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Reviews for Unforeseen Obstacles

By : Xakana
  • From ANON - VioletStar on March 09, 2008
    *Applauds* The only thing I have to say is that I'm anticipating in what's going to happen in later chapters. The way the story is starting just makes me smile, shake my head and think 'Oh, Miroku!' :) Will read more when I'm at the library again. We need more authors, like yourself, who knows how to express their visions and thoughts in written/typing format. xoxo
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  • From Iarejedi on December 15, 2007
    That was a great story. I loved it. It's hard to find a decent Sess/Mir story that isn't to over the top or badly written. But this was both wonderfully written and very well thought out. I actually wasn't upset with how fast the last chapter moved. It was nice because sometimes it gets old and annoying to read someone's long drawn out chapter on the death of Naroku. Anywho loved it alot :D Great Job.
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  • From ANON - Maria on October 23, 2006
    Hey this is the first Sesshomaru/Miroku fic that I've read and I really enjoyed it though I think that the ending came to quick :P... anyways I hope to read more of our work soon... Ja ne
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  • From ANON - Maria on October 23, 2006
    Hey this is the first Sesshomaru/Miroku fic that I've read and I really enjoyed it though I think that the ending came to quick :P... anyways I hope to read more of our work soon... Ja ne
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  • From ANON - Raven on September 13, 2005
    Since I am finding it rather hard to find anything to complain about in your story, I am ratehr happy that you made one small mistake. It is true that Sesshoumaru holds the fang of heaven, but it is the Tetsaiga that he holds, not the Tetseiga, which belongs to Inuyasha. A small mistake, but many make it since the swords are so close in spelling. Just thought that you'd like to know.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on August 28, 2005
    I enjoyed this story very much, but was very disappointed at the last chapter--actually felt a bit cheated. It was very anticlimactic. We were told what happened more than lived it. We didn't live the battle scene with Naraku, nor the bittersweet nights between Miroku and Sesshoumaru. Nor did we live the angst of Miroku's growing worry over his hand. I know it would have been more work, but you had done so well with the rest of the story that this was a bit of a surprise, as though you were in a hurry and didn't feel like writing it. You are a good writer and I feel that you are capable of doing much more with the ending of the story.

    But all in all, I enjoyed the fic.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Rose on August 15, 2005
    That was very good.
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  • From ANON - snowfall on August 04, 2005
    I apologize for not keeping up with my reviews. Sesshoumaru's howl was so sad, I almost cried. And then to have Miroku haunted by the darkness within him. Such angst. Such a horrible effect the mononoke had on Miroku. It was horrible. I found Sesshoumaru's fight against his feelings at the beginning of the story kept him in character. Even when he pondered why humans had to make it so difficult. He really didn't want to say that he loved Miroku. It was so touching when Sesshoumaru laid down beside Miroku while Miroku died that first time and so angsty when Sess stormed off. You carefully grew the characters into fresh feelings of love and kinship. You were able to keep the focus on Sess and Miroku while still involving the other characters. It was a wonderful story well told.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - Kira on July 26, 2005
    aaaaa....its over....I've putting this off for as ling as possibale so it wouldnt be over, and now it is..... my eyes are all teary...its not faaaair!! T-T well, i love the storry, and I will make sure to read the others.... T-T
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  • From ANON - crystaladept on July 25, 2005
    Ch 25-26:

    Gomen ne. I meant to reveiw for chapter 25 by it's self, but my mom had kicked my offline before I could.

    It's over, eh... but you left so many things unanswered. Where do they go from there? What happens now? Won't they miss eachother? How far will their relationships go? Is it really over, or just a trick, played by Naraku.

    *points an accusing finger at you* You're Naraku! You evil evil evil person... er... hanyou... heh heh heh... uh... *cough*

    *runs off to find Miroku, where ever he went and dream that the lovely author would write another chapter.*
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on July 25, 2005
    Its over?? *wails and cries with you* (pulls tissue from bra, for the both of us*hugs*) I'm going to miss playing with you *ohhs that sounds really hentai... snicker* Seriously, I loved the story, and you responses to everyone. I do believe this is the first time I have been killed a few times though. *thrown off cliff.. landing on Jaken.. died twice then.. falling off cliff a few times.. now at the mercy of Sesshoumaru.. *Ohhs now I'm a youkai sue... dies with smile on face*

    My poor dark hottie *wails* Aww love how you went into Inuyasha starting to care about Sesshoumaru's feelings. How they sparred and will become true brothers now. I felt so bad for Sesshoumaru when his human companions went through the barrier and he couldn't see, hear or scent them. It showed how much he really cares for Miroku and Rin.

    It's going to be strange checking the yaoi area, and not seeing this one, and checking the chapter numbers to see if it was updated. Ack, I’m feeling kinda lost right now, thinking about it. You wrapped up and ended the story very nicely.Thank you, for allowing me the pleasure to read this!! You really have a way with the written word. Really good, intense story! I will be watching for any other stories you post!!
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  • From ANON - kai on July 25, 2005
    i really enjoyed it!! everything ended well!! so great job! write some more!! XDD
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  • From ANON - shanna on July 25, 2005
    *gasp* It's over? It's over??? It can't beeee!! It feels like I JUST started reading this story!!! *sniff* you are such a good writer, I'm gonna miss the constant updates and alll the fun reader responses and all the yummy goodness between Miroku and Sesshomaru!! You so totally rock! I like the ending... it actually sounded like the narrator at the ending of a tv show... you know, how they go "And as the days passed, peace decended upon the land, and all the nations were happy." Stuff like that. You are such a good writer, you should write more stories for me to read. I love you! and I love your stories! Now I'm gonna go read the WHOLE THING all over again. I like the *tiny* little mini-lemon... you are sooo good to me. *glomp glomp glomp* keep up the good work, I'll keep checking for more new sparkly stories!!
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  • From ANON - bob on July 25, 2005
    noo it's over???? i luved thiis story and you should definitely write a sequel...just cuz i said so but you're a great writer please continue writing!
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  • From ANON - lilly on July 24, 2005
    Wow. And so, as all things in life, this too must end. I am impressed. You tie up loose ends very well. At one point, I thought it seemed a little too analytical, or maybe just like an emotionless recitation of the events, but then I read it again. And then I read it again. I think I was just not very accepting of the end... However, you still kept your style and wonderful way with words, and I love the happiness present. It could not continue on forever, yet you managed a joyful transition to the next stage in their lives. I truly enjoyed this story, and will look forward to more of your writing. You have a fan in me! *hugs back* And I have also truly enjoyed reviewing your story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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