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From ANON - Snowfall on November 15, 2010
Oh, that was cute and intriguing! What kind of magic was that? Inuyasha's mother or father must have been very special for him to be able to manifest his pup form. Very cute. ^_^

Sorry, five hours sleep in two days just isn't enough and I was sleeping. My schedule might be changing soon, especially since we had another fire and it has made me really sick.
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From Vyper on November 15, 2010
I love Pup. He is so dang cute. Sesshoumaru is being so patient and kind too. I really love this side of Sesshoumaru. I only hope he can undo the damage that was done to poor Inuyasha both psychologically and physically.
I also want to thank you for your review of my story. I, like every writer, looks forward to reviews since they are what makes all this work worthwhile.
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From ANON - river girl on November 15, 2010
Ah....Sesshemoru has a flare for the dramatic, doesn't he? (claps happily) The details, details. I loved the details in this chapter. Read it twice before I reviewed to enjoy all of them. Like displacing the healer's cloak with his tail when Sesshemoru takes Inuyasha in his arms, the way he doesn't let anyone else see Inuyasha's human face, the careful observances of the healer's anger and the quick curiosity that still lingers even after everything he has seen and done as a ruler and demon lord.

I had no problems with the section in Inuyasha's mind. Seemed clear to me. I'm curious and excited for Inuyasha's interaction with the rest of the world, now that he has access to all of his personality and his memories. How will Pup handle Sesshemoru, I wonder. Will Sesshemoru every fully grasp the complexity of the creature he has decided to posses. I love his possessiveness. I just hope our darling healer comes out whole! I wonder if Inuyasha can even handle affection after all this time? Can he believe it? He has great concern and love for others, but will he understand it when it is reciprocated? I hope he keeps his gentleness and compassion. I have to believe he does. Even after all this time, he hasn't once had an angry thought. Even when he killed, he was compassionate through his own pain and suffering.

Thank you for making Manten bleed. I definately hope you aren't finished with him. And please, please, be nice to our darling healer. The horse hanyou is to nice for his own good and shows remarkable inability to defend himself, which only adds to his charm. With a less decerning master though, he might find himself quite abused.

Next chapter, pretty please! I hope your hands are hanging in there!
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From ANON - starlight on November 15, 2010
This is my favorite chapter so far!! I love how the four Inuyasha's are connected now! I'm so glad Sesshoumaru is back! I love the reasoning you had as to why Sesshoumaru is taking Inuyasha with him instead of leaving him with the healer. It makes a lot of sense and I'm so excited for Inuyasha to be in Sesshoumaru's bedroom!! I love the flow of the story and felt that you really had Sesshoumaru and the charracters personalities spot on! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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From ANON - Princess Sin on November 14, 2010
you needn't worry on my part. i thought the inuyasha
scene made complete sense. it was so sad when he found
pup lying on the ground unconsicous. but i am so glad
that creep maten got what he deserves. hopefully, he
will be punished fully and without mercy.
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From Vyper on November 14, 2010
God this story is so damn good I am dying here for another chapter. Inuyasha in Sesshoumaru's arms in his room as his hanyou. What the hell can beat that? Not a damn thing. Fuck! I am going to lose my mind here.
I am an author too as you probably already know, but I can't beat this nor would I try. I am litterally on the edge of my seat going what the fuck! Don't leave me hanging here!
I have to admit a slight hate for Kagome and Kikyo in general they are not my favorite characters, but to make them so damn evil....WOW.
You know I am going to be up and like reading this until you write some more you awsome bastard! I just can't believe this shit! Now I can die in peace I think.......not.....
Anyway nice story.
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From AvidYasha on November 14, 2010
i have to say that this is a diffrent point of view than ive read before but i deff like it. keep it up ur doing great.
and of course PLEASE UPDATE.
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From ANON - Caitriona on November 14, 2010
The only question I had as I was reading this was that if the hanyou aspect and Pup had merged, how could they still be 4 'seperate' entities? Perhaps I just got a little confused. Other than that, I think this chapter is a home run. The scenes within Inuyasha's mind and sanctuary were beautiful and wonderfully written. You've followed through with each of their personalities through each of the chapters. Even Sesshomaru's character as you've written him up to this point has been true to itself. (I have trouble with authors who start off with a character having one persona and then switch it around to another willy-nilly)
I can't believe that Manten really believes that he was doing what he was told. I mean taunting someone with food with the idea to give it to them when they begged for it is something completely different from offering the food and it being refused. grrrr. I hope he gets more than a simple hand mushing. I can totally see Sess offering Inuyasha the decision as to his fate and Inuyasha letting him go, but I hope that isn't what happens.
Wonderful wonderful chapter. Thanks so for writing it!
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From jdbbrz27 on November 14, 2010
I had been waiting for this thank you for being so quick and prompt. I thought it all made perfect sense how the four parts of Inuyasha finally were able to come together and be one something Inuyasha desperately needed and now has it was done beautifully. I also like the possessiveness that Jeninji felt towards Inuyasha especially with their mutual connection of both being hanyous wonderfully touching. I have to admit my favorite part was the jealous possessive and protectiveness of Sesshomaru though that was truly and lovingly done for the two have a closer connection than the hanyous being that they are both Siro Inu Dog Demons I can not wait to see what happens next it is really exciting. I really liked like when Sesshomaru got mad he his all the demons with his whip that's what they get for following stupid orders when circumstances have changed in a particular situation good thing not all soldiers and generals do that or there would be some different winners in certain wars of the past in this world. You are doing a fantastic job with this story keep it up.
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From ANON - Laura on November 14, 2010
Yay this is one of the best stories I've ever read! Please, continue as soon as possible! :D
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From ANON - river girl on November 13, 2010
Jeez, I'm too tired to write you the review you deserve. So...um...read the chapter earlier today, didn't have time to review then and wanted to give some encouragement for your weekend, so writing before I totally fall asleep. I really, really like the healer.

