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By : ajj77sunhawk

From midnightsweet on November 29, 2010
man it's always something. update soon.
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From trystkinkou on November 28, 2010
;_; meeeewwwww!!! poor poor inuyasha. it wouldn't surprise me any if the wings in teh temple are his parent's. that woudl be just like those heartless witches. *snarls* they sooo need a good witch-slapping. i can't wait to see what you have planned next.
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From ANON - Tahirah on November 28, 2010
I have to say that i am in-love with your story. There is something about it that is soooo addictive to me. I love the way you have taken Shess and Inu and writen a story that hasn't been done before. You have showen that in this story unlike others half-breeds are truily treated theuyasha same as everyone else. But lets get down to it when are we going to get some lemon? Because really the sexual tention between them is soooooo thick plus also i think that in one of the chapters before it happens Inuyasha must face what rape/abuse happened out loud or it will haunt him forever
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From jdbbrz27 on November 28, 2010
Actually thank you for stopping hopefully only shortly because it's really hard to read with tears in your eyes. This story is just well beautiful and touching and yet exciting the explanations were mind blowing ingenius and I really thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us all can't wait to see what happens next. Although you are going to finish Strength and not just leave it please don't go breaking my heart.
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From ANON - river girl on November 28, 2010
I'm SO sorry to have to reviewed like usual for every chapter. My computer absolutely died and had to be taken to the shop, so
I've been off line.

That aside, Wow, you've done so much in these past few chapters! I still wonder at how fast Inuyasha is developing, but it makes some sense, as he kept three of his aspects bascially hidden and they are less affected and have now united with him. Actually, makes a lot of sense and I have to keep reminding myself how complicated Inuyasha is! I started wondering about Inuyasha's ancestry when you mentions the Serphim were coming. I like them very much, detailed and real to the story with a very short description that slid in easily. It's good to know that Inuyasha wasn't purposely left and having a mix of all three heritages certainly answers some questions about him. He grows more and more complex and I'm very curious to see how this will turn out.

Keep it up, I know you can do it!
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From ANON - Jillbean on November 28, 2010
Ah! Two more chapters done so quickly! I love it!
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From ANON - Shadowwolf03 on November 27, 2010
So, Inuyash has some Seraphim mixed in with Demon and Human (ha, ha). You caught me by surprise with that cliff hanger move. Now lets see where you go with it. As always very entertaining and enjoyable to read.
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From Vyper on November 27, 2010
I like that Inuyasha is doing well with Sesshoumaru praising him. It is about time that Inuyasha recieved the praise he deserves for all the years of hardship he had to endure.
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From ANON - angelsword on November 26, 2010
I tend to be impaitent, I'm waiting, waiting waiting for the next chapter and then here it is and so I gulp it down. It takes a few more reads to get all the details I miss the first time, thanks for explaining what is clearly in the chapter.

I also tend to focus on the story in front of me, I have read all your Inuyasha stories at AFF but I wasnt' thinking of them at the time of reviewing, I know I want more (I'm greedy that way) but really the details tend to be missed as I'm not thinking of them. By the way Survive is coming a very close 1st with The sacred trees and Strength. Serpant is last in my favourites but only because of the dialogue experiment which makes it hard to reread (which I do with all your stories regularlly). I hope eventually (after you finish it because I want to know what happens) you will go back and edit it to normal dialogue.

