 09, 2006
    interesting. i never thought of that... i wonder what will happen if somehow (if it is possible) that sesshomaru over throws kagome as alpha when she is hanyou... could be cause of all of those nights being dominated on her human nights... anyway i really liked reading it. i wonder who is more perverted Miroku or us readers reading it... lol
    good luck
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  • From ANON - Nik on February 08, 2006
    Sweet really really really god story i give you props that was tight so now can you write chapeter 3?
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  • From ANON - Kirake on February 04, 2006
    CCCCCCCCCOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLL i loved it wow your so good go Kagome she rules lol I just have to know what's gona happen when Inuyasha returns you have to keep writting please the story is so good update it and soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Ally on January 29, 2006
    hey...can you please update part 3!! I wanna knoow what happens..thankyou
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  • From ANON - angeluswilliam on January 28, 2006
    very enjoyable fic Sess. has been a bad boy
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  • From ANON - BlueMoon on January 27, 2006
    NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO Don't stop it their come on you got to be kidding me why i need more come on that was so not fair update this damn thing please for the love of Kami
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  • From ANON - Sesshy's_wifey on January 27, 2006
    Well i see kags gets to fuck my husband naw j/k its cool that was hott ya know you really need to update this story cause its really good can't wait to see what happens when Inuyasha returns upate soon ok
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  • From ANON - ANgelic_one on January 27, 2006
    WWWOOOOOWWW OMG this is like the best thing ever, this is like a one of a kind story I LOVED IT your so talented you SO HAVE TO UPATE THIS STORY PLEASE IM BEGGIN YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - RedRoseBlueThorns on January 24, 2006
    That was amazing!! Not to mention satisfying! I really enjoyed it! I like the fact that Sesshoumaru has dominance over Kagome during her ningen nights. It actually felt good to know that the whole alpha thing isn't getting to Kagome's head. Great job!! I thoroughly loved it and I deeply recommend it to anyone who favors hot, steamy sex between two very sexy demons and our favorite miko. Who knew this innocent looking girl had such a wild, passionate, seductive side?
    I liked the way you portrayed her here, so again great job! Can't wait till the update!

    RedRoseBlueThorns

    P.S. You are a fantastic writer! Keep it coming and going!
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  • From ANON - Neko914 on January 21, 2006
    WOW i love this story its so awsome you have to update soon plz omg i was friggin hooked to the screen reading this story come on update soon ppppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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