And I shuddered with anticipation at the end. Somebody is so gonna get it. Inuyasha is still breaking my heart. When he told the earlier it was ok and then passed out, I just wanted to bust in there and rescue him.

Dying of anticipation for the entrance of the Demon Lord.
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From trystkinkou on November 12, 2010
mmeeeeewwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE it when you do that. :P I can't wait til the next chapter i'm literally bouncing around for it. And someone BETTER be getting it for all their sleep getting disturbed. ^^
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From ANON - Caitriona on November 12, 2010
Chapter 9

In the first part of this chapter, even Jinenji was trying to come up with some kind of reason that Manten would have starved Inuyasha like this, but I'm glad that he let his healer senses outweigh his sense of 'propriety' and chain of command. There was no excuse.

I'm surprised that others didn't back Jinenji more - they obviously don't like Manten any more than the rest of us if Jakotsu's reaction is an indication. I'm surprised that they didn't at least listen to what Jinenji had to say. If he was the chief healer, they each would have had to put themselves in his care at least once or twice, even if they are youkai and heal far more easily than normal. A person who has received medication help from someone will usually hold them in at least a little respect. But perhaps I'm reading more into this than I should.

I'm glad Sess is going to be there now to at least get the poor hanyou turned human back into the right hands!

Thanks for writing!
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From ANON - Caitriona on November 12, 2010
Chapter 8

Huzzah Jinenji!! I didn't think that he would be back in time to make any kind of a difference, but he did. Whoo Hoo!

About 1/2 way though this chapter, when you mentioned that Manten was actually coming to taunt and tempt Inuyasha, I got really rather mad at him. I can't wait until Sess and the rest of the party come back and see just what has happened. I'm glad that Yasha will survive to see it, too. Yasha needs to see that not all youkai are as evil and twisted as Manten is.

Your telling of the years of Jinenji's struggles with Death were really rather interesting. I loved the idea of Death being reluctant to take Inuyasha because his passing was so unnatural, unjust and unnecessary. I also liked the kindness Jinenji showed the little nurse. She was really put in the middle for all of this. How DARE that refuse order the poor little think to keep silent when he knew the truth. I certainly hope his punishment fits his crimes!

I also liked how you had Jinenji open the door to the prison. It was just as horse-like an action as Inuyasha's occasional ear-scratch and made me smile.

Off to read the next chapter! Thanks for sharing!

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From midnightsweet on November 12, 2010
this is nice. i like it. update soon
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