I hope you update quickly I really want to find out what happens next. :-)
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From ANON - eli on November 26, 2010
I love the story :) sometimes all the inuyasha/sesshoumaru fanfics tend to be more or less the same but you shoe there are really some new amazing ideas out there :D I am always looking forward to your updates, sooo coool
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From ANON - Princess Sin on November 26, 2010
this is getting exciting by the minute. what an
interesting tale to the creation of the shikon
no tama. one thing i want to know. is inuyasha,
only guessing, the descendant of the three
that fought for peace among the races. that
would explain why it's dark powers came after
inuyasha specificly. i am so looking forward
to the next c hapte. i wish it could be up
tomorrow.
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From jdbbrz27 on November 26, 2010
That was oh god that was beautiful at the ending I wanted to cry. This story is getting more intriguing by the chapter I'm telling you it's down right awesome and I love it. The shikon no tama story was extremely interesting a slight twist to the manga, anime story very cool can't wait for the next update.
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From ANON - angelsword on November 26, 2010
By the way I hope you explain why it was called four souls, when your explantion on included three, maybe Inuyasha fits way better than I had thought
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From ANON - angelsword on November 26, 2010
You keep getting better and better, which makes it hard to wait between each chapter. Are you going to be able to finish within NaNoMo or will you keep going, I can't see how you will be able to be done in the next couple of days and I want more (lots more) but I also want to see the rest of your stories continued as well.

As for guessing whats happening, didn't the temple grab inuyasha because of the light inside of him(so much more than theirs)? does this mean that he is a reincarnation (combination) of the three of peace. (I mean there are 4 of him but still). or at least the planets way of balancing the scales, if there is evil there must be good? He is Hanyou, demon and human so why not Seraph as well.

I loved the argument over the clothes and the sly way inu won. quick question "Yasha was sticked" did you mean that or possibly stricken or sickened?

I can't wait to "see" the others faces when/if Inuyasha changes before them, or are you going to keep that a shesh moment only?
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From ANON - Snowfall on November 25, 2010
Chapter 16: I love the comic relief that you insert into such a serious fic. It keeps the story from becoming too dark to bear. Sesshoumaru's teasing of Inuyasha and the subsequent argument between the aspects was very humorous. I have to wonder if Inu wasn't manipulating Pup and Yasha. And, I hope Inu gets a chance to meet Sesshoumaru without the other aspects.

It is so sweet of Inuyasha to watch over Kagura (and the rest of the healers), and fitting. I'm glad Sesshoumaru allowed it. BTW, in the first sentence, great impact with '--what was left of him.' Loved that! I'm glad that the Seraphim are willing to help. Kagura deserves to be healed and Manten...that was some severe punishment. Wow. I wonder if we'll see him again. If he was in Sesshomaru's court, he couldn't have been that bad. I hope Sesshoumaru didn't lose a great asset in losing him.

Oh, I can completely empathize with Inuyasha's behavior--doing exactly what he is told and not taking initiative. He will have to learn that he has the power to make his own decisions. The only problem is learning how to make them. He's used to being told exactly what to do without questioning. I'm sure he doesn't have a clue where to even begin weighing options. It's going to be a long hard road back to a semblance of normalcy. I wonder if his attachment to Sesshoumaru is partially a result of his feeling lost. Perhaps it is also why he doesn't say anything about sleeping in Sesshoumaru's bed. He's doing what he's told and doesn't know that there are other options to be had anyway. So, there are two reasons to accept it without questioning. With his exceptional sense of smell and natural wariness/alertness, I can't believe that he wouldn't know that he is sleeping in Sesshoumaru's bed and that Sesshoumaru is there every night.

It is sweet that Inuyasha is leaning toward Sesshoumaru, but Sesshoumaru needs to make sure that Inuyasha learns to stand on his own rather than become co-dependent. Otherwise, Inuyasha will be lost without him. Heh, the clothing incident is a positive sign. ^_^ I like that Sesshoumaru is taking it slow as well.

Oooh, loved your portrayal of Kouga! I didn't expect him to be there and he had his normal irreverent and cocky attitude. Huh, you made him a Seraphim. That's difficult to imagine, but I'm sure you'll help us out next chapter. Maybe we can learn more about the Seraphim in the next chapter?

Oooh, will the Seraphim know anything about how Inuyasha came to exist? I mean, how could he have just popped into being out of thin air? I can't wait to see what will happen with that. I hope he is some magically created being!

From what Kouga said, it sounds like the mass came from the collar and went into Manten. I was actually wondering if that would happen when the collar was destroyed, but I couldn't find any indications--and I did look! ^_^ Great plotting!

Very nice chapter! I'm trying really, really hard to make my beta side STFU. LOL
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