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Reviews for To Be The Alpha

By : Ilana
  • From ANON - Nella on December 16, 2005
    HEY YOU REALLY NEED TO UPDATE THIS STORY IS SO FRIGGIN GOOD I LOVE IT UPDATE UPDATE UDPATE UPDATE PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ IM BEGGIN YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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  • From ANON - Sango0596 on December 15, 2005
    That story was pretty good. Maybe make Inuyasha the alpha and get sesshomaru out of the picture! All he wants to do is fuck Kagome!
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  • From ANON - inunaiomi on October 18, 2005
    hottness
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  • From DL69 on October 17, 2005
    please update soon T_T cant wait to read more T_T
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  • From ANON - No Sugar Added (not signed in) on August 29, 2005
    Oh, yay! I'm so glad you decided to write more chapters ^_^. You know, this could easily turn into a story with more that 3 chapters if you wanted it to; it could explore the relationships further. Just a thought.

    You're a very talented writer, and I really liked seeing someone actually make an effort to keep Sesshoumaru in-character. Even I have a hard time writing him in-character.

    Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you post it soon!

    - NSA
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 27, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Kito on August 27, 2005
    I was suprised, and a little curious, when I read the summary of your story. I think it's a great plot and has a lot of twists that the reader dosen't expect. I read the first chapter and really liked it a lot. But, the second chapter I don't like as much. I think you should have left it as a one-shot, and posted the 2nd chapter as a sequel. I want to see where you take this story though. Great work on an outstanding peice of fiction.
    Kito.
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  • From ANON - anon on August 26, 2005
    Really how many times does it take to edit two chapters? You had two chapters for awhile, yet it is constantly being pushed up front. No one spells that bad, sorry. Think me an asshole all you want but you are being a review whore. You are pushing other works down just to keep yours up front.
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  • From DL69 on August 26, 2005
    WOW OMG that was...was...i can't describe it...it was just WOW
    i cant wait to see inuyasha's reaction to sesshy's being a bad puppy and hurting hagome

    and one more thing are we going to be seeing any puppies??? and where is rin during all this???
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 24, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Inukagsess7 on August 22, 2005
    great story keep it up upate soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cac on August 21, 2005
    OH MY GOD! WHEN DID the new chapter come out!!! I mised it! can't wait for more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 17, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Ashley on August 09, 2005
    Great chapter as always lol. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Neko_Baby on August 09, 2005
    Oh wow I LOVE this story! You MUST update...PLLLLLEEEEAAASSSEEEE HUURRRYYYY WITH THE UPDATE!!!
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