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By : LordYouko
  • From ANON - on July 05, 2016

    I can't REMEMBER WITCH EPISODE it was that Sesshomaru thought back to what INU TAISHO ALWAYS TOLD HIM; BUT IT DID HAVE SOMETHING TO DO WITH PROTECTING SOMEONE? It could have been the Episode were Sessaru brings Rin back to life? I WAS SHOCKED THAT SESSHOMARU GROWLED AT HIS OWN MOTHER?


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  • From ANON - on July 05, 2016

    Tell Me Ur Answer At ((  ZeneMcClain97@gmail.com )) I'd like to know Ur REAL NAME "IF" Ur Okay "WITH Me KNOWING Ur REAL NAME?"


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  • From ANON - on July 05, 2016

    U COULD HAVE HAD SESSHOMAU REALIZED THAT HE'S ( IN LOVE ) WITH INUYASHA!  I've READ this before & was wandering IF Ur gong to END IT WITH SESSHOMARU TAKING INUYASHA AS HIS MATE (AND) INUYASHA BECOMES A FULL BLOODED DEMON, MAYBE HAVE SOME PUPS IN THE END?


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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on May 27, 2016
    I can think of places Jaken can put that beak of his. 1. Up Sesshomarus ass, 2. In the ass of a mule, 3. In the ass of a HUMAN. I Know that being toughed by ANY HUMAN mush less having his beak in ones ass, he'd just might ask Sesshomaru Father to cut his beak off just toget all the HUMAN gurms off.
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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on May 27, 2016
    Make it were Inuyasha says I Love You, to Sesshomaru. When Sesshomaru asks to talk to His Mother and His Father alone with Inuyasha asleep in Sesshomaru Lap. Sesshomaru says "I have something to say, it's about Inuyasha." Sesshomaru's petting him as he sleeps, looking up, Sesshomaru "I think I'm fulling in Love with him." looking back down at the sleeping hanyou. Sesshomaru Mother just Passes Out Right there were she was standing. His Father looks from his Son to his Mate and back then says "I never would have thought that out of every one here, You'd be the one to cause her to pass out and I'd live to see it but I'm not suprised that you'd full for him, I will not get in your way if it comes to Inuyasha any more but your will try to get you to change your mind and no doubt think that I'm the reason you've gone soft but your just like me in some ways, one of them is not being easy to breaks." You do the rest, if it gets any better you might find me giving you more ideas and you could end up have this story go to 100 or more with me giving you ideas but that's just the way I am, I'm a reader or what youcould call a Bookworm kind of reader and not a Bookworm eater.
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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on May 27, 2016
    What would you say if Sesshomaru walked into his room and was thinking about fucking HIS PET but to find HIS PET has TURNED into a HUNMAN, Sesshomaru is shocked (Dose not show it.) Sesshomaru says "Inuyasha what is the meaning of this, why do you try to hide fron this Sesshomaru," Inuyasha answers with "It's not you I'm hiding from but your Mother, you know she dosen't like me, think about what she'll do to me if she knew about." This time Sesshomaru shows he's shocked that the the Hanyou was doing something smart for once, whan Sesshomaru gets over him being shocked, Sesshomaru asks "how long has this been happing." Inuyasha answers "As long as I can remember, it onley happens on the first night of the new moon that I turn Human for five days, before you found me, I was Lucky that I lived this long and that men never came dearing this time or I'd be dead right now and be here with you." Sesshomaru just looks at him for a secand then walks over to him grabs Inuyasha by the back of his neck to get a better look at him, Sesshomaru lifts his head up making Inuyasha look at him and says "You're cuter this way but we need to find someone you can trust, do you know any one you trust." Inuyasha nodes his head. Says you can find him at a Demon slayer villget, I don't think it's must a Demon slayer villget if you let Demon Kids live there, his name is Miroku, his known for his wind tounle, just watch out for Sango and her Boomerang and her Demon cat Kayla and if she dose try to hit you with her Boomerang don't kill her or any one there please, Sango and Miroku took care of me when the others did't, I think Miroku likes Sango but tell her, tell them I miss them, Okey." Looking Sesshomaru in the ayes. Sesshomaru smarcks at this and says "So Cute." Then kisses Inuyasha. Can you put more detail in when Sesshomaru is Fucking Inuyasha, please. You can do the rest, I will Bookmarke this for later readings, keep it up you doing great. Need more ideas go to> ZenaMcClain97@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on May 27, 2016
    When Inuyasha get hurt by one of Sesshomaru fathers gusts own hanyous ans Inuyasha says something to Sesshomaru Mother, Sesshomaru and his father chuckle, ever one in the room mouth drop open in shock of hearing Sesshomaru chuckling at somthing funny for once, when Sesshomaru and Inuyasha get Back to Sesshomaru bedroom, he rewards Inuyasha by fucking him, as Sesshomaru dose, Inuyasha gose and grabs Sesshomaru face and kisses him, shocked at what he did Inyuyasha stars muttering, Sesshomaru stops him by kissing him back with a little bite of force. Is Lord Sesshomaru fulling in LOVE with his Pet HANYOU, no one in the castle sees this but his Mother and Father do and his Father hopes Sesshomaru just might take the Hanyou as his mate, he has known that Sesshomaru has had no liking to women he chosed for his son in the past. Can Sesshomaru'Father get Sesshomaru to Full in LOVE with Inuyasha, without Sesshomaru ever knowing what he's doing?
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  • From ANON - Shard on October 05, 2015
    Hi.

    Just wanted to let you know that your fic has some formatting errors.

    style='color:black'> apperes at the start of every paragraph of part 13. just thought i'd let you know
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  • From ANON - Vitzy on May 22, 2015
    This story was such a gem of a find. I have no clue about this manga/anime but this story was so captivating and so beautifully written that my ignorance of the charcters/ show was completely unimportant. I loved your characterisation. I loved the relationships that your characters had. And the description of each scene - the depth and wisdom of the royal family. It reflects greatly not only on your skill as a writer but also your personality, maturity and character. This was such a delight to read. I hope you continue with the sequel one day, I will certainly read it!
    Best Wishes,

    -Vitzy-
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  • From ANON - lv90047 on February 08, 2015
    Oh my Gosh! Such a lovely story! I enjoyed this from the beginning til the end! You're a fantastic writer! You wrote them all so beautifully! I do hope to read more of you soon!
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  • From ANON - kandy gurl on October 05, 2014
    yes i think you should do a sequel i reread stories every few years and this is still one of my favorite i look forward to your sequel.
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  • From yokishko on September 18, 2014
    Just wanted to point out that chapter 13 is kinda hard to read, the entire thing is riddled with html codes that are intermingled with the text... The other instances that the codes appeared in-text throughout the story was easy to ignore since it wasn't anywhere and everywhere, but chapter 13 seriously needs a check up.
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  • From ANON - Leah on November 18, 2013
    I only found this fanfic a few days ago, but I completely loved it!! I'm so sad it's finished :'( the story is brilliant in terms of emotion and understanding their relationships. I take my hat off to you :)
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  • From ANON - Lillie chan on July 04, 2013
    Loving this so far wow!!!! Speechless!
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  • From mistic-willow on May 19, 2013
    just wanted to say i love the book, honesty felt like i was there living it as i read, its not often i find a book that takes me to that frame of mind but yours did, hope to read more stories from you later on, have a great day blessed be :)
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