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Reviews for To Be The Alpha

By : Ilana
  • From ANON - ktakn on August 09, 2005
    excelente!!!!!!!!!! genial capitulo!!!

    por favor kontinua!!!!


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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2005
    i like it
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  • From ANON - Anne on July 26, 2005
    I really enjoyed your story, but there was one thing that bothered me at the end. Kagome said twelve days of the year she was submissive, but there are thirteen lunar cycles to a year. One month a year there are two full moons, the second of which is called a "blue moon," and correspondingly there is one month a year where there are two new moons. The western calendar is a solar calendar, following the movements of the sun, but the Chinese calendar and some other calendars are lunar calendars, having thirteen months to the year. *Gets off of soapbox* Feel free to ignore me, but that was the one jarring note to an otherwise lovely PWP. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the sequel.
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  • From ANON - Cac on July 25, 2005
    Nice twist with who the alpha turns out to be! And so hot... And to that last A/N, YES, and I'm going to be really cranky if I have to wait fot september! Oh wait, maybe the A/N is old, like last year? Probably no such luck...
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 16, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - bettychan on July 15, 2005
    Are you still thinking about a sequel? I hope so. I'd love to read what happens on the new moon.
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  • From ANON - jusLikeyOu on July 13, 2005
    aww doode! ya need to keep going wirth the story! too good to stop!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on July 12, 2005
    SEQUEL *Grabs you and shakes you* PLEASE? *Gives you puppy eyes* Pwease? I loved it ^.^
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  • From ANON - Dark_Lady_69 on July 10, 2005
    yes i think u should do a sequal for her human night and one for the childern she has for them both ^_^
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  • From ANON - Inu_lova on July 08, 2005
    >.< good! lol
    hope u do make the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - No Sugar Added (too lazy to sign in) on July 08, 2005
    I liked it! It seemed a little OOC for Sesshoumaru to be the submissive; his personality screams dominance - but it was a nice change. Go for the sequel. It will be fantastic, I'm sure!
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  • From ANON - Skanky-Hime on July 08, 2005
    I must admit that i had never thought about a Kag/Inu/Sess trio before, but i think i like it. It certainly does solve the age old question of Inu/Kag or Sess/Kag. Good job!
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  • From FullMetalBlunt on July 08, 2005
    I'd read it if you continued!
    It's so hard to find good uke Sesshomaru.
    Mmmm...uke Sesshomaru ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kagz on July 08, 2005
    I think a sequel with Kag on her human night would be and awsome idea go for it, beacuse I loved this one.

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  • From ANON - One happy girl! on July 06, 2005
    Please, write the next one. The one where Kagome has a new moon. I loved tis story by the way ^_^
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