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Reviews for To Be The Alpha

By : Ilana
  • From ANON - Donald Hill on July 06, 2005
    This a great lemon and you should make the sequel to this
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  • From ANON - chanda on July 06, 2005
    I loved it I am not to big on m/m but this was a great story.. Good twist in the end.

    I would love to read a sequal to this story...

    Chanda
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on July 06, 2005
    This totally rocked. So hot, so different, so unique, so well written. I really enjoyed reading this one shot. Inu taking Sess the way he did as alpha was a real turn on. Very few fics allow Inu to be seme over Sess. And I laughed my ass off at the end when Kag ended up alpha over them both and then they get their payback when she turns human. Very nicely done. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2005
    yes. i gotta know about the new moons! :D
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  • From ANON - Lucky on July 05, 2005
    That was a very good one shot. I liked it alot. I think that u should make another chapter about kagome and when she is human. The would be very interesting if u ask me so I hope you do that, plz. Well gotta go bye
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  • From ANON - kiara703 on July 05, 2005
    hey really liked this one shot. would like to know if you'd add more to it.
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  • From Henrietta on July 05, 2005
    Whoa, this is lovely smut. Never thought the two, and three could be so hot. You've got writing guts!
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  • From ANON - FayeMegan on July 05, 2005
    wow! I love it. A sequel would be very nice! Two inu boys dominating Kagome? what could be better than that!
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  • From ANON - ldymoonluvsinuyasha on July 04, 2005
    Wow, that was some pretty strong stuff. I liked the twist in the end though, hey, you can' t have the cookies without the milk right? It was a good story.
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  • From ANON - C-chan on July 04, 2005
    I most say that this was an unusual choice for me to read b/c I normally don't read yaoi stories, especially ones that involve incest. But, I know in the mind of a dog there isn't much, if any, disgression when it comes to mating. It's about dominance and who's the alpha when a pack is involved. With that in mind for Inuyasha and Sesshomaru, I decided to give this fic a try. And, not that I'm an expert on m/m relationships, since I am female, I think that your love scene for Inu and Sess was pretty good for a first attempt at writing yaoi. I know I couldn't have done it.

    Anyways, I guess I should say my favorite part of the whole fic was the end. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru should have known who would be the dominate one in their three-way relationship, and it wasn't going to be either one of them. LOL Who's the bitch now? 'Not I,' says Kagome. haha.

    Well, good story. It surprised me that I enjoyed it. You have a good writing style, and I look forward to reading anything else you write in the future. I'd like to read a Inu/Kag fic, if you ever feel like writing one. Kagome yelling at Inuyasha to 'sit' in the middle of their little tryst by the well was priceless, and I think you could write a humourous lemon for the two of them. ^_^ ja!
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  • From ANON - Eiko on July 04, 2005
    OMG!!!! that was great.
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  • From ANON - bettychan on July 04, 2005
    Love it.
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  • From ANON - Twilight18 on July 04, 2005
    ok that was just.............. wow i mean i dont even have words to say it was just omg that was good i tell ya dont let anybody tell ya different i hope that there may be more to it cant wait to see if there is.
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