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Reviews for Fading away

By : Akikazehana
  • From ajj77sunhawk on March 16, 2011
    hmm I liked the pace, but inu getting bitterer at the attentin has to be expalined. Sadder I can get - but bitter?? anyway looking forwrad to the explaination thanks for updating so well. SunHawk
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  • From Vyper on March 16, 2011
    It almost seems that Inuyasha is dying a little bit every time he writes. It is good Sesshoumaru is around his little brother and I hope Inuyasha soon finds his big brother's companionship to be soothing.
    It also seems that Sesshoumaru is falling in love with Inuyasha as he gets closer to his little brother. Perhaps Inuyasha feels this and is afraid to let his own feelings for Sesshoumaru show and that is why he wants to keep his elder brother away.
    Anyway, I love this story and I hope to see another update soon.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on March 14, 2011
    Your story is lovely and touching and I thank you for writing it I hope that you finish it for it would be a shame to not finish such a beautiful beginning.
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  • From kmoaton on March 14, 2011
    I love the budding relationship that is developing between them and how could Sess not see himself in the story of the dancer and the deformed brother? I am really enjoying this and you are doing excellent. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ladytokyo on March 14, 2011
    You know I feel like you have this great gift for writing as well. The tone of your writing to explain Inuyasha's work of art through Sesshomaru eyes is just fantastic. It has me wishing I can stay up all night reading in which I have plenty experience in doing with a good book. Thank you for the 2 updates it really made my day to come home from work and be able to read this. I can't wait to read your updates and good luck with your math test.
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  • From Vyper on March 14, 2011
    I am surprised that Sesshoumaru really did not understand the true meaning of the book concerning the two brothers. One being disfigured and the other beautiful.
    It was basically a story about the two Inu brothers and their rivalry in the past. The dedication really fit the story. Sesshoumaru is an idiot if he doesn't get that one and I highly doubt my beloved Sesshoumaru is stupid. In hating the elder brother in the story he is basically hating himself.
    I seriously hope that Sesshoumaru can help Inuyasha since he seems to be kind of ill and malnurished. I really think Inuyasha needs someone to care for him. He must be lonely after all of these years.
    I also want to say I love your writing style. It is inspiring and I hope that you will have a new update soon.
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  • From Vyper on March 13, 2011
    I like this story so far. I look forward to your updates.
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  • From ladytokyo on March 13, 2011
    Oh I really enjoyed this I hope you will be updating soon I would love love love to continue to read more.
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  • From kmoaton on March 13, 2011
    I just found this story this morning and I eagerly await more. So far, it is beautiful and well told!
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  • From ajj77sunhawk on March 13, 2011
    nice very nice. That was a rather uniue and cool start. Looking forward to more
    Good luck
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