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Reviews for SURVIVE

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  • From ANON - Caitriona on April 03, 2011
    Lovely chapter of Survive. I rather like that you have Sessy waiting and tempting our little Inuyasha. It makes it very very yummy. I'm also very very interested in just where the Kikyou (boo hisss) storyline is going.

    Thanks for writing!
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  • From jdbbrz27 on April 03, 2011
    Saw it and loved it. Again you have hit how Sesshy would react in this type of situation and how poor sweet little Inuyasha would react. It's interesting to have the Shikon no tama itself as the bad poison very new kind of take. I loved how Sesshy wanted you to write it and I to can't wait to see Sessh bestow pleasure and love on our little Hanyou. Boy I wish I had your way with words totally amazing. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - river girl on April 03, 2011
    Hey! I'm still reading. I think I missed reviewing your last update. Shoot!
    Maybe some people are saying Sesshemoru is different, however in the context of this story, I am enjoying him completely and feel you did set up up well with his background. The interplay as he sort of affectionately stalks his Beta is lovely to read and enjoy and you can feel the slow build up. He's being a rather willful character for you, isn't he?

    Is there going to be any whiplash emotionally from Inuyasha? Like he lets things go, what happens the next time he meets a threat? Realizes there's still danger in his world. It seems like he really trusts his Alpha, so maybe not. He's so strong and so fragile. I'm rooting for his new found family but especially Sesshemoru as they continue to piece up back into his full nature. It's beautiful to watch the love and protection they're all showing.

    Thank you for the new chapter. Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2011
    I like how you gave background for Kikyo, making it so she wasn't just evil, but slowly corrupted through power.
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  • From ANON - T'Amara on March 27, 2011
    This is so SWEET - Love Lord Stripey being jealous of his love's own GRANDFATHER for ghu's sake, wanting his time to himself, but hey, they haven't really had that much time together. And leaving Miroku in the hands of a certain eagar-for-knowledge healer, cracked me up, TACTICS!!! Then the woods, oh my THE TREES, and that holy one in particular. It's interesting how different their relationship is, Sess and Inu, because Inu's horrible life is not in any way Sess's fault. He is not bearing the guilt that he would in most timelines and he can react with a calm, whole-hearted love and passion that are not tainted by what he SHOULD have done earlier. And I love the way he accepts all of the aspects, this is a particularly split persona Inu, more than usual, and I'm pleased that they seem to accept Sess as Alpha, and much more. And oh oh!!!! Something nasty stirs...
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  • From jdbbrz27 on March 22, 2011
    I am again fascinated and amazed by your abilities and imagination. This is so much Inuyasha the lover of trees and all things of nature. Again you made me cry tears of wonder you can almost see the tree of time and the awe of nature through young Inuyasha's eyes as we all would have seen it as young children. Sesshomaru was marvelous to see the need in this poor anguished soul and to give it the salve to make it feel better. I loved this chappie I could just feel the love of all of them for sweet Inuyasha and you are so on the mark it's not time for sex just yet Inuyasha has some more healing first and Sessh taking him to the forest will go along way in makeing that healing come faster. Thank you so much you have done it again another fantastic story. Can't wait to find out who has awoken to try and kill our sweet little hanyou and what everyone will do to ensure his safety and survival.
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  • From midnightsweet on March 22, 2011
    yes it was very sweet. ha ha "sweet". sorry!!!!!! not fair, now we have to wait. update soon please
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  • From ANON - arya on March 22, 2011
    oh, i love this chapter!

    but i've been wondering, how come inuyasha has no seraph-aspect?
    or will that one awaken later?
    then the hanyou and human aspect were already awake before they became a slave of priests
    and the hanyou aspect split into pup and inuyasha and the demon aspect was awakened because
    of the collar...
    (just guessing; tell me when i'm wrong)

    anyhow, my compliments for the lovely story!!
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  • From ANON - shadowhawk on March 22, 2011
    Hehehehe...I just love how jealous Sesshou was of anyone getting Yasha attention...and HE DOES NOT WANT TO SHARE *that made me LOL and grinned like an idiot* ...can't wait for the next chapter and that last part have me at the edge of my seat, bouncing with excitement. best wishes and regards. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Angelsword on March 22, 2011
    Absolutely lovely, heartbreaking. I am so glad Inuyasha can cry again. I love the description of Inuyashas four elements looking at the forest for the first time.

    I'm not so sure about Miroku, I can understand him wanting to have his grandson to himself, but it would be so easy for him to become selfish and accidently hurt Inuyasha, especially as Inuyasha is so fragile it could only take the smallest mistep. I can't see inu giving up Sesshomaru but having to turn away from Miroku? It could be very easy to get into a lose/lose situation.

    Ps thanks for updating serpants and dog demons, two story updates in one day, how wonderful. Please update soon. (any story) :-)
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  • From ardentes on March 22, 2011
    I enjoy your stories and even though I love a good sex scene, I love the plot of a story even more. The wonder Inuyasha has at being in the forest was amazing. I really enjoyed that scene. I also like how possessive Sesshomaru is of Inuyasha. I liked this chapter a lot and I cannot wait to read more! I apologize if I haven't reviewed recently, but a lot of things came up at one time. Anyway, good luck with the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on March 15, 2011
    New Chapter!!!! Squeeee!!!

    Lovely look into the parentage of Inuyasha. I have to admit that I didn't quite understand how so much human and so little seraphim and youkai could produce someone so youkai looking as Inuyasha. I enjoyed Miroku's almost transformation and found it interesting that it took so many high level Seraphim to 'calm' him down. I wonder what Miroku has planned for his grandson?

    Do you think that there will be further issues with the humans?
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  • From ANON - elilont on March 14, 2011
    I love Miroku. :D:D The last part of the chapter had me grinning so wide...
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  • From midnightsweet on March 11, 2011
    thank you
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  • From ANON - shadowwolf03 on March 11, 2011
    It's been a while... glad to see your back to work on this story once more. But your timing was very good. I'm waiting to see how grandpa deals with one of the other personalities once they come to light.

    Overall I'm enjoying the direction and vibe of where this story is heading and how it's heading there. Thanks for sharing and don't get too offened if I don't review every chapter. If I could write I might not be such an avid reader. :-)
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