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Reviews for SURVIVE

By : ajj77sunhawk
  • From ANON - Princess Sin on November 07, 2010
    this story is great and chapter three was so depressing. it
    just breaks my heart to see inu going through so much pain
    and heartache because of those hypocritial bitches. if you
    love your readers you will make them pay big time before
    they die. i know it will make me happy.
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on November 06, 2010
    I like the fact that Sess not only has a sister, but that he also has other siblings and children. I do find the children interesting. If he had made his promise to not have legitimate children over a century ago, I wonder why he waited so long to actually have the children. Is it that he is getting older and his biological clock is going off? But I do like how you have emphasized the relationship between the ShiroInu - even though they are not close, they protect their own with sometimes terrible consequences. It leaves you a lot of latitude to explain Sess's final possessive acceptance of Inuyasha after he proclaims him as his own. (something I assume you are going to do)

    I found Manten's inclusion in the piece to be somewhat humorous. I never really liked him, so seeing him as a sycophant approaching death through his own "yes" man attitude fills me with some glee. I was also plesantly surprised to see Jeninji within the court. He was always such a tragic character in the original Manga. I hope that in some way his being there will ease the way for Inuyasha when me comes. Myo's honest sympathy was a nice touch, too.

    I was intrigued by having the collar be the sticking point with Sesshomaru. I would have thought that it would be the unwilling servitude of one of his hanyous or perhaps even interest in the fact that a hanyou was somehow produced magically is what would make him go to the City.

    Can we please see Kagome and company die now?

    Thanks for writing for us. I'm enjoying this a lot.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on November 06, 2010
    That was not alot for it was to interesting for it to be alot to read. Interesting history on Sesshomaru although now I really am wondering who Inuyasha's parents are and why they seem to have abandoned the poor little thing. I can't even imagine someone so cruel as to hurt that poor little one Kagome really needs to die painfully. I'll be waiting for the next update constantly wondering what is going to happen next.
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  • From quittie on November 06, 2010
    I am one jolly person but after reading this I consumed all the cleenex my house keeps! I will definitely continue reading this! Inuyasha... be happy... T.T
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  • From ANON - river girl on November 06, 2010
    Enjoying this. Sorry, real life didn't let me read and review yesterday. I feel like I have a good grasp of both Sesshemoru and Inuyahsa as a reader. I didn't see Sesshemoru's most likely need to kill Inuyasha because of the collar, though I was thinking, "Yes!, please, take that Temple of Light, playing with something you shouldn't!". I was surprised and now waiting nervously to see how they meet and what the reception on each side will be like. The tension is building.
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on November 05, 2010
    This was an interesting chapter. I was intrigued by Inuyasha's childhood and that even in his early childhood he had the four versions of himself. That the demon version of himself protected the human version was also interesting to me. I enjoyed the hows and whys of Inuyasha's 5 days of solitude. It made me think of all the odd taboos of modern religion that may have spawned from valid reasons, but are now just strange. (jews and pork for example) I am interested in seeing where you plan on taking the 5 days concept. At this point in the game, I really want for the Kagome/Kikyou collective to get their asses handed to them on platters. I doubt that will change though.

    This is shaping up to be a very interesting read. I look forward to reading more tomorrow.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on November 05, 2010
    Hi what's Nano anyway. Anyway to your new story it's different I gotta say and it must be interesting or I would not bother to review it and I certainly would not wonder what was going to happen next. I really would like to kill Kikyo and Kagome though and everyone else in that wretched city how dare they treat anyone that callously and cruelly let alone a sweet sensitive downright beautiful Inuyasha oh it makes me so mad and usually I reserve that kind of anger for Sesshomaru or sometimes Kouga depending on the story and plot. I'll be keeping an eye on this one to see where you take it it is a bit esoteric but I think I can handle it because it's not so much so that it's downright impossible to understand so I'll wait to see where we go with this one.
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on November 04, 2010
    Excellent start to your Nano. You works usually have a touch of darkness about them that is completely crushed by the light and fluffiness at the end. I hope, though this one is planned to be darker, it will still end up with the same eventual happiness for the characters.

    I liked the separate, multiple personality aspect of this piece so far. Not only the 3 aspects of Inuyasha, but also his 4th side, his joy and hope. I liked that little guy.

    Looking forward to new chapters and reading more. Thanks for writing for us!
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  • From ANON - arya on November 04, 2010
    it's good, really good, but updating in 24 hours!? hope you can maintain the quality, 'cause it would be really sad if this wonderful story turned out bad because of haste.
    good luck, i'm looking forward to the next part!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - river girl on November 04, 2010
    Hey,

    So, I'm not sure I've read any of your stuff before, but I really enjoyed this first chapter. The conversation in Mongrol's mind was more than split personality, seemed to be trying to go beyond that somewhat commonly used scenario. I enjoyed it. The death seen for the Lust Monster was touching, and sad and thoughtful. Kikyo was cold, scary cold with the logic going. Unfortunately that kind of logic seems to be repeated in history too much. I'd say your monsters live in the Temple of Light in this story, all the more terrifying for championing light. So, will someone be coming to rescue, revive, something. Inuyasha is, just...what they've done to him is just so wrong! I look forward to where this is going to go. Guess you already have me rooting for the characters.
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