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Reviews for Fading away

By : Akikazehana
  • From ardentes on April 25, 2011
    Ohh my goodness! I really enjoyed this chapter! It was really cute and had some very interesting scenes. I liked the fox in there! That was very amusing. I really enjoy this story and I hope to read more soon!
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  • From Vyper on April 14, 2011
    I love the diolouge between the two brothers. It is nice that they have become more than just brothers, but the fact that they act like brothers on occasion is nice. I look forward to your next chapter. I love this story.
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  • From kmoaton on April 14, 2011
    This was a wonderful chapter. I love the story of why Inuyasha has his human night. The fact that he is sharing the secret of his human night with Sesshomaru shows how much trust and care has developed between them. I'm anxious to know how much his aging human half truly affects him! I am completely in love with this story!
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  • From Vyper on April 14, 2011
    I loved that sweet love scene in the forest. It was so romantic and I love how Sesshoumaru cares deeply for his little brother. I think they are falling in love with each other which will be so difficult for Sesshoumaru to deal with when Inuyasha is gone from him. There has to be a way for Sesshoumaru to extend Inuyasha's life. I don't think Sesshoumaru would want to live without Inuyasha around.
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  • From AmandaBMor on April 13, 2011
    absolutely beautiful.
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  • From dragonfire2687 on April 01, 2011
    I really like this story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Vyper on March 27, 2011
    I think Sesshoumaru is falling in love with Inuyasha. He says that he likes Inuyasha a lot, but I think there is more to it than that. Nice chapter by the way. I am looking forward to reading the next update.
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  • From Vyper on March 23, 2011
    I have to say your story is beautifully written, it tears at the soul and yet makes it whole again and again. Inuyasha is dying a bit every day so what will Sesshoumaru do once he is no longer there? Will he pick up where his little brother left off?
    I like this line: “Because an existence without a proof is void of any life.”
    Perhaps as pseudo writers we leave our mark on the world as well in a sense since we all know Inuyasha and the characters of the show belong to someone else. It is the idea that we own them temporarily that makes us do what we do.
    I wonder about many different things sometimes and think about writing an original of my own with my own characters that I can claim as my own. However it is not as entertaining as using these beloved characters to live by our whims sometimes doing things that we ourselves cannot do for one reason or another.
    Writing is so very personal and you make each piece your own no matter what the rules say.
    I believe it is finally good to see Sesshoumaru drown in Inuyasha's emotions trying to hang onto him only to find himself lost in the abyss of love itself which he is trying to cope with by living in denial of his true feelings. It is just too bad that these emotions for his little brother couldn't have surfaced sooner.


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  • From ardentes on March 22, 2011
    That was an awesome chapter! I really like how this story is turning out. Sesshomaru isn't a giggly little school girl but he isn't a cold bastard either. I also like how Inuyasha explained why he writes, because I know I've done something similar for myself. I love this story and I wish you luck with the next chapter. I will try to review as soon as I can, but I cannot guarantee that I will be able to review as often as I have been. I wonder what you will have them do in the next chapter.
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  • From ajj77sunhawk on March 22, 2011
    ahhhh loved the last bit.. sweet. Throughly enjoyed the first bit - funny can see Inuyasha being not impressec by Sesshy's worry.
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  • From ardentes on March 22, 2011
    Oh my goodness, I was not expecting a sexual scene so quickly, but man was that delicious. I enjoyed this chapter immensely and I hope to read more soon! I wonder how this will change their relationship? Will Sesshomaru insist on knowing what is going on in Inuyasha's body or will Inuyasha tell him openly or will they both avoid the subject? Will Sesshomaru be able to help Inuyasha with whatever is going on? I am really curious what will happen next! Please update soon!
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  • From ajj77sunhawk on March 21, 2011
    Hot, hot, hot.. wow that was good. Nice appertizer, waiting for the main course. I like the way you used the word 'enlaced' it kindda went with how fragile inuyasaha seemed. lol, poor sesshy, doesnt like himself as the bad guy in the book. hehehehe thanks fr the speedy update
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  • From AmandaBMor on March 21, 2011
    I love this story. Your style is elegant and beautiful. You make me ache for both Sesshomaru and Inuyasha. Thank you.
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  • From Vyper on March 21, 2011
    What a hot steamy chapter. Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are finally making some serious progress in their relationship. I only hope that neither of them regret it since it would be nice for them both to love each other in some way even if it isn't just brotherly.
    It also seems like Inuyasha has a new lease on life and that Sesshoumaru is filling that empty void of lonliness that Inuyasha has had most of his life. I think Sesshoumaru is equally as lonely as his little brother. It is apparent both brothers need one another.
    I would like to see the two of them maybe writing a book together before Inuyasha eventually dies since he will die before Sesshoumaru. It could be even just a book about their new relationship.
    Anyway, great chapter and I hope to read more as you update.
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  • From midnightsweet on March 21, 2011
    we r almost there. i hope no one dies.
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